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      <title>4CL Unit 4 Writing - DSE2017 Q9 A Letter to the Editor by Chun-yin Jeffrey LIU</title>
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      <pubDate>2019-04-10 04:07:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Topic Sentence 1</title>
         <author>jeffreyliu</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is undoubtedly true that fresh university graduates just work smarter than those in the past.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-10 23:26:03 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Example 1</title>
         <author>jeffreyliu</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The new fresh graduates are equipped with more IT and social skills, so they are able to work faster and smarter than others. When they leave, others may think they are just less hard-working, but the truth is they can just spend less time finishing the same amount of work compared to others.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-10 23:27:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Topic sentence 2A</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div> Many Hong Kong fresh graduates had a larger chance to study further academic in Hong Kong and overseas  studies </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 01:54:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is not smart for people to trust a opinion without a prove.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 01:56:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Topic sentence 6A</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>According to the latest research，many fresh university graduates make some new jobs in the social</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 01:57:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Topic sentence 6T</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Many Hong Kong university graduates is very hard-working</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 01:57:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Topic sentence 6M<br>It is no doubtedly true that the HK fresh university graduates are willing to face challenges to develop them own business . Therefore ,HK fresh university  graduates are willing to face challenges compared to those in the pass. O</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 01:58:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Topic sentence 5A</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is undoubtedly true that fresh university graduates use more entertainment to make for fun</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 01:58:25 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Topic sentence 2T</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>According to the latast research , many  Hong Kong fresh university graduates are less hard-less willing to face challenges in the social work<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 01:58:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Topic sentence 1M</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is commonly believed that some of the new university graduates who always enjoy the entertainment such as social applications or cyber world.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 01:59:21 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Topic sentence T</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is doubtless that the fresh graduators want to change job in order to gain more working experience. This shows that the graduators are learning in a proactive way.<br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>Topic Sentence 1</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is commonly believed that fresh university graduates are less hard-working and less willing to face challenges than before,however,one should not ignore the fact that they are more talented than graduates in the past.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:00:41 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Topics sentences 2</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Many people think that the Hong Kong university graduates is less hardworking because of change job frequently </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:01:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Topic sentences 2E</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is undoubtedly true that fresh university graduates just having more entertainment than those in the past </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:01:47 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Example 1 2A</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Many graduates would had a larger change to study a higher academic such as PHD and doctor to perform a higher opportunity on finding a job. Moreover ,they can also study overseas such as Stanford university and Cambridge to get a higher chance getting a larger amount of salaries </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:01:53 UTC</pubDate>
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         <author>yzhou079</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Example  6M<br>4 university graduates from HK Chinese university develop a app to help the new patient to recognise the development of the new born body</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:03:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Example T</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/jeffreyliu/8r0lsj4bjwu1/wish/350614820</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div> People often misunderstood that they change job just for some more salary job. However, they change job in a frequent rate is actually for more and more experience in the society nowadays. In this way, they can know what they like to do and eventually find a correct career that fits them the most.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:04:23 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>1T          Topic +  Argument                                                                       It is commonly believed that Hong Kong fresh university graduates are less hardworking ,however,one should not be fact that nowadays people are being lazy as they always play Facebook,ig or other entertainment. I saw it everywhere I had gone .Those people was using their phone in the train,even in their office, so we can say that it is not true for fresh university graduates is less hardworking than people in the past.If you  still standing for your idea. You are outnumbered.</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>   </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:04:24 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Example 5A</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The new fresh graduates are equipped to find a new job, so they are able to use the entertainment to communicate with different people to find a job that they like or not, when they use the entertainment, others may think that they are less hard-working,but they are truth is they can use the entertainment to find a job.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:04:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>They change their jobs frequetly not cause of their laziness. The have high academic level is the major reason. They have more job opportunities than the past so they can choose a suitable job. I believe that they will be work-harding when they find their favourite job.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:05:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Topic sentence <br>Nowadays there are many different work .University graduates can choose their favourite work .If they have a favourite job, they will work hard.If they get an unsuitable job ,they will be less-hard-working</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:05:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Argument 1M</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ol><li>However one should not ignore the fact that actually they can enhance their capability of critical mind through identifying the information from internet whether it is true or false. <strong><mark>For example, as a reporter having obvious identifying ability to all resources of news is a must</mark></strong>.Therefore they can make a chose more better or effectively in workplace as well as in usual</li></ol>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:05:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Most of the new fresh graduates come from a wealthier background.(2M)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>That’s why they aren't work so hard , their family can support their daily life.This also means they won’t get nervous by quitting their job or none of boss want them . They only need to focus on the job isn’t their favourite.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:06:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/jeffreyliu/8r0lsj4bjwu1/wish/350615192</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>There is no data to support the opinion that Hong Kong fresh university graduates are less hardworking because of they have more entertainment than the past.But according to the latest research, their work more effective than the past, not only because they have more knowledge, they use the technology well to improve their work. They make less wrong and work faster.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:06:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Topic sentence 5M</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It’s undeniably  that lots of Hong Kong new university graduates are  more passive  then the past university graduates </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:08:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Example1 2T</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Example 1<br>Most people think the Hong Kong fresh graduates don’t work hard during their work. People may think the fresh graduates always change jobs frequently and easily because of their excuses ,such as they work enough money salary.Therefore,people don’t like the fresh graduates nowadays.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:09:55 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Example 6A</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Nowadays, most of fresh university graduates make some new jobs in social such as e-sports, online shop and stem. As a result, they become successful people easier than before. It is undoubtedly true that they are not lazy or less willing to face challenges because they created the new jobs.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:10:10 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Example6T </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>For instance,The 21 years old Hong Kong university graduate , he create a shop to selling accessories .And he make $1500 million by years  . He make many moneys , but he has not a good mark in DSE .He has success , it is because he is very hard-working . So many university graduates is hard-working.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:11:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Example 2</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Nowadays Hong Kong’s financial system requires high knowledge,so that the Hong Kong graduates need to always change their work to get more job experiences for a better high pay job.As the Hong Kong ‘s financial system ,graduates may want a high pay job to support their home’s financial.Also, they change job frequently is able to find the most suitable job for themselves.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>According to the latest research , most of the Hong Kong fresh university graduates had lots of the opportunities to choose their favourite job. Therefore , they change the jobs frequently and easily to find the favourite job.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Nowadays,,the fresh university graduates can experience different kinds of job before they leave the university as government give them a lot of support.For instance,giving them some chances to go other company working,As a result,they are already know which kinds of jobs are suitable by themselves.when they can choose their favourite job,they will try more time to work hard in their job,so they face more challenges in their job.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Why new fresh graduates change jobs frequetly and easily?it is because they work very hard.They will think that they work so hard already .but still having this income . They will want to find a better job .The job income is not related to his work </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:15:03 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Topic sentences1E</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is important for study to find the job by themself don‘t rely your parent and don‘t find the jod through the internet.I my opinion that nowaday many people find the job by useing the internet but some of the internet is deception so that many study in order to go to the lavatory they will stay at home to find their jod in the internet</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Topic sentence 6E</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is commonly believed that fresh university graduates focus on material enjoyment. It is because of the social atmosphere. There parents are accumulated a lot of wealth when the economy takes off  so they do not need there children to support in financial </div>]]></description>
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         <title>Example 5M</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It’s commonly believed that the fresh university graduates usually using mober phone for entertainment, for instance,<br>Checking Facebook  and IG on phone and chatting with friends.However,one should not ignore the face that as the internet   grow , learning through electrical appliances is very normal such as they do their work in the computer .</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-11 02:22:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Argument 1</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>As Hong Kong has shifted into a knowledge-based economy, jobs such as engineers require employees to have high intelligence and creativity. Therefore, graduates need to come up with innovative and smart ideas or plans which should not be something to be rushed. Time is needed for graduates to better finish their work and people may view it as a sigh of laziness which is not the case at all  </div>]]></description>
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