https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77 en-us 2018-02-28 16:13:51 UTC 2026-01-04 09:30:24 UTC hello@padlet.com tshephard1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236485474 Bell Ringer: Look back through "Homeroom Zombies" and locate one sentence that is the most effective at conveying epstein's argument (claim). Why did you choose this sentence?]]> 2018-02-28 16:14:18 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236485474 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487049 "Adolescentes who don't get enough rest have more learning, heath, behavior and mood problems than students who get at least nine hours a night." I choose this because it gets the main idea in one sentence and gets a great point across. ]]> 2018-02-28 16:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487049 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487541 " Adolescentes who don't get enough rest have more learning, health, behavior and mood problems than students who get at least nine hours a night." ( line 6-8) I chose this sentence because it correctly displayed why sleep is important for adolescents and what happens if you don't get a lot of rest.]]> 2018-02-28 16:17:20 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487541 ilikecake_mj https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487782 (line 1, 2, 3)"Adolesents who don't get enough rest have more learning, heath, behavior, and mood probloms than students who get at least nine hours a night." I chose this because it shows that when adolesents get more sleep they get the less at risk they are to the symptoms.]]> 2018-02-28 16:17:41 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487782 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487887 "Adolescents who don't get enough rest have more learning, health, behavior and mood problems than students who get at least nine hours a night." (line 10) I chose this sentence because it really gives a powerful message on how badly sleep deprived kids health can be affected which is really important. ]]> 2018-02-28 16:17:48 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487887 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487901 "Keep TV and video games in the family room, not the bedroom. Teens are less likely to stay up late if these entertainment options are less accessible. Moving these activities out of the bedroom also gives parents a more realistic picture of when their kids really go to sleep." I chose this quote because I feel like now-a-days kids are always up late nights on their phones, which causes them to go to sleep later, which effects them in the morning when they wake up and have to go to school.]]> 2018-02-28 16:17:49 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487901 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487907 "If I do, there are days when a third of the class falls asleep."

I chose the sentence because it proves that teens don't get a good night sleep. Wether teachers give them endless amount of homework 
(or they don't do it) or they go on there phone at night. Teens get a lot of homework as they gat higher into there high school years. So that may mean they are on their laptop a lot. Because of the light of the laptop and their endless amount of homework agenda, they stay up late because of the homework and the light just makes it worse because it gives them a hard time when they are trying to go to sleep. And since they probably all wake up at 7:00 or earlier they beryl get any sleep. This is also bad and dangers for them. Its dangers for the eyes, that may be why you have glasses (maybe).
It ca also kill you because of the fact that you are exhausted it will kill you because you don't have any energy.

sorry I wrote a lot I like writing
(kind of)

]]> 2018-02-28 16:17:50 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487907 stnakam1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487990 " "
This sentence represents the claim, I]]> 2018-02-28 16:17:56 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236487990 stacuster2 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488065 "Adolescents who don't get enough rest have more learning, health, behavior and mood problems than students who get at least nine hours a night." I chose this sentence because it tells you why should get enough sleep by telling you the dangers of not getting sleep.]]> 2018-02-28 16:18:03 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488065 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488152 Teens can be incorrectly diagnosed with ADHD when sleep deprivation is the source of their symptoms.

I chose this sentence because in my claim I talked about help not getting the right amount of sleep can effect teens negatively.]]> 2018-02-28 16:18:08 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488152 stlhudson5 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488175 The sentence I chose was, "Perpetual lack of sleep is tied to diabetes, obesity, depression, and a shortened life span in adults." (line 9-10)

I chose this sentence because when you think about the consequences of lack of sleep, and even the consequences of all of the things in the sentence, really makes you think about your choices. ]]> 2018-02-28 16:18:10 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488175 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488197 Educate your kids about sleep. Teens need to understand that their bodies require at least 9 hours of sleep a day in order for them to do their best in school and enjoy their social lives. I chose  this 
sentence because it shows that sleep is very important.
line 45]]> 2018-02-28 16:18:12 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488197 fishish https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488402 Line 1: "As the school year kicks off, parents are once again struggling to cajole and, if need be, drag their exhausted teens out of bed."

I chose this sentence because it shows clearly that adolescents are tired and aren't getting enough sleep.]]> 2018-02-28 16:18:30 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488402 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488610 "later teachers get a close up view of sleep deprivation's effects as bleary students zone out and even doze off in class"I chose this quote because it displays how lack if sleep is effecting kids and teens]]> 2018-02-28 16:18:43 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488610 stnlevitt1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488711 "lack of sleep is tied to diabetes, obesity, depression...shorter life span." I chose this line because it explains the health side effects of low sleep for adolecesents.]]> 2018-02-28 16:18:49 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236488711 stteverett1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236490795 I know from the text that a lack of sleep can lead to trouble like death,bad grades in school and more]]> 2018-02-28 16:21:26 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236490795 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236491168 (line 8)"teens may bebe incorrectly diagnosed with ADHD when sleep deprivation is actually the source of their symptoms". I chose this sentence because it is supporting the claim that lack of sleep can have negative consequences.]]> 2018-02-28 16:21:55 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236491168 jordannn_ok https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236491262 I chose the sentence, "Adolescents who don't get enough rest have more learning, health, behavior and mood problems than students who get at least 9 hours a night," because, it shows how not getting enough sleep is a problem.]]> 2018-02-28 16:22:04 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/236491262 gummy_bear https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134021 "Lack of sleep can be especially deadly for teens; car accidents are the leading cause of death among adolescents, and safety experts believe drowsy driving is a major factor."
This relates to the authors claim, which is "lack of sleep can cause bad things" in this case lack of sleep can cause car accidents. This is an appeal to pathos/emotion.

]]> 2018-03-01 19:22:19 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134021 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134038 "Keep TV and video games in the family room, not in the bed room. Teens are less likely to stay up late if these entertainment options are less accessible". I choose this sentence because a lot of teens are on their phones and electronics so they stay up on their phones and then they do not get a good night sleep and wake up tired and get bad grades.]]> 2018-03-01 19:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134038 ahhahahah https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134067 "lack of sleep is tied to diabetes, obesity, depression... shorter life span in adults." I chose this sentence because I am pretty sure no one wants these conditions.]]> 2018-03-01 19:22:24 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134067 stksheawood1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134272 "Teens need to understand that their bodies require at least nine hours of sleep a day I order for them to do their best in school and enjoy there social lives".Line 45
I chose this sentence because it informs you about how much sleep you need to do well in life and that if you don't get the proper amount of sleep then you will have trouble secede ing in life]]> 2018-03-01 19:22:38 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134272 stlannegarn12 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134290 That image may make you laugh but lack of sleep is no joke

]]> 2018-03-01 19:22:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134290 stbcampbell1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134328 Line 10, " Lack of sleep can be especially deadly for teens: car accidents are the leading cause of death among adolescents, and safety experts believe drowsy driving is a major factor." That quote impacted me a lo because adolescents are losing their lives, and all because they crawl into bed to late and get up too early. ]]> 2018-03-01 19:22:42 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134328 stnficca https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134341 " adolescents who don't get enough rest have more learning, health, behavior and mood problems then student who get at least nine hours a night." I chose this sentence because the claim is that lack of sleep leads to health problems and this gives them.]]> 2018-03-01 19:22:44 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134341 stodeviine1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134402 I choose this first line because kids don't getting much sleep so they are very tired and they never want to get up in the morning. so they should go to bed earlier]]> 2018-03-01 19:22:49 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134402 stnsuhrbier1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134537 "lack of sleep of sleep is no joke,"
this help emphasis the authors claim by showing the seriousness of lack of sleep. it hints that there must be repercussions of lack of sleep. It also shows many people do not take sleep deprivation seriously even though they should. ]]> 2018-03-01 19:23:00 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134537 stakline2 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134604 teens may be incorrectly diagnossed with ADHD when sleep deprivation is actually the source of their symptoms. line 8 . i chose this one because it really speaks to parents about how their child may have a disease that they dont actually have]]> 2018-03-01 19:23:05 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134604 stlbaldwin2 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134657 I chose the sentence on line 6-8 because it shows the consequences on not getting enough sleep like learning or behavior.]]> 2018-03-01 19:23:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134657 starollins1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134834 2018-03-01 19:23:24 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237134834 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237135031 I choose line 10 Lack of sleep can be especially deadly for teens, car accidents are the leading cause of death among adolescents and safety experts believe drowsy driving is a major factor.]]> 2018-03-01 19:23:41 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237135031 kittykittenface https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237135121 "lack of sleep can be especially deadly for teens; car accidents are the leading cause of death among adolescents, and safety experts believe drowsy driving is a major factor." I think this is the most effective sentence because it uses emotion, logic, and expert opinions. this really gives the sentence that edge. ]]> 2018-03-01 19:23:48 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237135121 oxo_salem https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237135132 "adolescents who don't get enough rest have more learning, heath, behavior, and mood problems than students who get at least nine hours a night" I thought this is a conveying sentence because it almost scares you. No one was any of those things and having a chance of getting them scares you]]> 2018-03-01 19:23:48 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237135132 sthwinters1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237135359 The sentence I found was "Perpetual lack of sleep is tied to diabetes, heart disease, obesity, depression and a shortened life span in adults". I thought this was the overall concept or main idea of the story. ]]> 2018-03-01 19:24:06 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237135359 starollins1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237135604 " A lack of sleep can be ecspecially dangerous for teens."

I chose the sentence because it proves that teens don't get a good night sleep. Wether teachers give them endless amount of homework 
(or they don't do it) or they go on there phone at night. Teens get a lot of homework as they get higher into there high school years. So that may mean they are on their laptop a lot. Because of the light of the laptop and their endless amount of homework agenda, they stay up late because of the homework and the light just makes it worse because it gives them a hard time when they are trying to go to sleep. This also how they get diabetese, obesity, car accidents, depression  ]]> 2018-03-01 19:24:28 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237135604 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237136018 Lack of sleep can be especially deadly for teens. this shows how important sleep is for adolescents.]]> 2018-03-01 19:25:06 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237136018 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237136055 "set rules. Forbidding teens to drive after 11p.m (when they are most likely to knod off) won't win Mom and Dad any popularity contests, but it can save lives." IT CAN REALLY OPEN UP PARENTS EYES. That is also pathos that appeals to emotion]]> 2018-03-01 19:25:08 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237136055 heyhey https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237136060 I choose a line]]> 2018-03-01 19:25:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237136060 iuiebb https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237136437 with no sleep you could get in a car crash]]> 2018-03-01 19:25:39 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237136437 stkedmomds1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237136609 Line 10 " Lack of sleep can be especially deadly for teens car accident are the leading cause of death among adolescents, and safety experts believe drowsy driving is a major factor."]]> 2018-03-01 19:25:52 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237136609 towlneckporter https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237136902 My sentence is " Boyle, the teacher in Massachusetts, talks one-on-one with students who repeatedly fall asleep in class about the importance of sleep and calls parents if the problem continues. "These aren't bad kids," she says. "Often, they're highly motivated, spending hours on homework and also working to save money for college. If you talk to them, you can have a big impact."

]]> 2018-03-01 19:26:20 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237136902 stodeviine1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237142729 2018-03-01 19:35:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237142729 kittykittenface https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237374553 2018-03-02 13:21:47 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/8q2c2i9z0v77/wish/237374553