[S201 Editorials & Visual Text] T2W4-5 Language Arts Lesson by Rachel Oh

Group H

kim_wong_yan_ning — 2020-04-13 04:19:05 UTC

- several PEELs, with points first then back up with explanation and evidence

- connectors
- persuasive language such as modal verbs
- present tense throughout
- use of passive voice

Group C

2020-04-13 04:19:17 UTC

Thesis statement, PEEL used (in different orders) especially Evidence (since this is supposed to be persuasive)

Group D

2020-04-13 04:20:03 UTC

- Well organised structure
- Introduction para: Talks about the topic being discussed
- Longer paragraphs than usual newspapers
- Provide discussions
- Point, Explanation, Evidence, Link (PEEL)

Group C

2020-04-13 04:20:13 UTC

Use of modal verbs
Use of sentence connectors
Passive voice
It provides opinions
It is subjective
Use of Hedging words

Group E

2020-04-13 04:20:18 UTC

- chronological

. PEELs

- passive and active voice
- third person's view
- subjective

GROUP F

2020-04-13 04:21:24 UTC

PEEEL

Group B

2020-04-13 04:21:24 UTC

1. Claim (Thesis)
2. Elaboration
3. Explain (Reason)
* can have several 2 & 3
4. Link (Summary)

Group AJ

2020-04-13 04:22:05 UTC

- PEEEL
- The claim (or thesis) at the start of every paragraph, then reason/elaboration, then statistics, then we have the link

Group D

2020-04-13 04:22:14 UTC

- Passive voice
- Not many pronouns
- Arguments/opinions
- Present tense

Group D

cayden_kang_yang_yi — 2020-04-13 04:22:48 UTC

Hedging

No full stop at the end of sentence

Passive voice

Present tense
Logo
Pathos

Group E

2020-04-13 04:22:51 UTC

Logos (arguments)
biased/ subjective

Group B

2020-04-13 04:22:57 UTC

1. Claim
2. Reason
3. Evidence
4. Link

Group B

2020-04-13 04:23:02 UTC

- passive voice
- present tense
- persuasive language (Pathos)
- Subjective

group E

2020-04-13 04:23:03 UTC

- chronological
- Claim, reason, evidence, link
- third person's view
- well organised
- subjective

Group E

2020-04-13 04:23:22 UTC

Hedging
Wide and precise vocabulary
Pathos; use of adjectives to describe the severity
Logos; shows the positive and negative characteristics in the news report.

Group C

2020-04-13 04:23:34 UTC

- PEEEL
- Introduction, Body, Conclusion

Group G

2020-04-13 04:23:51 UTC

Peeel
intro, body, tail

Group AJ

2020-04-13 04:24:03 UTC

- Persuasive language
- 3rd person POV
- Logos and Pathos
- Opinions
- Subjective
- Modal Verbs

Group H

kim_wong_yan_ning — 2020-04-13 04:24:05 UTC

- PEEL
- connectors
- persuasive language such as modal verbs
- present tense throughout

Group G

2020-04-13 04:24:33 UTC

Past tense
Persuasive - logos, pathos, ethos
third person pov

Group AJ

2020-04-13 04:24:38 UTC

- PEEEL
- The claim (or thesis) at the start of every paragraph, then reason/elaboration, then statistics, then we have the link

Group H

kim_wong_yan_ning — 2020-04-13 04:26:11 UTC

- Context/BG info in the first paragraph
- The second part is more about other possible views that one might take
- Argument is in the final paragraph
- for claims and reasoning (PEEL), it always starts with points first then back up with explanation and evidence

Group B

2020-04-13 04:27:10 UTC

- passive voice
- present tense
- persuasive language (Pathos)
- Subjective

Group G

2020-04-13 04:28:31 UTC

- Chronological order
- PEEEL

Group F

2020-04-13 04:31:19 UTC

Pathos
Logos
Ethos
Opinions
Modal Verbs
Subjectivity
Persuasive Language

Group AJ

2020-04-13 04:31:35 UTC

- Persuasive language
- 3rd person POV
- Logos and Pathos
- Opinions
- Subjective
- Modal Verbs

Group F

2020-04-13 04:33:39 UTC

Pathos
Logos
Use of hedging words
Use of persuasive language
Use of modal verbs

Group F

2020-04-13 04:34:59 UTC

Claim
PEEEL

Group G

2020-04-13 04:54:24 UTC

Third POV
persuasive terms
opinions
PEEEL

Group H

kim_wong_yan_ning — 2020-04-13 10:33:42 UTC

Group C

2020-04-13 23:42:20 UTC

Opinions given
Modal verbs
Persuasive language
Hedging words
Passive voice
Subjective and not objective

Group C

2020-04-14 00:00:51 UTC

PEEL
Thesis statement

Xavier

2020-04-15 03:29:25 UTC

Definition: used as a means of convincing an audience via the authority or credibility of the persuader, be it a notable or experienced figure in the field or even a popular celebrity.
Example: As a doctor, I am qualified to tell you that this course of treatment will likely generate the best results.

Natania

2020-04-15 03:29:45 UTC

Ethos is to convince the audience

Ethos

cipherzero — 2020-04-15 03:29:52 UTC

The use of credibility and trust

Quotes from professional, customer reviews, celebrity endorsements

Kim

kim_wong_yan_ning — 2020-04-15 03:30:02 UTC

Ethos is about the credibility of the person or product, it refers to the trustworthiness that it holds with the user/audience.

For example, when a shop is selling adidas shoes at a really low price but the shop is known to buy their products from piracy brands, therefore the ethos is absent.

2020-04-15 03:30:10 UTC

Kaung

iambadman — 2020-04-15 03:30:27 UTC

Ethos refers to the credibility or ethics of the person trying to persuade someone.
For example, if a principal uses his authority (credibility) to tell off students to not use their cell phones during class.

Tiffany

yee_jia_hui_tiffany — 2020-04-15 03:30:51 UTC

Ethos is an ethical appeal, means to convince an audience of the author's credibility or character.
An example is that advertisements ask celebrities to advertise their products for them

Cayden

cayden_kang_yang_yi — 2020-04-15 03:30:53 UTC

Ethos is an appeal to ethic which depend on credibility.
Eg: dentists can recommend toothpaste and people will listen to the dentist

Caley

caley_kor_xin_yu — 2020-04-15 03:31:07 UTC

Ethos refers to credibility or trustworthiness.

Ethos can be shown by showing expertise.
"As someone who has been doing this for 10 years..."

Ryan Tan 23

heylookitsawildryan — 2020-04-15 03:31:08 UTC

Ethos refers to credibility; trustworthy
eg. "Studies show that..."
"4 out of 5 dentists recommend"
"experts suggest that"

Pathos

cipherzero — 2020-04-15 03:31:09 UTC

The use of emotional appeal

heart warming stories, personal experiences, funny jokes

Group C

alphaeus_goh_guan_wei — 2020-04-15 03:31:15 UTC

Kim

kim_wong_yan_ning — 2020-04-15 03:31:17 UTC

Pathos is about the emotional appeal that the product is targeting towards the audience, this might be appealing to their fears or to vanity.

For example, promoting an insurance plan to someone by promoting that the benefits include blah blah blah.

Ryan The

theboii — 2020-04-15 03:31:24 UTC

Ethos:
- Ethics
- Convince people through credibility
- "The doctor said that this course of treatment will likely generate the best results."

Ethos

phang_qian_ci — 2020-04-15 03:31:31 UTC

Credibility, impressions
A commercial about a specific brand of toothpaste says that 4 out of 5 dentists use it.

Thaddeus Leong

2020-04-15 03:31:36 UTC

Ethos is when an argument is constructed based on the ethics or credibility of the person making the argument
9 out of 10 dentists approve of this toothpaste.

Ethos is to persuade people and to convince them through credibility.

alphaeus_goh_guan_wei — 2020-04-15 03:31:41 UTC

An example: "An advertisement stated that 4 out of 5 dentists recommend this brand of toothpaste. Hence, people will be persuaded to buy the toothpaste.

Kaung

iambadman — 2020-04-15 03:31:51 UTC

Pathos refers to the emotions felt by the person being persuaded. It can be used to make the person feel positive or negative emotions.
E.g.
+: Drop a coin in this box and this puppy will have a happy home!
-:

Tiffany

yee_jia_hui_tiffany — 2020-04-15 03:31:52 UTC

Pathos is the emotional appeal, means to persuade an audience by appealing to their emotions.
Example: If we don't move soon, we're all going to die!

Ariana

ariana_binte_iskandar_meirza — 2020-04-15 03:31:58 UTC

Ethos refers to the trustworthiness of a person; credibility and reputation.
For example, a dentist is advertising a certain brand of toothpaste.

Logos

cipherzero — 2020-04-15 03:31:59 UTC

The use of logical arguments

Statistics, facts, and strong debates using math and science facts

Ethos refers to credibility

tay_shao_yang_joel — 2020-04-15 03:32:01 UTC

Experts say... (insert random statistics)

Xavier

koh_jie_ming_xavier — 2020-04-15 03:32:04 UTC

Definition: Convincing by using emotional appeal
Example: If we don't move soon, we're all going to die! Can't you see how dangerous it would be to stay?

Annaluka

Annaluka — 2020-04-15 03:32:06 UTC

Ethos is using credibility and trust to relate to the audience
Example: This doctor is sure that this method is helpful

Pathos

zaara_fatima_kazi — 2020-04-15 03:32:10 UTC

It is about persuading others through using their emotions
e.g. threatening (get this or else you will not be happy)

Jovan

ang_kai_jie_jovan — 2020-04-15 03:32:12 UTC

Ethos is the use of ethics or credibility of the person making the argument.
e.g. 69/70 people use quizlet.

Ryan Tan 23

heylookitsawildryan — 2020-04-15 03:32:12 UTC

Emotional appeal.
Using feelings to connect with the audience.
eg. "If we don't act soon, we're all going to die!"
"all the poor children in Africa, starving!"

Ethos

kunwar_khushi_karansingh — 2020-04-15 03:32:17 UTC

It is used as a means of convincing an audience via the authority or credibility of the persuader. An example can be a lawyer.

Ethos

zaara_fatima_kazi — 2020-04-15 03:32:44 UTC

Ethos is the use of trust and credibility to persuade others
e.g. using a celebrity's endorsement

Tiffany

yee_jia_hui_tiffany — 2020-04-15 03:32:46 UTC

Logos is the appeal to logic, means to convince an audience by use of logic or reason.
Examples: statistics, facts, information

In every five people, one person.....

Ethos:

Zhi_Xuan — 2020-04-15 03:32:51 UTC

Credibility
Example:
Claim that you are a police while in a uniform is more convincing than plain clothes police.

Ryan The

theboii — 2020-04-15 03:32:55 UTC

Pathos:
- Emotion
- Convince people through an emotional response or a convincing story
- "If we don't move soon, we're all going to die! Can't you see how dangerous it would be to stay?"

Ethos

natania_chai_xiaohui — 2020-04-15 03:32:59 UTC

To use trust to convince others
Example: establishing your authority to speak on the subject

Pathos refers to emotion

tay_shao_yang_joel — 2020-04-15 03:33:04 UTC

The poor guy doesn't even have a home

Elson

chew_keng_hean_elson1 — 2020-04-15 03:33:10 UTC

Ethos: To convince the audience of the author's credibility or character

Caleb

LIMCASTUDENT — 2020-04-15 03:33:11 UTC

Logos is the means of convincing an audience based on logic

A graph

Cayden

cayden_kang_yang_yi — 2020-04-15 03:33:13 UTC

Pathos is emotional appeal.
Eg: A child can convince the parents to adopt a pet using pathos.

Xavier

koh_jie_ming_xavier — 2020-04-15 03:33:14 UTC

Definition: Appeals to logic of the audience to convince them.
Example: The data is perfectly clear: this investment has consistently turned a profit year-over-year, even in spite of market declines in other areas.

Ryan Tan 23

heylookitsawildryan — 2020-04-15 03:33:19 UTC

Logical appeal
using hard facts and hard logic to argue. The most similar of the 3 to primary debating skills.
eg.
The United States has the highest corporate income tax in the world.

Ariana

ariana_binte_iskandar_meirza — 2020-04-15 03:33:20 UTC

Pathos makes use of the emotional appeal, usually pity.
"If this dog is not adopted, he will never find a home,"

Jerald

Im_going_to_hide_k_bai — 2020-04-15 03:33:32 UTC

Ethos: rely on your credibility, your position to convince people that you are trustworthy
Example: you being a pm is a lot more trustworthy in people eye's than a regular citizen

Kaung

iambadman — 2020-04-15 03:33:34 UTC

Logos refers to the understanding or/ and reasoning of the person being persuaded. It appeals to the person's understanding of for example, scientific evidence.
E.g.
Research shows that 99% of students who take this medicine achieve an A or higher.

Caleb

LIMCASTUDENT — 2020-04-15 03:33:40 UTC

To convince an audience of the credibility of the author/speaker

Police officer has more credibility than a citizen

Thaddeus Leong

2020-04-15 03:33:40 UTC

Pathos is a method of convincing people with an argument drawn out through an emotional response.
If we don’t leave this place soon, we’ll be yelling for help. There’s no one to help us here, let’s get out of here and live.

Pathos

phang_qian_ci — 2020-04-15 03:33:44 UTC

Persuade someone by appealing to their emotion

Poor sheeps are dying because YOU want to eat mutton. Save the sheep! #GoVegan

Caley

caley_kor_xin_yu — 2020-04-15 03:33:46 UTC

Pathos refers to the emotional connection one would make with their audience.

Pathos draws out the feelings of an audience.
e.g. Greta Thunberg's speeches

Pathos

kunwar_khushi_karansingh — 2020-04-15 03:33:48 UTC

To persuade someone by using emotions. An example is the persuader asking someone to buy a puppy so that it can have a home.

Pathos

ang_kai_jie_jovan — 2020-04-15 03:33:53 UTC

It is the use of emotional appeal.
e.g. We are gonna die if we do not do something about this.

Elson

chew_keng_hean_elson1 — 2020-04-15 03:33:59 UTC

Pathos means to persuade an audience by appealing to their emotions.

Pathos

ang_kai_jun — 2020-04-15 03:34:06 UTC

The emotional appeal.

Look at this poor dog!

Caleb

LIMCASTUDENT — 2020-04-15 03:34:07 UTC

Persuading an audience with appeal to emotions

Look at all these poor kids

Elson

chew_keng_hean_elson1 — 2020-04-15 03:34:10 UTC

Logos means to convince an audience by use of logic or reason.

Annaluka

Annaluka — 2020-04-15 03:34:18 UTC

Pathos is to use emotions like guilt or anger to sway the audience
E.g. Think of the people with no money!

Logos

ang_kai_jun — 2020-04-15 03:34:23 UTC

Logical appeal.

1+1=2

Pathos

natania_chai_xiaohui — 2020-04-15 03:34:34 UTC

Persuade someone by appealing to heir emotions
example: attempt to sway an audience emotionally

Ariana

ariana_binte_iskandar_meirza — 2020-04-15 03:34:37 UTC

It refers to an idea that is relevant to the audience; logic.
"People who eat chocolate are 72% happier than the average population so we should all eat chocolate."

Logos refers to logic

tay_shao_yang_joel — 2020-04-15 03:34:40 UTC

1+1=3

alphaeus_goh_guan_wei — 2020-04-15 03:34:43 UTC

Pathos is something that stirs up emotions and it is to convince people by using emotional response.
An example is: Think of the people who struggling in life without water!

Thaddeus Leong

2020-04-15 03:34:48 UTC

Logos is an argument that appeals to an audience's sense of logic or reason
More than one hundred peer-reviewed studies have been conducted over the past decade, and none of them suggests that this is an effective treatment for hair loss.

Cayden

cayden_kang_yang_yi — 2020-04-15 03:34:51 UTC

Logos is appealing using logic.
Eg: Not doing homework will make your grades suffer.

Ryan The

theboii — 2020-04-15 03:34:58 UTC

Logos:
- Logic
- Convince people with reason, using facts and figures
- "The data is perfectly clear: this investment has consistently turned a profit year-over-year, even in spite of market declines in other areas."

Logos

ang_kai_jie_jovan — 2020-04-15 03:34:59 UTC

It appeals to an audience's logical and reasoning thinking.
e.g. Research has shown that 99% of students hate quizlet.

Logos

zaara_fatima_kazi — 2020-04-15 03:35:06 UTC

Logos is about using facts and logic to persuade someone
e.g. 99% of singaporeans agree

Logos

kunwar_khushi_karansingh — 2020-04-15 03:35:24 UTC

To persuade someone by appealing to logic. An example is not handing in your homework on time will result in you being scolded.

Pathos:

Zhi_Xuan — 2020-04-15 03:35:37 UTC

Emotional Appeal
Example: The discriminated people are poor as they are being treated badly.

Logos

natania_chai_xiaohui — 2020-04-15 03:35:38 UTC

Convince someone by using reasonings or logic
example: logical argument for a point

Logos

phang_qian_ci — 2020-04-15 03:35:48 UTC

Appealing to someone's logic to persuade them

Why buy 1 sack of vegan beancurd when you can buy 2?

Caley

caley_kor_xin_yu — 2020-04-15 03:35:59 UTC

Logos refers to the logic, statistics and facts.

"The suspect was shown breaking into the house on camera footage. It's clear who the robber is."

Annaluka

Annaluka — 2020-04-15 03:36:11 UTC

Logos is using logic to drive an argument citing sources and statistics
E.g. According to the newspaper...

Kim

kim_wong_yan_ning — 2020-04-15 03:36:32 UTC

Logos is using logic to connect to their point of view, such that they are able to understand easily. It must also capture some sort of relevance to the target audience.

For example, when police want to file reports, they need to have proof and evidence to convince the main boss that the criminal deserves to be brought to court etc.

Logos:

Zhi_Xuan — 2020-04-15 03:36:33 UTC

Logic and Reason
Example: This person committed the crime because there was DNA traces found on the knife.

Logos

alphaeus_goh_guan_wei — 2020-04-15 03:37:06 UTC

Logic is to appeal to logic and reasoning.
An example: Buy one get 1 free!

Jerald

Im_going_to_hide_k_bai — 2020-04-15 03:38:12 UTC

Pathos is to appeal to emotion, to try to invoke feeling into the reader.
Example:exaggerative terms like sad, lonely

Jerald

Im_going_to_hide_k_bai — 2020-04-15 03:38:55 UTC

Logos is to appeal to logic to convince people.
Example: speeches about racism, saving the world

Caleb

LIMCASTUDENT — 2020-04-22 06:18:25 UTC

I learnt that the thesis is a point of the story and that is can be found at the last sentence of the first paragraph and the last paragraph

Elson

chew_keng_hean_elson1 — 2020-04-22 06:18:44 UTC

I learnt that thesis is is main point of the story. It is found in the last sentence of the first paragraph and last paragraph.

Tiffany

yee_jia_hui_tiffany — 2020-04-22 06:50:06 UTC

I learnt the thesis can be effectively written by following three different steps:
1. ask a question
2.Provide reasons (at least 3)
3. Answer your own question

Annaluka

Annaluka — 2020-04-22 07:15:19 UTC

I learnt that the thesis statement is made up of the main claim of the topic and supporting reasons. It can also be rephrased at the conclusion, but new ideas cannot be introduced there

Ryan Tan

2020-04-22 13:47:38 UTC

I learnt that thesis statement is a short statement comprising of the main point linking to the reasons. It is written is in the first sentence (or last sentence depending on the writer's skill level) in the first and last paragraph.

Natania

natania_chai_xiaohui — 2020-04-23 09:14:48 UTC

I learnt that a thesis statement summarises the focus of the whole essay. It is also found at the last sentence of the first paragraph as well as the last paragraph.

Joel

tay_shao_yang_joel — 2020-04-24 02:37:08 UTC

Thesis is the claim/topic of the editorial and can be found in the first and last paragraphs. It is always 1 sentence.

Kai Jun

2020-04-24 02:37:15 UTC

I learnt that a thesis statement is a sentences that establishes the focus of the essay and it is usually found at the last sentence of the first paragraph.

Elliot

cipherzero — 2020-04-24 02:37:26 UTC

A thesis is the most important sentence in an editorial. It encompasses the main point of the editorial, as well as the supporting points; It is the first sentence of the last paragraph and the last sentence of the first paragraph.

Kaung

iambadman — 2020-04-24 02:37:47 UTC

I learnt that the thesis consists of a claim with two reasons and a support. I also learnt that a thesis should only be one sentence and any run-on sentences can be fixed by rearranging the sequence of the words or inserting a semi-colon.

Zaara (9)

zaara_fatima_kazi — 2020-04-24 02:38:09 UTC

I learnt that thesis statements are very important as it helps the writer to stay on track and gives a brief and accurate synopsis to the entire editorial

Xavier

koh_jie_ming_xavier — 2020-04-24 02:38:10 UTC

I learnt that the thesis statement is found at the end of the first paragraph and it states the stands, and the reasons behind the stand

Thesis Statement

cayden_kang_yang_yi — 2020-04-24 02:38:15 UTC

I learnt that a thesis statement is one statement. It is found in the first sentence of the last paragraph and last sentence of the first paragraph.

Caley

caley_kor_xin_yu — 2020-04-24 02:38:41 UTC

I learnt that a thesis statement shows the main claim of the topic. It can be found in the last sentence of the first paragraph.

Thesis statement

kunwar_khushi_karansingh — 2020-04-24 02:38:48 UTC

I learnt that the thesis statement is the summary of the main point of a writing and it is found in the last sentence of the first paragraph.

Thesis Statement

2020-04-24 02:38:51 UTC

I learnt that thesis statements must be in the form of claim and at least three subpoints to elaborate on in the rest of the essay, furthermore it is found in the first paragraph.

Thesis Statement

alphaeus_goh_guan_wei — 2020-04-24 02:38:58 UTC

I learnt that a thesis statement is a statement that can be one sentences and it states the main point of the editorial.

Thaddeus Leong

2020-04-24 02:40:36 UTC

Thesis statements are nice.

Zhi Xuan

Zhi_Xuan — 2020-04-24 09:16:34 UTC

I learnt that thesis statements are to explain the main point of the article and its possible to have a few of them in one article as it is not the topic.

Jovan

ang_kai_jie_jovan — 2020-04-25 03:35:41 UTC

I learnt that a thesis statement states the main point of the article.

I learnt that the thesis Is about the main point of the article, has opinions and is found at the end of the first para and start of the last para

2020-04-25 04:00:42 UTC