https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C Write a story in 60-100 words. Include: (1) When, Where, Who, What,How, Why.... (2) Beginning, Middle, End (3) Feeling en-us 2018-07-05 03:03:50 UTC 2023-07-27 02:00:22 UTC hello@padlet.com abbylee320 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269430746 Write a story in 60-100 words. **Make your writing creative and original.

**Include: (1) When, Where, Who, What, How, Why.... 
              (2) Beginning, Middle, End 
              (3) Feeling

**Write in paragraphs

**Check your tenses

**Check your spelling

**Use more interesting adjectives and adverbs, e.g. unforgettable, suddenly...

**Use connectives, e.g. first, then, next, after that...

**You can leave a comment to your classmates' story. But don't forget to write down your name! (Miss Lee)]]> 2018-07-05 03:08:00 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269430746 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269552874 Once upon a time there was a woman called Miss Mouse 🐁. She bought one hundred mice!!!!! She was so happy to have a lot of mice at home.

On the next day, she had to meet a friend for lunch at a restaurant so she decided to leave the mice at home. However, the mice were not willing to stay at home. Miss Mouse came up with an idea. She locked the mice in a cage and locked the door of her house so that the mice would not escape. However, her plan did not work. A mouse suddenly creeped through the bottom of the door when she was locking the door. Then all the other mice came out one by one. Miss Mouse could do nothing but brought them with her.

On their way to the restaurant, some pet cats saw the mice and chased them. Miss Mouse was very upset because she had to protect them all along the way. When they arrived at the restaurant, the mice scared a lot of the customers, including the friend of Miss Mouse. Her friend did not want to be a friend of her any more. Miss Mouse lost her friend so she was very angry with the mice. Finally, she decided to throw all of them away.🐭🐭🐭🐭🐭🐭🐭🐭🐭🐭🐭


]]> 2018-07-06 10:12:45 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269552874 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269559732 One day, the hare and the tortoise race racing . Result, the tortoise is a winner. As for, that only lost tortoise in front of the hare dare not say in front of my friends that I ran the fastest.]]> 2018-07-06 12:36:16 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269559732 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269599747 One day, a boy called Ben . He was very unhealthy . He ate hamburger every day. And he drink a lot of cola .But one day a people ent to his home. And said to him 'Ben you need to ate more vegetables to keep your body health and drink less cola. '
Ben listen to the people  ate vegetables every day and drink less cola. Now Ben was a healthy people. 

]]> 2018-07-07 04:16:15 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269599747 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269640842   Once upon a time,there was a girl called Jovy.She was healthy because she eat a lot of vegetables every day. One day,her friends Kylie and Chloe gave some unhealthy food such as sweets,chips,French fries to her.Then,she was sick.Her Mum said'You are naughty!',so she cried.
   Next day, Jovy found her friends Kylie and Chloe, Jovy said 'I am sad because my Mom scold me and you guys don't give me any unhealthy food .'
  At the end,they were healthy again.]]> 2018-07-08 04:19:24 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269640842 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269641357 Once upon a time, a boy called Tom. He didn't have any friend because he was too proud of him and so selfish.Until one day, a teacher came to Tom's classroom and tell us don't be a selfish boy, because you won't have friends any more. After that Tom understand a reason''don't be a selfish person''.After change his character,now Tom is a modest,generous boy and have a lot of friends.]]> 2018-07-08 04:40:20 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269641357 sebby917 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269644866 Once upon a time,there was a kid called Sam.He was always bullied because he was shorter than other people.One day,he couldn`t take it anymore.And started to fight back,little did he know...That he should have tell the teacher instead of hurt them back.The teacher found out,then him and the bullies got detention,the teacher told Sam that he should always tell the teacher instead of fight back.And now,when there are other people bullying him,he would always tell the teacher and not get into any trouble.The End.                     I feel happy about this story,because,the actual moral is don`t fight back.Always tell your parents or the teacher about what happened.And even if you fought back,you could always do the right after doing the wrong.Also don`t bully.]]> 2018-07-08 07:13:21 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269644866 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269645877 Once upon a time,a boy called Tim, he was a unhealthy big fat boy. One day, he went to school, his classmate laugh at him because because he was so fat.
  After he went home from school. He tell his mum about this. His mum said 'Do you want to know why you are unhealthy?' Tim said 'I want!' his mum said 'Because you eat a lot of junk food and you didn't do exercises!'
Now Tim ate a lot of vegetable and do exercises twice a week. He is very healthy now!!]]> 2018-07-08 07:43:20 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269645877 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269650018   Not far from Earth, was Planet IX. The living creatures there were called alien-people, as they were half alien half human.
  On Planet IX, lived a family, Black by name. The youngest daughter was Snow Black, who was adventurous.
  One day, the King🤴 found a new planet on his magical universe map. He wanted to know more about the people on that planet.
  'Scan a child of the new planet Earth.' The King🤴 commanded.
  The scanners bowed🙇 obediently. 'Yes, your majesty.' They said, thrilled to have something to do for His majesty, and flew to the Earth in their SuperSpaceShip 2018.
 On Earth, there was a family, White by name. The daughter was Snow White. The scanners scanned her body seriously.
  Before the scanners went back to Planet IX, the news of scanning the stepdaughter of the Queen👸🏻 of England🇬🇧, Snow White, had already gone through the whole planet.
  Snow Black decided to pay a visit at Snow White's' because she badly wanted to be friends with her for she didn't have much friends👭.
  She had heard from the scanners that Snow White lived at Whitehouse, in a quiet town called Quietown.
  In the morning🔅, Snow Black took what she needed and might need and crept quietly into the spaceship she made by herself.
  The spaceship was incredible! Snow Black pressed the button 'light speed' and whispered, 'Planet Earth.' The spaceship landed on Earth in less than 2 seconds. She stepped out of it and headed towards Quietown, as spaceships were only able to travel in space.
  After days and nights, Snow Black finally arrived at Whitehouse. She rang the doorbell and an old fellow wearing a grey tweak cap, a dirty top👕, trousers👖 with patches and flat bedroom slippers opened the door. He looked frightened at her appearance. For Snow Black had long antlers on her head, four hands and two mouths. She really looked bizarre, I can tell you!
 Before the old man, who must be Snow White's grandfather, Mr White, could shut the door, Snow Black put her foot at the door and said 'boldly', as she put it, 'Excuse me, I'm Snow Black, from Planet IX. Can I meet Snow White?'
  'Yer name is Show Black❓ And you want to meet Snow White❓ 'Er stepmother, the Queen👸🏻, has locked 'er in the filthy old cellar with the hairy spiders🕷 because she was the fairest of 'em all. Nobody dares to save 'er. I'm an old man👴, I am. If I am young👦🏻, I'll save her.' Tears were swelling in the old man's eyes😭. 'She's an unlucky child👧🏻, she is. 'Er stepmother never was kind to 'er.'
  Snow Black was bursting with rage😡💢 to think the Queen, who was supposed to rule the country, would lock somebody good into the cellar! Jealousy, she supposed.
  Snow Black knew she must save Snow White. She had to do it. For Snow White herself. For the old fellow👴🏻. For the country!  
  She made herself as big and strong as a giant💪 and as scary as possible with her magical antlers. She scared away all the soldiers, knights and guards💂 and marched into the enormous palace🕌.Then she scooped up all the people who served the Queen with pleasure and put them aside, so nobody could disturb her 'battle'🤼‍♀️ with the Her Majesty.
  Snow Black made herself as tiny as the air, went through the Queen's nose into her brain, somehow controlled it to think of being kind in the future.
  She went out from the horrible nose👃 of Her Majesty's, smiled as the Queen went to the cellar, apologised to poor Snow White,  feeling ashamed, and set her free herself.
 Show White learned all about the 'battle'🤼‍♀️, Snow Black the alien-person 🆚 Her Majesty the Queen from her grandfather👴🏻, who was watching everything nearby. Snow White was very grateful to Snow Black. They became the best of friends in the end.👭❤️  ]]> 2018-07-08 09:52:11 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269650018 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269650664
Once  upon  a time ,there was  girl  called  Sally,she was  very healthy  because  she  ate  a  lot  of  vegetables  and  fruit. One  day, she  went to  School,she saw  her  best  friend Mary  was  very  fat! She  was  very  surprised. She  was  ran  to  beside  Mary  and  ask  she 'Why  you  was  fat  ? '  Mary said ' I  was  fat  because  i  ate  a  lot  of  junk  food  and  fried  food .' Sally  nod . Then,Sally  said'you  was  fat  because  you was  not  ate  vegetables  and  fruit,you  need  to  ate  more  healthy  food !'  In  the  future, Mary  will  ate  a  lot  of  vegetables  and  fruit .She  is  very  healthy  now !]]> 2018-07-08 10:13:52 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269650664 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269653840 One day, Tiffany had nothing to do.
So she went to see Dad. "Can we go to the circus? "Tiffany asked. " Maybe tomorrow, Tiffany, I'm far too busy. "said Dad. 
But tomorrow came, and Dad was still busy. So Tiffany went to see Mum. 
" Can we go to the zoo? She asked. "Maybe tomorrow, Tiffany, I'm far too busy. " said Mum. But tomorrow came, and Mum was still busy. 
They're always busy, and tomorrow never comes. She went up the stairs to her bedroom to sulk. As she lay on her bed, she made a plan. 
First, Tiffany swung around her room with monkeys. Next, she had a tea party with soldiers. Then she did a dance with dinosaurs. Finally, she had a game of hide-and-seek with sheep. 
"I'm far too busy too!" Tiffany said. 
 ]]> 2018-07-08 11:59:58 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269653840 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269654169 I kept a big dog Chow Chow a few years ago, I like it very much, I shared all my toys with it, such as my doll, my toy car and my tennis ball. When I threw out tennis ball, Chow Chow ran and caught the ball. 
When I had lunch or dinner, I shared my food to Chow Chow. It ate the same meat, port with me. Then it got ill and died.]]> 2018-07-08 12:11:39 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269654169 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269654427 Onec upon a time,a boy called John.He was a naughty boy.One day,he wanted to play tricks on his classmate.He knew his classmate afraid of cockroaches so he put a lot of toy cockroaches in his classmate bag.When his classmate open his bag,suddenly,his classmate jumped out his chair then cried.John was laugh.Then the teacher came over and saw that.Then abuse him.After that John was clever.]]> 2018-07-08 12:20:09 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269654427 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269655989   Two years ago , a little boy saw a  big spaceship in the sky when he looked out of the window. A war among human and aliens started.
 Now human and aliens always fight with each other but aliens are stronger than human. Europe is invaded by aliens. The scientists invent a weapon. This weapon is very powerful. Soldiers use this weapon to  a lot of  aliens.
    A boy has a super power. He is brave and strong . . He is called Longan.Every soldier is proud of him because he saved a lot of people and killed many aliens. Longan wants to look for the BOSS of the aliens , because the BOSS controls every aliens. Finally, Longan finds the BOSS alone. The BOSS is called HEI HEI. HEI HEI farts to KO longan in 0.1 second. Then Longan dies  because HEI HEI's fart is too smelly. The girls cry loudly because they like Longan.

At the end, HEI HEI rules over the world because Longan dies ! 
                                           THE END!


 Longans are very yummy.

LONGAN IS REAGAN ,HA! HA!]]> 2018-07-08 13:07:16 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269655989 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269656308   Once apon a time,a little girl called Amy was going to school.When she walk along the road,she saw a tiny man .She was very curious.Then she asked,'What is your name?tiny people.' 'My name is Bobo.Your Majesty.'The tiny people asked. 'Why did you asked me "Your Majesty"?'said Amy. 'Because you are so big!'Bobo said.'My mum asked me if we saw the big people,we should be careful because she 
said that the big people was dangerous.' 'We are not dangerous.We are kind.Can we be the Friend?' 'Sure.'
  Fanaly，Amy and Bobo became friends and live happily forever.]]> 2018-07-08 13:14:08 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269656308 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269656825      Once apon a time, there was a little boy called Daild. He live in a village. He
 was very naught, he liked playing tricks.
    His friend always said ' please don't played tricks on us again! Why did you always played tricks?' 'Because it's fun!'Daild said happily.
    One day, Daild felt very boring, so he had a idea. 'Help! The wolf was came!
The wolf was coming!' he shouted. The villagers ran quickly and went to Daild's
house. But there didn't had any wolf. So the villagers went back to work. Suddenly,
a real wolf came! Daild was very scared! 'Help! A real wolf was came! Help!' But
nobody came.' Who was shouting?' a villager asked.' It was Daild. I thing he was
playing trick.' another villager answer.
     In the end, the wolf ate Daild's dog. He was very sad, he will not play any 
tricks again.]]> 2018-07-08 13:26:06 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269656825 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269685234 Once upon a time,there was a girl called Mandy.She was very unhealthy because she played a lot of online games.One day,her eyes was very red.Then her mum with her went to see the doctor.]]> 2018-07-09 01:26:22 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269685234 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269685924 2018-07-09 01:30:41 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269685924 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269686029 2018-07-09 01:32:05 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269686029 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269686190 2018-07-09 01:33:44 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269686190 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269686338 2018-07-09 01:35:25 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269686338 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269686374 2018-07-09 01:35:46 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269686374 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269686411 2018-07-09 01:36:24 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269686411 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269686504 2018-07-09 01:37:46 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269686504 https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269714824 2018-07-09 08:39:12 UTC https://padlet.com/abbylee320/story_4C/wish/269714824