from PAX 303 by Jessica Allen https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv How do you feel about the end of the story? If you could change the end of the story what would it be? en-us 2020-10-22 13:23:27 UTC 2025-12-13 17:47:50 UTC hello@padlet.com Jeremiah Colon https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852591826 The ending of the story It feels depressed because they left the fox.  I mean I like the the story but if I was the author the ending would be the fox will find out why they went to the forest and how did they find the items.]]> 2020-10-22 14:20:05 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852591826 Lenise M lenise622477 https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852593261 How I feel about the end of the story is heart broken because it is hard to let go of someone you love.]]> 2020-10-22 14:20:23 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852593261 Ashely Sumba https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852593632 It was sad because they both like each other. And i will change the story so they can be happy.]]> 2020-10-22 14:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852593632 I don't like how they left him all alone, what if he gets attacked by a predator. If I was the author I would change the ending to when Pax saw them leaving the boy would jump out of the car to when you reunite with his fox. aniyla633731 https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852594342 2020-10-22 14:20:37 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852594342 If I was the Author ... susan664143 https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852594650 I would change the ending by saying that the kids dad would at least be happy that the fox come back because he didn't like it there and he already missed them.❤️❤️]]> 2020-10-22 14:20:40 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852594650 Leilani L. https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852594927 I felt heart broken for the fox because they set him for a trick and the fox is kinda confused and I think they should've gave the fox for adoption or some thing.]]> 2020-10-22 14:20:44 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852594927 DJ_OctoBoy https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852595886 if I could change the end of the story, I would make the people bring the fox back to his home, because they left him for dead. And that's kind of rude and cruel.]]> 2020-10-22 14:20:55 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852595886 Ashly Fernandez ashly626908 https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852596791 2020-10-22 14:21:07 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852596791 Eric Ramirez https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852599570 i don't how they left him and if I was the author I would let the fox in the car ]]> 2020-10-22 14:21:43 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852599570 I feel about the end of the story for me it was depressed because he was like a family.If I could change the story it would be to take the fox to. richard626721 https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852600635 2020-10-22 14:21:56 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852600635 Naihomi Breton naihomi611187 https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852609969 At the end of the story, I felt kinda awful because that ending was a bit off. If I could change the ending, I would not leave the fox alone in a forest because to not feel down.  ]]> 2020-10-22 14:23:51 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852609969 idalys628809 https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852610700 In the end of the story I felt sorrowful. If I could´ve changed the end of the story I would have tried to make a way for the boy to keep the fox.]]> 2020-10-22 14:23:59 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852610700 Lenise M lenise622477 https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852613776 If I could change the end  of the story I would have  kept the fox but train the fox to behave so it could be more easier to keep as a pet]]> 2020-10-22 14:24:37 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852613776 David Amaya https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852644607 if i can change the ending . i would not leave the fox in a cage in the cold you can train it like a dog]]> 2020-10-22 14:30:43 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852644607 Will I or Not left the fox there ... susan664143 https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852650623 I don't think I would have left the fox there because he would be all alone and miserable, he would miss his boy which he loved ❤️ the most. I feel disconsaladed by the end of the story because the boy that was his owner tried to get rid of him.😭😭]]> 2020-10-22 14:31:59 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852650623 Andriws Rosario Tapia andriws626726 https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852662179 To be honest, I really dislike the ending because I felt bad that the the boy was forced to leave his pet fox alone and go home empty-handed with such melancholy. If I was the author I would let the boy have his time with his fox and go home happy.]]> 2020-10-22 14:34:14 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852662179 Ashely Sumba https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852671884 I feel heartbroken because i will not leave the fox i wil bring the fox with me so i can train it like a dog.]]> 2020-10-22 14:36:16 UTC https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852671884 brian fernandez brian622880 https://padlet.com/j1allen1/8o9yoq523zszfmpv/wish/852703167 I  think they did the right thing because the fox needs to learn to take care of himself


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