Glow and Grow Critiques by Darnell D Brodie https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen Constructive Critiques en-us 2019-12-04 18:45:31 UTC 2019-12-16 03:55:37 UTC hello@padlet.com David Kobylarz - Glow and Grow darnell_brodie https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/422728011 Glow: I think your visual medium is great. You provide excellent visuals in your presentation.
Grow: I think you could have used less words on the page, and more speaking on what you wrote (I do the same thing).]]> 2019-12-11 14:35:24 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/422728011 Nina Danner – Glow and Grow darnell_brodie https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423351159 Glow – I think your topic was very interesting, as well as your presentation had the right amount of words to pictures.

Grow – Within the Screencast-o-Matic section, I noticed you had gaps when going from one page to the next. Overall, very good presentation.

]]> 2019-12-12 16:08:18 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423351159 Arianna Ionni – Glow and Grow darnell_brodie https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423351473 Glow – You were creative in how you presented your reflection to us. It was like a book, but the pictures were able to break it up.

Grow – Provide more pictures to break up the words. 

]]> 2019-12-12 16:08:46 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423351473 Phil Nasisi – Glow and Grow darnell_brodie https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423351698 Glow – I think you have awesome graphics. You seem confident in how to make your presentation visually appealing.

Grow – Your mouse is guiding your reading, which we can see throughout the presentation.

]]> 2019-12-12 16:09:03 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423351698 Michael DeMelfi – Glow and Grow darnell_brodie https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423352054 Glow – I think your presentation provides great detail. You do a good job at explaining all of this information.

Grow – I love everything you are saying, but I think you are going too fast. I had to go back sometimes to make sure I did not miss something.

]]> 2019-12-12 16:09:32 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423352054 James Lopez – Glow and Grow darnell_brodie https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423352239 Glow – I think your presentation was insightful and can be used to educate not just us but students you are teaching. It was also a good visual presentation.

Grow – Your presentation was great, but sometimes during the presentation your microphone was on and off so some things were hard to hear.

]]> 2019-12-12 16:09:47 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423352239 Dylan Kleinfeldt – Glow and Grow darnell_brodie https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423352484 Glow – you are passionate about showing your STEM/Social Innovator.

Grow – In your SWAY, there is a lot of words. It does not seem like your SWAY was in presentation mode.

]]> 2019-12-12 16:10:09 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423352484 Maximilian Brustein – Glow and Grow darnell_brodie https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423352691 Glow – Presentation is put together very well. You provide great detail for us to see your innovative journey. This includes pictures and words. 

Grow – I think you could use less words. Also, you have a window open at the bottom of your presentation that is there the whole time, it can be distracting.

]]> 2019-12-12 16:10:27 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423352691 Tiombe Green – Glow and Grow darnell_brodie https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423352926 Glow – Your presentation is well put together because of the detail, pictures and design you used. 

Grow – Your slides are great, but there are a lot of them and there are a lot of words on them. Think about bringing them down and using less words. Your information is great though!

]]> 2019-12-12 16:10:45 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423352926 Mary Grace McNamara darnell_brodie https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423353128 Glow – Your presentation has good visuals and I like the different path you take with talking about your interests at the beginning. It keeps us engaged.

Grow – if interrupted – do not let it stop you and do not comment on it, just keep going.

]]> 2019-12-12 16:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423353128 Grow and Glows dylan_kleinfeldt https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423468949 Glow- I like how you brought the idea of basketball and rebounding into your presentation because it is something you are passionate about. I liked your visuals and thought the presentation was put together nicely!
Grow- Put less words on your slides to capture the main points and try to sounds more enthusiastic about the information you are presenting!

Good Job Darnell,
Dylan Kleinfeldt  ]]> 2019-12-12 18:49:59 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/423468949 Glow and Grow tiombe_green https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/424112701 Glow: I like that you talked about your life such as basketball experiences and made it relate back to the class.  It definitely had the right amount of visuals to words. Your sway was very insightful and I can tell you learned a lot from the class.

Grow:  Try scaling down your screencast-o-matic so that it only shows the presentation screen and not your whole computer screen. Also try using a bigger font and less words to keep the audience engaged. Good job!]]> 2019-12-14 06:43:35 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/424112701 Jonathan Bar Eli - Glow and Grow jonathan_bareli https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/424278571 Glow - The topic was very interesting and your presentation was constructed very well. You explained yourself very clearly and it was great hearing you.

Grow - Your presentation was good but I felt you were presenting at a fast pace, next time take your time a bit more.]]> 2019-12-15 14:58:08 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/424278571 Glow and Grow James Lopez james_lopez2 https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/424370896 Glow: seeing the connections from being a student athlete to your course work was interesting

Grow: go for key terms and paraphrasing when you make a presentation ]]> 2019-12-16 02:30:26 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/424370896 Grow and Glow https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/424371377 Glow: Very interesting topic that was selected, perfect amount of text and images for everyone to enjoy. Not too much so we get distracted, and not to little for no support. 

Grow: Do not let anything interrupt you and keep going :) ]]> 2019-12-16 02:34:36 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/424371377 Glow and Grow- Max Brustein https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/424383280 Glow: you spoke well and had really interesting points
Grow: you should try to have a little bit less text on each slide and organize it in a different format, such as bullet points. Great job!]]> 2019-12-16 03:54:15 UTC https://padlet.com/darnell_brodie/8ln9yndbqwen/wish/424383280