https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback en-us 2017-10-18 02:44:53 UTC 2017-10-20 19:47:43 UTC hello@padlet.com ysunggeun https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/198080087 The message was clear and it was highly appropriate for a teenager audience. ]]> 2017-10-18 02:46:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/198080087 https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199122633 The tone of the video was interesting. You used some of your personality traits to make your video personal. Music was relevant to the situation depicted in the video.]]> 2017-10-20 16:14:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199122633 aishahcholmondeleyusestech https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199122731 Link to unit theme: 3/5

Students did mention their general point (i.e. that ICTs should be used responsibly), but did not really discuss much? I don't know. I need a rubric to do this to be honest


]]> 2017-10-20 16:15:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199122731 https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199122860 The message was  appropriate, target audience and goal was clear. 
Language could have been corrected ]]> 2017-10-20 16:15:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199122860 https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199122976 Reinvestment of elements: 8/10. We gave this grade because although it was a very good PSA, we felt that the music was used more for comical effects than the effects that a PSA has.]]> 2017-10-20 16:15:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199122976 https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123075 Reinvestment of elements: the overall message was well delivered. It was clear and understandablr. Your use of visual situations and physical comedy helped make the message easy to understand. The tone could have used some work, however, since it was mostly lighthearted while most PSAs are usually more serious in nature. ]]> 2017-10-20 16:15:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123075 https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123199
Message was appropriate and clear for the target audience. 

]]> 2017-10-20 16:16:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123199 mauvegdube27 https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123217 10/10, the message was adapted to the audience, the goal of the PSA was clear
-Mauve]]> 2017-10-20 16:16:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123217 https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123304 Link to unit theme 4/5 talk of irresponsible use of ICTs, but not responsible use]]> 2017-10-20 16:16:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123304 https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123347 Message and target audience: The message clearly showed that it was intended for high school students. ]]> 2017-10-20 16:16:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123347 https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123360 The link back to the theme was demonstrated in a funny way. Students aren't being shamed for using ICT but showing the benefits of proper use of ICTs. ]]> 2017-10-20 16:16:38 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123360 https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123565 There was no talking in the video if it was evaluated and no pronunciation and grammar. There was a spelling mistake in "Theachers"


]]> 2017-10-20 16:17:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123565 https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123615 Message/ intended audience: you did a good job making a connection with your peers by using real life consequences as well as using appropriate music to reinforce the changing mood within your theme. ]]> 2017-10-20 16:17:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123615 https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123617 The message was clear and the target audience was appropriate]]> 2017-10-20 16:17:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ysunggeun/wewantfeedback/wish/199123617