https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220 Claims transitions and support en-us 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC 2018-10-22 21:12:35 UTC hello@padlet.com tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611172 State your claim (what part of the thesis you are trying to prove/explore):]]> 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611172 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611176 As a useful example of propaganda, it’s supposed to make you feel what the person being abused in the poster is feeling. It’s meant to belittle you and make you feel shameful for not standing up and not being a true American for it.]]> 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611176 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611187 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611187 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611189 If you start with the secondary source, it’s usually because you want to focus on the complaint or moment rather than the pitch of the primary source.
1) to introduce the quote with a signal phrase:a. “In the words of; According to; As X notes, etc.
2) Put quotes around language directly from the text,
AND/OR
3) Paraphrase longer passages.
4) cite your information using MLA format (Tidwell 16).

]]> 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611189 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611191 If you start with the primary source, it’s usually because you want to focus on the specifics of that particular source (the pitch), rather than the complaint or moment  You should expand or adapt this material in ways that will lead to your secondary source material. Use the 10 on 1 exercise, saying more about less in a way that sets up your secondary source information. ]]> 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611191 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611193 The words along the poster state “He can’t do it alone! Stand up to bullying TODAY!” It’s trying to appeal to your sense of pathos. It’s telling you to stand up to bullying but the person being bullied can’t even physically stand up, let alone defend himself.]]> 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611193 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611205

1) If you started with the Primary Source:
Introduce a Secondary Source (Follow the pattern for the Secondary Source)
2) If you started with a Secondary Source:
  | Introduce the Primary Source (Follow the pattern for the Primary Source) OR
  | Introduce another Secondary Source

]]> 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611205 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611208 The victim is depicted helpless. On the ground, arms being held above his head by two bullies, with no one around to help him. One kid is standing over him and the other seems to be holding his arms. Another kid is in the foreground simply watching what is happening to the victim.]]> 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611208 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611213 The ‘So what?’ should be at least as long as the quoted material.
If you need to build a relationship or connection (is it part of a strand, repetition, binary; is it an exception to a larger pattern)  tothe next piece of evidence, do so.  ]]> 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611213 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611215 Part of your explanation should build a relationship between this source and the next source being used to prove your point.]]> 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611215 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611221

Use the closing sentence to show how this fits into the larger argument (the thesis) or to call attention to what needs to be further addressed (setting up the next claim).

]]> 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611221 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611222 Yet, what is being done with all of these bystanders witnessing the bullying. If bullying stops within 10 seconds of intervening, why doesn’t everyone intervene? [10 on 1] ]]> 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611222 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611226 At this point you can pull more material from your sources if you need further proof to back up your claim. You can return to the same secondary source multiple times, or you can have a back and forth between two sources with complimentary or contrasting information/arguments.]]> 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611226 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611227 Statistically 70.6% of young people say they have seen bullying in their schools and 70.4% of school staff have seen bullying. When bystanders intervene, bullying stops within 10 seconds 57% of the time. (Source 6.) ]]> 2018-10-22 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295611227 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295660296 I'm aware of how influential hip hop culture has been to me in my life. It affects the way I speak, dress, believe, etc. Overall I would say hip hop has had a positive influence on me and at least I'm aware of it. But that leads me to think what happens if your influence affects you negatively and you're conscious of the influence? Is shares more of the blame, the artists or the fans? ]]> 2018-10-22 19:16:47 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295660296 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295661435  The Church scene in the video is a judgement of America for not valuing black lives, even when those lives are innocent and righteous.]]> 2018-10-22 19:19:05 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295661435 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295661907 One Divide between pro gunners and anti gunners stems from differences in interpretations of second amendment.


]]> 2018-10-22 19:19:54 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295661907 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295663762 After looking at a poster from UFC 200 that displays Miesha Tate & Amanda Nunes, I believe these two women feel they are entering a war zone ]]> 2018-10-22 19:23:34 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295663762 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295664292 “The why of leadership is the engine that drives your leadership train.”

As a leader, you need reason when you’re in the season. Your why will develop your way.

]]> 2018-10-22 19:24:22 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295664292 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295664474 Main Stream Media uses Violence in today's Video Games, as an escape goat for lacking Gun Control. 
In the Cartoon "Game Over" Stan Kelly depicts this by showing a innocent child swallowed up by the violence he's just witnessed in the game his parents purchased for him. In this enrage state of mind, the child reenacts the violence he has just witnessed by killing his native parents. Stan Kelly uses the Irony of this event to make fun of this outrageous claim made by main stream media. 

]]> 2018-10-22 19:24:43 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295664474 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295665931 Public opinion of marijuana has improved since it was criminalized in the 1930’s, it is even legal in one way or the other in most states. The United States should follow Canada in making marijuana legal for recreational country wide.]]> 2018-10-22 19:27:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295665931 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295666522 Since the beginning of the Apple era, the company has been always ahead if its time in the technology aspect of things. ]]> 2018-10-22 19:29:00 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295666522 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295666619 The IHOP name change is risky for a promotion of a common food item to gain the company business.

]]> 2018-10-22 19:29:12 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295666619 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295667050 “What feed’s a fighters soul is victory”

This relates to my claim first off because it uses the word “fighters” and my poster of propaganda is a UFC poster. Secondly it implies the soul is feed by victory, in most religions the soul is the most important part of your person, and to say that Victory is what feeds it says a alot  about how countries view Victory. Most people feel that a country has a soul and if you don’t want to look at it like that, that’s fine we’ll call it moral and a country defiantly has moral like most groups of people an example of this on a small scale would be a football team, my sophomore year of high school our football team was not good we went 1-9 and we didn’t have a student section, school support, fans. It was terrible, I hated it we were a losing football team acting like losers, the teachers and students mocked our chant and our coach and it was a hostile environment the following spring when we started to condition for football it was also bad we just weren’t a team so our coach took all of us camping during the summer for a week we didn’t practice we just hungout , and we believe in ourselves even if no one else did so it was time for our first game we came out and we played a really tough team they were division 2 and we were division 6 so they were quite a bit blogger than us and fought hard but we lost 35-28 they were the toughest team we'd play that year and we lost by one touchdown, and the next week we had the school support and and a student section and we had no moral we lost we were losers now image that on a country scale and on the biggest stage in combat sports Madison Square Garden and your fighter lost in an upset your country lost you are a loser you got bested by a third world country we are not superior, and we will not hold ill will ? Maybe not necessarily to the country but probably the fighter.]]> 2018-10-22 19:30:01 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295667050 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295668136 “On January 24th , Apple Computer will introduce Macintosh. And you’ll see why 1984 won’t be like 1984” 

 The book 1984 was made in 1949 there for it was trying to predict what the year 1984 will look like. Apple takes this approach as they express that they don’t want the 1984 to look anything like that book describes. At the time of the ad IBM was the leader in the business. At the end of the ad the girl whose white t-shirt has the Apple Macintosh on it smashes through a screen that seems to be controlling a whole room of people. Might be a symbol of change.

]]> 2018-10-22 19:32:26 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295668136 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295668284  “The church scene is not only about what happened in Charleston. This part of the video, like the earlier portion, intended to juxtapose happy and positive aspects of African American culture (in this case the Black church) with the violence that surrounds and impacts the black community.” (Psychology Today, 2018) ]]> 2018-10-22 19:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295668284 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295668410 To be a great leader, you don’t need authority. A great leader overcomes adversity for the betterment of themselves, and more importantly, to better others.]]> 2018-10-22 19:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295668410 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295668442 J.Cole asks lil pump if he ever questions himself for putting out a certain image of himself that isn't positive and it isn't the real him.
(J.Cole x Lil Pump Interview, 2018) ]]> 2018-10-22 19:33:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295668442 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295668795  This scene shows America not valuing Black lives. The ease Gambino displays while killing the ten people in the choir prove that. The bodies in this scene are yet again left on the ground while the gun, used to murder them, was taken away in red cloth, just like the first murder with the man and his guitar.  ]]> 2018-10-22 19:33:53 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295668795 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295671028 Concussions within football are a problem at the nfl level however within the highschool 
and college levels they are not as common as they are perceived to be. ]]> 2018-10-22 19:38:36 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295671028 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295671141 restricting guns or implementing more gun free zones does not guarantee less gun violence and leaves people defenseless making them targets for mass shooters.

]]> 2018-10-22 19:38:51 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295671141 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295671149 "President Donald Trump is sitting down Thursday afternoon with the video game industry, more than a week after he suggested that violent games can breed dangerous thoughts in young people."

1. Politicians and other public figures have a long history of viewing the gaming industry as a catalyst for acts of violence.

2. The debate over brutality and bloodshed in video games stretches back decades: The '70s arcade game "Death Race," for example, drew public ire because it allowed players to run over enemies for points.

3.1990s gory fighter "Mortal Kombat" even led then-Democratic senators Joseph Lieberman and Herbert Kohl, to call a hearing on video game violence. Shortly afterward, the industry created a ratings system to regulate how mature games are marketed.

4. "Guns don't kill people. Video games, the media and Obama's budget kill people," said NRA head Wayne LaPierre at a press conference after the Sandy Hook shooting.

5. It's been Trump and most Republicans seems in some ways to be a more deliberate effort to shift the conversation maybe away from gun control onto video games.

6. Americans play the same video games, watch the same TV shows and experience mental illness at the same rates as our peers in other high income nations. What separates America is our weak gun laws and unacceptable rates of gun violence. Americans want action on gun safety, not video games.]]> 2018-10-22 19:38:53 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295671149 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295671232 Nike’s use of diversity conflicts with issues going on in the world , may be weakening the message of the cause they support ]]> 2018-10-22 19:39:06 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295671232 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295672414 In reference to my primary source, a leader has been where its followers want to go. Inky Johnson, former University of Tennessee cornerback is well known, not for his wide array of accomplishments on the field, but when he everything went completely wrong. Johnson was a projected first-round pick in the upcoming NFL draft. All he had to do was complete the football year. He was having the season of his life. Nobody was getting through on his side, until one game. During a game midway through the season, the ball was launched into the air. Inky was very reactive to tackle the opposing wide receiver. As he made contact, he lay motionless. He would be rushed to the hospital. Minutes from death, the doctor escorted Inky into the surgery room. After the procedure, Inky was informed he would never be able to use is right arm again. His dreams to be a professional football player had expired. The rest of his life would be a fight. How did he respond? He became a motivational speaker. He now travels the country speaking into the lives of those who need uplifted. His life was flipped upsidedown in a matter of seconds. His adversity is admired by all that hear this man’s testimony.]]> 2018-10-22 19:41:53 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295672414 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295673078  “your business name is the first thing people mention when talking about your company” (Click).
IHOP wanted the company to be a conversational topic because they knew that if they made a big change to their company then people would come and try their burgers, which would gain them business.]]> 2018-10-22 19:43:25 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295673078 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295674880 "a player in the burger business"(Tobin). The company knew that burgers are a popular item. But the company knew that this was the best way to grow there business.

]]> 2018-10-22 19:47:27 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295674880 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295675221 This shows us insight to an artist's perspective on if this specific artists is aware of his influence and what they think how much responsibility they have as an artist. ]]> 2018-10-22 19:48:17 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295675221 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295675582 Body camera can be useful for holding a police officer accountable for their actions. ]]> 2018-10-22 19:49:13 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295675582 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295675757 In the 1930’s marijuana was demonized, an example of this is reefer madness and the movie “Marijuana: Weed with roots in hell” They painted the image for marijuana that became the norm for the public view on it, leading it to be scheduled as a schedule 1 drug (heroin is also a schedule 1 drug)]]> 2018-10-22 19:49:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295675757 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295675961 “Gun control kills” 

This expression can have the ideology ]]> 2018-10-22 19:50:11 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295675961 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295677642 The idea of Country vs. Country will always interest the human population it always had and always will. War, sport, competition in general who’s better than who by how much and why. A quote that came to me was “everyone’s the hero in there own story” that means everything else is the villain, the big bad villain of the story, sometimes the hero’s win (miracle on ice) sometimes they lose. But the truth is “everyone’s the hero in there own story” no one wants to lose but sometimes the hero has too.]]> 2018-10-22 19:54:15 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295677642 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295677676 Marijuana is legal in 60% of the United States, it has risen to be apart of popular culture and seems to be on the cusp of becoming legal nationwide. Canada has already gone through this process and might become a template for how the United States could handle legalizing marijuana.]]> 2018-10-22 19:54:19 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295677676 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295677896 Trump has also suggested that the influence of violent media is to blame for the ongoing issue of gun violence in the US. "The level of violence on video games is really shaping young people's thoughts," he said in a meeting last week. "And then you go the further step, and that's the movies."
This a prime example of politics and main media using Video Games as an escape goat. This is effect because Video Games are directed at a younger audience compared to the older audience that doesn't have an experience with gaming. Not to stereotype but many people that vote republican are very stuck in their ways and aren't open to new technology and change. ]]> 2018-10-22 19:54:47 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295677896 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295677956 2018-10-22 19:54:57 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/bodyparagraphs220/wish/295677956