AW4 Env 1 Week 5 Q4 Paraphrasing by Dragana LAZIC https://padlet.com/dlazic/8k9dumuwmx5dbrfw Made with charm en-us 2022-01-04 04:14:43 UTC 2026-01-28 11:24:59 UTC hello@padlet.com Group 2: Moeka, Moe, Minami dlazic https://padlet.com/dlazic/8k9dumuwmx5dbrfw/wish/1973468969 Original:


"Narrow nationalism and vaccine hoarding by some countries have undermined equity and created the ideal conditions for the emergence of the Omicron variant, and the longer inequity continues, the higher the risks of the virus evolving in ways we can't prevent or predict," the World Health Organization (WHO) chief said.

Source: 

BBC News. (2021, December 31). Covid-19: Who Chief Optimistic Disease will be Beaten in 2022. BBC News. Retrieved from https://www.bbc.com/news/world-59840513


Write your paraphrase. Complete the tasks - these will help you with paraphrasing.

1) Use synonyms:
Pay attention to the part of speech

  1. nationalism =
  2. hoarding = stocking
  3. have undermined (verb) =weaken
  4. equity = fair
  5. created = make
  6. ideal =
  7. conditions = situation
  8. emergence = appearance
  9. variant =differ
  10. longer =
  11. continue(s) (verb) = keep
  12. risk = danger
  13. prevent (verb) = protect
  14. predict (verb) = foretell


3. Change the voice (e.g., active to passive)
can't prevent = can't be prevented
cant's predict = can't be predicted

5. Change part of speech
Created – to create (verb) =creation      (n)
Continue (verb) =continuation        (n)
Prevent (verb) =   prevention      (n)
Predict (verb) =   prediction       (n)



Combine:
2. Change the sentence structure
3. Change clauses to phrases
6. Combine or divide sentences when necessary

How? Read the sentence. Decide where you can 'break' the sentence into two or more sentences.
Think where you can change the sentences to phrases (=not a complete sentence; e.g., a phrase does not contain a verb; change to -ing (nominalize); etc.

Do not forget attribution and citation!


Write your paraphrase here:
How? Combine all the above. You might not use everything you wrote above. The steps above help you think about the meaning and understand the sentence better. 





]]> 2022-01-04 04:17:07 UTC https://padlet.com/dlazic/8k9dumuwmx5dbrfw/wish/1973468969 Group 1: Miku, Rika, Mari, Kanae dlazic https://padlet.com/dlazic/8k9dumuwmx5dbrfw/wish/1973491962 Original:


"Narrow nationalism and vaccine hoarding by some countries have undermined equity and created the ideal conditions for the emergence of the Omicron variant, and the longer inequity continues, the higher the risks of the virus evolving in ways we can't prevent or predict," the World Health Organization (WHO) chief said.

Source: 

BBC News. (2021, December 31). Covid-19: Who Chief Optimistic Disease will be Beaten in 2022. BBC News. Retrieved from https://www.bbc.com/news/world-59840513


Write your paraphrase. Complete the tasks - these will help you with paraphrasing.

1) Use synonyms:
Pay attention to the part of speech

  1. nationalism = patriotism
  2. hoarding = stock, collect, store
  3. have undermined (verb) = lose, (weak)
  4. equity = fairness
  5. created = make
  6. ideal = perfect
  7. conditions = situation
  8. emergence = appearance
  9. variant = mutant
  10. longer = long-term
  11. continue(s) (verb) = keep on with
  12. risk = crisis, danger, possibility
  13. prevent (verb) = stop, (avoid)
  14. predict (verb) = make a forecast


3. Change the voice (e.g., active to passive)
can't prevent = can't be prevented
cant's predict = can't be predicted

5. Change part of speech
Created – to create (verb) = creation        (n)
Continue (verb) =   continuation     (n)
Prevent (verb) = prevention        (n)
Predict (verb) =   prediction       (n)



Combine:
2. Change the sentence structure
3. Change clauses to phrases
6. Combine or divide sentences when necessary

How? Read the sentence. Decide where you can 'break' the sentence into two or more sentences.
Think where you can change the sentences to phrases (=not a complete sentence; e.g., a phrase does not contain a verb; change to -ing (nominalize); etc.

Do not forget attribution and citation!


Write your paraphrase here:
How? Combine all the above. You might not use everything you wrote above. The steps above help you think about the meaning and understand the sentence better. 

Narrow patriotism and some countries' stocked vaccines have lost fairness and created the ideal conditions for the appearance of the Omicron mutant, and the longer inequity continues, the higher the danger of the virus evolving in ways we can't prevent or predict," the World Health Organization (WHO) chief said.

According the World Health Organization (WHO) chief, Narrow patriotism and some countries' stocked vaccines have lost fairness and created the ideal conditions for the appearance of the Omicron mutant, and if unequal situation continue, the danger of the virus evolving rise ~~~

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"Narrow nationalism and vaccine hoarding by some countries have undermined equity and created the ideal conditions for the emergence of the Omicron variant, and the longer inequity continues, the higher the risks of the virus evolving in ways we can't prevent or predict," the World Health Organization (WHO) chief said.

Source: 

BBC News. (2021, December 31). Covid-19: Who Chief Optimistic Disease will be Beaten in 2022. BBC News. Retrieved from https://www.bbc.com/news/world-59840513


Write your paraphrase. Complete the tasks - these will help you with paraphrasing.

1) Use synonyms:
Pay attention to the part of speech

  1. nationalism =narrowness
  2. hoarding =stock
  3. have undermined (verb) = have failed to
  4. equity = fairness
  5. created = generated
  6. ideal = desirable
  7. conditions = situations
  8. emergence = appearance
  9. variant = variation
  10. longer = prolonged
  11. continue(s) (verb) = keep on with
  12. risk = crisis
  13. prevent (verb) = stop
  14. predict (verb) = make a forecast


3. Change the voice (e.g., active to passive)
can't prevent = can't be prevented
cant's predict = can't be predicted

5. Change part of speech
Created – to create (verb) = creation (n)
Continue (verb) = continuation  (n)
Prevent (verb) = prevention  (n)
Predict (verb) = prediction (n)



Combine:
2. Change the sentence structure
3. Change clauses to phrases
6. Combine or divide sentences when necessary

How? Read the sentence. Decide where you can 'break' the sentence into two or more sentences.
Think where you can change the sentences to phrases (=not a complete sentence; e.g., a phrase does not contain a verb; change to -ing (nominalize); etc.

Do not forget attribution and citation!


Write your paraphrase here:
How? Combine all the above. You might not use everything you wrote above. The steps above help you think about the meaning and understand the sentence better.

"Narrow nationalism and vaccine stock by some countries have failed to keep fairness and generated the desirable situations for the appearance of the Omicron variation, and the prolonged unfair situations increase the risk of the virus evolving in preventive or unpredictable ways. " The World Health Organization (WHO) chief said.
 




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