https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm Post your name and your comma sentences under the coordinating comma rule en-us 2018-03-06 17:36:57 UTC 2019-05-09 14:02:16 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466592 “When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped” 

]]> 2019-05-09 13:44:53 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466592 alexis_stewart1 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466650 “When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped”(201).]]> 2019-05-09 13:44:58 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466650 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466750 That night, when the train was dark, the woman’s eyes smiled up at me before she faded off to sleep.]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:07 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466750 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466792 When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:12 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466792 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466867 “When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped.”

]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:19 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466867 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466907 That night, when the train was dark, the woman’s eyes smiled up at me before she faded off to sleep.]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:24 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466907 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466912 “Thrust into a city where chaos prevails, we were dizzied into frame after frame with beaming locals.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:25 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466912 michaela_hamet https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466974
“I knew, of course, that my white skin and light features were responsible for the attention, but some part of me still took pleasure from being stared at on trains and photographed in city gardens”]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:31 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358466974 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467031  “When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our 
passports were stamped” ]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:37 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467031 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467039 “When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:38 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467039 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467073 “When luke and i landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped”]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:42 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467073 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467085 When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped.]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467085 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467107 I knew, of course, that my white skin and light features were responsible for the attention, but some part of me still took pleasure from being stared at on trains and photographed in city gardens.]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:45 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467107 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467114 “At first, the attention was surprising”]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:46 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467114 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467115 “When like and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped.”

]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:46 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467115 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467119 “Yes, they responded, nodding and thinking.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:47 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467119 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467156 “Embarrassed, I fumbled off my flash from within the stained train sheets, capturing the woman to bring home to a tiny box on my shelf” (Keegan 204).

]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:49 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467156 braden_bower https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467215 “We’d agree to one shot and be trapped in five others, avoid followers at lunch only to get them at dinner.       “]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:56 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467215 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467225
“When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped.”

]]> 2019-05-09 13:45:57 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467225 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467254 “I knew, of course, that my white skin and light features were responsible for the attention, but some part of me still took pleasure from being stared at on trains and photographed in city gardens.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:01 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467254 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467260 Yet as the weeks wore on]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:02 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467260 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467283 “Each time I felt a twang of pleasure from the stares or picture requests, my ego was kicked down by my very revulsion that it had been boosted in the first place.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:04 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467283 alexis_stewart1 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467340 “I knew, of course, that my white skin and white features were responsible for the attention, but some part of me took pleasure from being stared at on trains and photographed in city gardens”(202).]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:10 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467340 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467390 At first the attention was surprising ]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:15 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467390 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467409
“One photo, please, miss, one photo”]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:17 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467409 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467423 “The dying come to die in the holy Ganges River, burning on its banks and escaping reincarnation in its waters.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467423 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467459 “When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped.” Pg. 201]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:23 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467459 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467500 “After a few glasses of Indian wine, I offered that maybe, sometimes, it really wasn’t so bad” pg203]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467500 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467528 “I knew, of course, that my white skin and light features were responsible for the 
attention...” ]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:30 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467528 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467548 After a few glasses of Indian wine, I offered that maybe, sometimes, it really wasn’t so bad]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:32 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467548 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467585 “When Luke and I landed in India,...” (Keegan 201).]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:37 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467585 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467608 “The dying come to die in the holy Ganges River, burning on its banks and escaping reincarnation in its waters.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:40 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467608 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467616 I noticed commas when Marina was listing things off.

]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:41 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467616 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467619
“After a few glasses of Indian Wine, I offered that maybe, sometimes, it really wasn’t so bad.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:41 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467619 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467629 “I knew, of course, that my white skin and light features were responsible for the attention, but some part of me still took pleasure from being stared at on trains and photographed in city gardens.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467629 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467647 “I offered that maybe, sometimes, it really wasn’t so bad”

]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:44 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467647 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467673 “After a few glasses of Indian Wine, I offered that maybe, sometimes, it really wasn’t so bad.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:47 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467673 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467677 “ we read books, rolled dice, and looked out at rice fields and rivers” ]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:47 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467677 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467723 “He’d refuse cameras and yell off those who stared, exhausted and appalled by the endless annoyance.”

]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:51 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467723 alexis_stewart1 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467771 “Embarrassed, I fumbled off my flash from within the stained train sheets, capturing the woman to bring home to a tiny box on my shelf”(204).]]> 2019-05-09 13:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467771 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467813 “When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:47:00 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467813 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467829 “l knew, of course, that my white skin...” (Keegan 202).]]> 2019-05-09 13:47:01 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467829 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467927 One night during the monsoon, we wandered down the shore to watch the cremations, standing beside bald men as they threw powders into fire that raged despite the rain]]> 2019-05-09 13:47:11 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467927 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467949 “Walking through the chaos of bells, human ashes, stray dogs, and bones, i felt a kind of double relief.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:47:13 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358467949 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468069 “He’d refuse cameras and yell of those who stared, exhausted and appalled by the 
endless annoyance” ]]> 2019-05-09 13:47:25 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468069 michaela_hamet https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468073
“We read books, rolled dice, and looked out at rice fields and rivers”]]> 2019-05-09 13:47:26 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468073 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468140 “He’d refuse cameras and yell off those who stared, exhausted and appalled by the endless annoyance.”

]]> 2019-05-09 13:47:34 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468140 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468240
“The dying come to die in the holy Gangers River, burning on its banks and escaping reincarnation in its waters.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:47:46 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468240 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468243
“The woman was plump and wrapped in a saffron sari, the man thin and clothed in a starched white shirt.”

]]> 2019-05-09 13:47:46 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468243 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468363 Oxford Comma (my favorite type of comma): “We read books, rolled dice, and looked out at rice 
fields and rivers” ]]> 2019-05-09 13:48:00 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468363 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468390 Luke climbed off his berth, past the thin aged man and his saffron wife, wandering put between....]]> 2019-05-09 13:48:02 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468390 braden_bower https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468402 “When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:48:03 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468402 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468472 “I knew, of course, that my white skin and light features were responsible for the attention, but some part of me still took pleasure from being stared at on trains photographed in city gardens.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:48:07 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468472 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468504 “The dying come to die in the holy Gangers River, burning on its banks and escaping reincarnation in its waters.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:48:10 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468504 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468571 I saw that she used commas when writing down a list I don’t know the name of the rule.]]> 2019-05-09 13:48:20 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468571 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468744 “He’d refuse cameras and yell off those who stared, exhausted and appalled by the endless annoyance.” Pg. 202]]> 2019-05-09 13:48:36 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468744 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468852 “That night, when the train was dark, the woman’s eyes smiled up at me before she faded off to sleep.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468852 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468948 “...we read books, rolled dice, and looked out at rice fields and rivers.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:48:53 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468948 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468997 it won’t let me out of this textbox  without posting again lol]]> 2019-05-09 13:48:58 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358468997 michaela_hamet https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469023 “When Luke and I landed in inda, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:49:00 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469023 michaela_hamet https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469223 2019-05-09 13:49:23 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469223 michaela_hamet https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469230 2019-05-09 13:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469230 michaela_hamet https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469232 2019-05-09 13:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469232 michaela_hamet https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469238 2019-05-09 13:49:25 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469238 michaela_hamet https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469255 2019-05-09 13:49:26 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469255 michaela_hamet https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469269 2019-05-09 13:49:26 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469269 braden_bower https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469280 After a few glasses of Indian wine, I offered that maybe, sometimes, it really wasn’t so bad.]]> 2019-05-09 13:49:27 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358469280 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358471869 “Walking through the chaos of bells, human ashes, stray dogs, and bones, I felt a kind of double relief.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358471869 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358472435 “We read books, rolled dice, and looked out at rice fields and rivers.”]]> 2019-05-09 13:54:40 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/8jx8noad01xm/wish/358472435