https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4 Post one or two of your bricks (JPEGS) to be critiqued here. Please line them up in an orderly fashion, with plenty of space for people to write comments. The Title should reflect the Design Challenge. The "write something here" should reflect the topic: person, place or thing. en-us 2016-11-15 13:48:33 UTC 2023-07-04 07:25:13 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236596724 Place
Rule of Thirds]]> 2018-02-28 18:50:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236596724 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236605420 Person using cropping]]> 2018-02-28 19:02:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236605420 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236607381 Framing

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Adding person alone with protest sign later]]> 2018-02-28 19:06:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236608923 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236608957 framing (people/person brick]]> 2018-02-28 19:07:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236608957 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236609164 2018-02-28 19:07:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236609164 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236609180 Statue of Liberty]]> 2018-02-28 19:07:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236609180 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236609186 Rule of Thirds
Person]]> 2018-02-28 19:07:21 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236609186 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236609509 Rule of thirds
person]]> 2018-02-28 19:07:47 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236609509 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236610277 City Life ]]> 2018-02-28 19:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236610277 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236610348 2018-02-28 19:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236610348 elizabeth_palmer1 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236610557 Pick 6 different works to provide feedback for. They must be work that you have not seen before!

Once someone has about 4-5 comments, please select a work that needs additional feedback.

WRITING FEEDBACK:

Say one thing the person is doing well and should NOT change. Then, state something the artist should work on and what tools/techniques they should use. 
WRITE YOUR INITIALS before you submit your critique!]]> 2018-02-28 19:09:14 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236610557 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236610652 Place
Lines]]> 2018-02-28 19:09:21 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236610652 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236611334 Rule of thirds]]> 2018-02-28 19:10:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236611334 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236614084 person (framing)]]> 2018-02-28 19:14:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236614084 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236614422 Rule of thirds ]]> 2018-02-28 19:14:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236614422 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236614456 Person
Lines]]> 2018-02-28 19:14:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236614456 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236614522 person- lil yachty

]]> 2018-02-28 19:14:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236614522 alg211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236614786 (tile,not a brick)
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]]> 2018-02-28 19:15:04 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236614786 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236616415 I really like the how detailed the picture is and how realistic is. You may want to try to make the picture blend in more with he brick wall by using your photo gallery and maybe use the eraser tool around the edges. ZK]]> 2018-02-28 19:17:28 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236616415 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236616624 -CS]]> 2018-02-28 19:17:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236616624 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236616668 I like the statue of liberty. you can really tell that this is the main focus of the picture. you should try to connect the ocean to the sky. it looks unnatural to have that gap. ]]> 2018-02-28 19:17:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236616668 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236616711 I like the color scheme of this one. It looks like something that one would actually see in real life. I think maybe you could increase the opacity of James Murray so that He's not as faded. Also the framing in this is really good. 
EC]]> 2018-02-28 19:17:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236616711 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236616915 Person(Lebron James)]]> 2018-02-28 19:18:10 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236616915 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236618508 2018-02-28 19:20:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236618508 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236618514 I like the flag overlaying the picture. The person in the bottom right corner seems a little out of the picture. you could bring her more towards the middle to make her a bigger part of it.]]> 2018-02-28 19:20:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236618514 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236618600 I really like how the person looks like it was really spray painted on to the the wall. I also really like the background. You may want to make the person stand out more or the background less because the first thing that my eye goes to is the background which I don't know is what you want. ZK]]> 2018-02-28 19:20:25 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236618600 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236618692 I like this because it looks like the brick is actually the wall and the lightning is creeping over the wall. But maybe you should make the lightning cover the brick, and have the wall show through. You could do that by lowing the opacity of the lightning.  I also like your theme too. 
EC]]> 2018-02-28 19:20:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236618692 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236620144 I like how all of the images relate to Boston and it has a graffiti look. I would brighten Ortiz so he is more of a focal point. -EA]]> 2018-02-28 19:22:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236620144 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236620180 I love the theme of this one. Guy Fieri is so funny and definitely deserves a brick. Maybe you should add some orange though because the red doesn't really seem like it goes with the color scheme he sets for himself. You could adjust the color of the flames probably by increasing the yellow. Really good job!
EC]]> 2018-02-28 19:22:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236620180 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236620208 I really like how the player blend in with the background of the brick wall. one way to enhance the effect that it is spray painted on is to use the eraser tool and turn down the opacity and go around the edges to make it stand out more. ZK]]> 2018-02-28 19:22:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236620208 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236620237 Very creative, good blending, maybe add more background detail
-CS]]> 2018-02-28 19:22:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236620237 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236620314 I like the theme of the picture. You should experiment with other layers to make the drawings look like they're actually on brick. ]]> 2018-02-28 19:23:06 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236620314 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236621103 2018-02-28 19:24:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236621103 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236621826 I really like the color scheme because the green ties everything together really nicely. Kyrie could be brightened more so he is focused on. -EA]]> 2018-02-28 19:25:14 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236621826 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236621993 this is a creative theme. I like it. i suggest you make the brick background more visible. Try a different layer filter. ]]> 2018-02-28 19:25:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236621993 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236622204 This looks cool because at first glance i though that Fenway was an alien ship. I think that maybe you should increase the opacity of the boats because they are almost fading away. And you could use the eraser to erase the bottom half of the ladder if you dont want it overlapping your grass. Just make sure you select the ladder layer first. 
EC]]> 2018-02-28 19:25:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236622204 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236622298 -CS]]> 2018-02-28 19:25:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236622298 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236622466 I really like the theme of the photo and the ladder that shades into the city. You may want to use your brightness and contrast to sell the idea that the ballpark was really spray painted onto the brick wall. ZK]]> 2018-02-28 19:26:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236622466 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236623626 -CS]]> 2018-02-28 19:27:53 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236623626 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236623776 I really like how the words really seem like they were spray painted onto the brick wall. Maybe try to use your photo gallery on the dollar bill so it really seems like graffiti. ZK]]> 2018-02-28 19:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236623776 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236623830 I like what you did wth the edited fire on the left part of the picture. You could try using the eraser tool and make the line between the two picture less of a factor in the picture.m]]> 2018-02-28 19:28:10 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236623830 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236624237 I think this a really cool idea. The American flag background really pulled me in. I think that it is too dark, so maybe try adjusting the lightness. Also try to integrate the gymnasts better because they look out of place. 
EC]]> 2018-02-28 19:28:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236624237 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236624259 2018-02-28 19:28:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236624259 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236624590 I really like how well done the guy is and how it looks like it literally was spray painted onto a brick wall. You may want to use your brightness and contrast on the person to make him stand out a little more because it is difficult to make him out against the brick wall. ZK]]> 2018-02-28 19:29:24 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236624590 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236624658 -CS]]> 2018-02-28 19:29:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236624658 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236624985 2018-02-28 19:30:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236624985 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236625628 -CS]]> 2018-02-28 19:31:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236625628 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236625634 I like the message behind it. The bottom half doesn't look like its on the brick background. Change the filter so it blends in with the bricks. ]]> 2018-02-28 19:31:04 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236625634 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236625669 2018-02-28 19:31:08 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236625669 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236625733 I like how the city looks stretched out. IT's cool because it makes it feel bigger than it actually is. Maybe you could improve this by making the image brighter, because it's colors are all so pale, the city looks like it's fading., 
EC]]> 2018-02-28 19:31:13 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236625733 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236627207 -CS]]> 2018-02-28 19:33:33 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/8iyiacjhpaj4/wish/236627207