https://padlet.com/24agialanella/8i281fvx7nyr Thank you for leaving me feedback. Please remember to keep the comments constructive to help me grow ;) en-us 2018-12-05 17:55:59 UTC 2026-03-17 12:02:39 UTC hello@padlet.com 24afazio https://padlet.com/24agialanella/8i281fvx7nyr/wish/312340382 I thought this story was really great I love the use of figurative language. I loved how you used so much figurative language it really makes the story more detailed and you can picture what is happening in your head. I also really liked the detail you add in your story. It is filled with great detail it makes the story great to read. something that i wish you would have done is maybe have a more descriptive ending. The ending you wrote does not really wrap up the story. Over all this was a great story and I enjoyed reading it. -Ava F]]> 2018-12-07 17:48:57 UTC https://padlet.com/24agialanella/8i281fvx7nyr/wish/312340382