John H by John Heck https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0 This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC 2025-10-21 09:36:07 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png Point of View 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348887 third person]]> 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348887 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348888 setting: blacksmith shop. It is an unjust society because when they get picked for a job thy have to work their for the rest of their live's. They are being denied the freedom of choosing the job they want.]]> 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348888 Characters 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348890 Theo, The Authorities, the Decider, the apprentices,  the Nannies, and Neema]]> 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348890 Conflict 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348891 People were not getting the right education for what they wanted to be.  ]]> 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348891 Plot: Sequential 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348892 Event #1: Theo gets taken from the pod and given his assignment.
Event #2: The blacksmiths are working in the smithy.
Event #3: Neema explains what the authorities are doing.
Event #4: Theo makes a resolution.
Event #5 (Climax): Theo defies the authorities.
Event #6: Theo gets taken to the decider and punished.
Event #7: Neema and the other blacksmiths continue to rebel by singing.
Event #8(Resolution):  The authorities realize they cannot control the rebellion and change their ways.]]> 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348892 Theme 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348893 Theo stood up for the rights of himself and others.]]> 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348893 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348894 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. 

One day in Germany some men came up to our front door. We answered it, but they were soldiers. They took me and my family to a camp, they called it a Concentration Camp. The Nazi's split up the Jews they thought wouldn't be able to work and we never saw them again.They had all of us crammed together and gave us rags to wear as clothes. They had machine gunners protecting the gates if anyone decided to try and escape. When anybody refused to do what they were told they were shot. We were all Jewish. They were giving us little to no rations and had us work all day long. If anyone couldn't work anymore or fell they were shot.]]> 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348894 Due Dates 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348895 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15
-Plot Line for My Narrative: Tuesday, December 19.
-Rough Draft for My Narrative: ]]> 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348895 Prompt 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348896 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348896 Theo's Song 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348897 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348897 Rubric 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348898 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348898 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348899 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348899 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348900 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348900 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348901 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348901 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348902 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348902 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348903 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348903 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348904 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348904 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348905 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348905 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348906 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348906 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348907 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348907 Rough Draft 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348908 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348908 Final Draft 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348909 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348909 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348910 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348910 What are Human Rights? 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348911 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348911 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348913 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348913 30 Basic Human Rights 201600935 https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348914 2017-12-14 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201600935/8hsh60cl04l0/wish/216348914