https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl Leave feedback for the example work below. Each post should contain at least two comments (two criteria) with constructive feedback. Include language from the rubric to help formulate your feedback. en-us 2017-03-28 17:36:30 UTC 2017-03-28 19:14:02 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241482 Non-symmetrical embroidery design
Photo is nice
Neck brace (?) Is weird ]]> 2017-03-28 19:01:29 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241482 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241576 They should have had straighter lines, and should have let the colors from the eyes flow of the page like the colors exploded from his eyes. He shouldn't have stopped it so soon. ]]> 2017-03-28 19:01:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241576 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241580 His string pattern looks sloppy. It looks like he did his project in 5 mins. There is a lot of clutter in the background, but the image of the boy is good. ]]> 2017-03-28 19:01:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241580 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241669 I feel like they should have executed their design a bit better, like the way the string is coming from the eye is not the way he is looking. The left side should be out to the end like the right side. ]]> 2017-03-28 19:02:14 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241669 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241695 I think the photograph needs improvement. It's a nice picture but the background should've been solid. The embroidery also needs improvement the threading isn't neat and precise.]]> 2017-03-28 19:02:17 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241695 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241790 I don't really feel like the picture was great. The background could've been cropped out and the lines could've been done different.]]> 2017-03-28 19:02:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241790 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241791 The string is poorly interacting with the image and is not symmetrical with the image itself. What was done in string was just thrown onto the image.]]> 2017-03-28 19:02:35 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241791 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241854 It has too much going on in the background.]]> 2017-03-28 19:02:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241854 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241933 Not very proportioned or symmetrical. The designs done are rather sloppy which makes it difficult to understand the meaning of the patterns used and what that represents based on the picture. ]]> 2017-03-28 19:03:04 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163241933 00024852 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242122 The string is very unbalanced and not symmetrical, which makes it look messy/sloppy. 
The picture itself is good but the string ruins it. 

]]> 2017-03-28 19:03:43 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242122 10019327 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242329 The composition is not very well put together the picture itself is great and the strings around his neck stands out while the beams coming out of his eye seems veru unbalanced.

]]> 2017-03-28 19:04:18 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242329 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242350 The filter of the photo is interesting, but the background clutter could be removed to emphasis the main character of the photo. The embroidery is nor balanced or thoughtful. I don't think that it adds anything to the photograph and it is not symmetrical.]]> 2017-03-28 19:04:21 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242350 100213011 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242368 The background of the photo is cluttwe]]> 2017-03-28 19:04:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242368 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242446 They should go back and redo the patterns and choose a different photo that is more interesting so they can do more with it. ]]> 2017-03-28 19:04:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242446 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242449 It looks like they rushed through the end of it, but I like the placement of string on his neck. The string coming from the eyes isn't proportional or balanced. It hard to get any type of message from the artwork. I like the photo

]]> 2017-03-28 19:04:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242449 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242687 2017-03-28 19:05:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242687 10027135 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242739 The patterns aren't very creative.There is stuff in the background.There could of been more improvement.]]> 2017-03-28 19:05:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242739 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242760 he should of chosen a different photo and planed it out more 

]]> 2017-03-28 19:05:29 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242760 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242799 His photo was great but his embroidery was missing something he needed a little bit more creativity in the photo. 


]]> 2017-03-28 19:05:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163242799 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163243278 The composition of the photo isn't that good. The picture is good but its the composition that throws it off. ]]> 2017-03-28 19:07:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163243278 10015028 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163243513 Although the composition does not use the thirds rule it is a good symmetrical look. The embroidery composition is weak at best because it does not use straight lines as intended.  Although the image was digitally edited the artist  did not apply any effort to remove the background clutter.

]]> 2017-03-28 19:08:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163243513 https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163243701 The design is not symmetrical.]]> 2017-03-28 19:08:42 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/8hfbaqkpw6yl/wish/163243701