Writing a letter - Grade 10 Orange by TEVİTÖL

tevitol — 2020-12-10 17:40:50 UTC

One of your best friends has been failing all his exams lately because he thinks he is a goal-driven person and procrastination is what he needs. He has probably got that idea from the English lessons you had about procrastination and that it might sometimes be good for some people.

However, apparently, he is not someone who can handle all the workload by procrastinating. If he does not realize that, he will ruin his school life.

As you want to be able to express all your thoughts and advice clearly and thoroughly, you decide to write an email to your friend about this giving him some advice.

You must use one as...as comparative, one too and one enough.

2020-12-11 07:55:32 UTC

Hi buddy, I thought a mail about help will good for you. Last time we spoke about your exam grades and as I remember grades were not enough. You know these grades aren't important for you and me for a good friendship but we need bursary in our school. I mean you already know what is happening when we have bad grades so we need a solution. Also, you know the solution, so you are not gone listen to scolding from me, relax. You know I know you trust me and it's the same for me I trust you too, so stop doing reschedule something and start being ordered. And don't forget you can do as last year as. I will glad when you proved me right. Loots of love Your bruh (Batuhan Mürseloğlu)

Diclesu_Kuzucu — 2020-12-11 07:56:41 UTC

Hello my dear friend. I recently noticed that you are procrastinating a lot and ruining your school life. Of course procrastination is normal unless you make an habit of it. That is your problem my friend. You are procrastinating unnecessarily. You have to back to normal. No one, and I mean NO ONE, procrastinates as much as you do. You need to pull yourself together. I am telling you all this because I care about you and I don't want you to ruin your life. Please be careful. I love and care about you. See you around :)

2020-12-11 07:58:19 UTC

Hello Alex,
How are you? I am a little upset because I heard from Ms. Betül that you have been failing all your exams. You know how much I care about you and therefore I want to help you with this issue. I figured that you are thinking about starting to procrastinate because of our English lessons. You also probably talked with Mac who is a master procrastinator about this. But you are not as good as Mac in time management and procrastination is not for you. Once you start to procrastinate you won’t be able to finish anything because you stress a lot when the deadline is closer and you don’t know how much procrastination is too much. What you should do is make weekly plans and put enough time to do your work properly into your weekly plan. The keyword is time management and spreading your tasks through the week so you don’t have too much work piled up. If you need help fort the weekly plan you can pay a short visit to me and we can make the plan together.

Sincerely,
Nurperi

2020-12-11 07:58:36 UTC

Dear Yaman Ateş Ünal,

From what I hear, you got pretty low marks on your exams. So I decided to email you instead of writing from WhatsApp :D. Everyone knows that you are someone who constantly postpones their work to as last possible as time. You're a very lazy person. I think you're really excited about the subject of English classes. That's why you think postponing is a good thing for you. I think enough of this nonsense. You have to work hard to fix your grades. Your age is too old to be offered advice. You need to pull yourself together before your parents give you the results of these notes.

Best wishes,

Barış. Barış, do you mean "you are old enough to.." ?

2020-12-11 08:03:11 UTC

Sup loser,
I've heard that you have bern going trough some hard times, I thot that sending an email instead of using any other easier ways would have been good for you. You don't need to feel like a failiure just because one stupid person gave low scores to you due to a stupid lesson, schools do be frustrating sometimes. You have the capabilities and potensial at least as (as much as) any other student in your school. So stop overreacting and you know my phone if you feel like you need to talk with someone.
See you later,
Arda Atmaca.

2020-12-11 08:04:13 UTC

My dear friend,
I hope you are doing well. How has your life been? I hope you had some life changing experiences that helped you go through the barriers in your life. I was watching you for a long time and I saw you've changed after the English lesson. Remember that? It was about procastination. I don't want to sound harsh on you so I'll take it slowly. Procastination can sometimes be a good thing. It may help you get your work done faster and it may actually make you feel relaxed and out of worries. But you can't put all of the tasks in a tight schedule sometimes. You know most deadlines are at Sunday and we will have more than 3 long tasks to do. We can't do all these tasks at once sometimes, so we need put them on a priority chart. You know there is an essay project that we must do and we don't know how many homeworks that we would get in the future. I don't want you to leave all of them on the same day and feel stressed about it. I know you fell stressed when you don't get your work done and you often feel bad afterwards. You shouldn't feel this way. It is not healthy. Too much work can wreck a person and make them feel like they have no purpose but to work in life. These feelings are not as healthy as you might think. If you need any help on your work, we can arrange a priority chart so that you can have more time and more peace in mind to do your tasks. I hope you wouldn't get the wrong idea and I'll see you soon.

With all my love,
Dolunay

2020-12-11 08:05:18 UTC

My dear Friend, How are you, how you feel? I hope you are doing well. first of all I need to say that I am very sorry that you failed your exams. If you failed your exams don't be pessimist it is just because you didn't realize what study tip is most suitable for you yet. You thought that procrastination is better way to prepare your exams. you should realize what the procrastination is. Maybe you don't feel good. You should prepare a schedule for your exams and homework. And do the schedule properly. Do not delay something that you need to do. With this life plan you will see you will be having extra time and you feel more relax. Don't ruin your school life and don't give up. Realize who you are, who you wanna be. Realize the worth of yourself. There is nothing you can't do. I believe in you. Write me back when you start to apply the schedule. And last thing that I wanna say, ignore what people say about you, don't let people ruin your life. Listen who give you an advice, forget about others opinion who tried to ruin your life. Lots Of Love <3 Zeynep Güler Zeynep, you've missed using "as..as/too/enough" in your writing.

2020-12-11 09:47:17 UTC

Hey,
I just wanted to give some advice to you in this mail. Both of us aware that your grades are way lower than the average. You should fix your grades before you graduate from high school. You must study as much as I. I know it's not that easy but at least you need to fix your English grades. From my observation, you are not studying enough to be successful. You are too lazy for a student. Don't forget your job. You are a student and your work is just study.
With love - Tarık Anafarta

alpercengiz14 — 2020-12-11 12:46:07 UTC

Hi, my dear friend

First of all my friend, I saw you are always late your homeworks and I thought I should email to you.

Bro, procrastinating doesn’t increase your success all the time, procrastinating is usefull in the spesific times because when you postpone the anything your anxiety, stress level will be grow. So if you are doing all your homeworks with procrastinate your situation will be more hard. But you must get rid of this laziness I know you are smart as least as me and you know this too. You must work hard to increase your grades, just a little bit serious is enough. I trust you bro.

I wish you to best,

Alper Alper, do you mean "you are as smart as me" ? "being serious is enough"?

berkdenizy — 2020-12-11 14:38:58 UTC

Hi My Dear Friend,

How are you? What are you doing since we couldn’t hang out because of exams? I hope that you are good. I heard that you are failing on some of your exams and that is why I am writing this email. I know that you are a goal-driven person who is procrastinating. Yes, procrastinating is easier and have some benefits too but you should understand that you can’t finish all of your works by putting off. You are true in a point that people need relaxing too. On the other hand, you shouldn’t forget your workloads. So what about trying to make a plan that can make you less procrastinator? In this way, you can manage the time and not failing in your exams. Moreover, there will be some time for you to relax and do some leisure activities. I know that you will read this carefully. Also, I know that you have enough capability to do all of those things. Don’t forget that it will ruin your high school and future life if you continue like that. Let me know about how is your plan and exams going? I am waiting for your email. Hope to see you as soon as possible.

Best wishes

Berk Berk Deniz, you've missed using "as..as/too/enough" in your writing.

bengiconoglu — 2020-12-11 18:10:09 UTC

X hello, you're one of the my best friends and I don't want to ruin your life. So that's why I decided to write this mail to you. I can clearly see that you have been failing all your exam and you are so sad about it. Your parents are angry to you, you feel like you are stupid.... I really understand you but don't worry, it's not too late and we can fix this and I'm ready to give the all the help that I can give. As we learn from the English lesson, you procrastination all of your tasks and homework and that's why you have been failing your exams so you have to stop this. Also, you think like "I'm not as clever as the other students in TEVITOL. So that's why I'm failling all of my exams." No, you are so wrong! You can't blame yourself like this. I know if you fix your procrastination problem, your exam will start to rise up. So please, do your tasks on their time because it affects you very badly. I hope you will, I love you and I know you will do it the things that I said :) I love you so much, best wishes xx

arelencin — 2020-12-11 19:26:50 UTC

Hello Sweatheart, How are you today? I hope everything is OK with you? According to news that I have heard about today, "your exam is not quite good", and some people are disturbing you and then you are getting anoyed for that situation. Something that I learned in my entire life people want to control you with manipulation so, you shouldn't got manipulate by people, you should plan a good schedule for you and do not procrastinate. Last of all, your struggle is enough for the pandemic situation

arabulaliarda — 2020-12-11 20:17:27 UTC

Hello dear friend,
I heard that you did bad on your exams. Guess what, IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT. STOP PROCRASTINATING. Just kidding. I understand your problem. I had the same exact problem too. I must say... Forget about the past now, enough is enough! I know that you are as smart as the other kids, maybe even smarter. You need to learn how to manipulate your own brain. Everyone learns this differently, so I can't give many instructions but I still believe in you.
Ali Arda Arabul. Ali Arda, you've missed using "too/enough/as..as in your writing.

2020-12-11 20:32:18 UTC

Hi buddy,

I know your exam grade is not enough for your expectations. I just realized that you will try another way to do things better and that way is procrastinating tasks etc. I think you should never even try this. You’re not a person who can procrastinate task and do them better. You have been doing the tasks by a plan and not procrastination for 8 years. You’re not used to procrastinate. If you try to change your style suddenly, you will not make what you wanted by procrastinating. It will be too hard for a person like you. Also you did the exams and assignments very well till now. You can’t change your style just because of 1 exam week. Don’t emulate the people who procrastinate. They’re procrastinating the thing for a long time. They’re master at this :) I know it’s a sad situation but you won’t do things like them. So, I seriously recommend you to go on with your own way. Love you <3
Umut Gül

simgepala05 — 2020-12-11 20:36:17 UTC

Hi bud, I was just wondering how is your school life. I heard that you have some failing grades just like

my last year. You know, I suffered from procrastination. I hanged up all my essays and writing tasks till the last minute, it wasn’t much after when I realized that I was making everything harder for me. I mean not everyone is a monster who can work under a limited time and panic. And as soon as I realized that I started to separate enough time for each task, that way I can relax my brain and focus on the task more. I hope my advice and bad-grade background can help you. See you soon, bye. (Simge) (I thought we were really close so I just directly get to the point). Simge, you've missed using "too/enough/as..as in your writing.

tevitol — 2020-12-12 15:53:49 UTC

Congrats Orange Group! Fantastic work!!!

adanurozcan — 2020-12-17 14:08:33 UTC

hello my friend, I've heard that your exam grades have fallen, which I think doesn't worry you too much, because you use procrastination enough while studying for your exams because you think you're a goal-oriented person. it'll make your grades lower and lower. my advice is to work on time and rest in what's left for you, do your best as much as possible without procastination., instead of putting it off. best wishes, ada. Ada, you've missed using "too/enough/as..as" in your writing.

adanurozcan — 2020-12-17 14:08:42 UTC

hello my friend,
I've heard that your exam grades have fallen, which I think doesn't worry you too much, because you use procrastination enough while studying for your exams because you think you're a goal-oriented person. it'll make your grades lower and lower. my advice is to work on time and rest in what's left for you, do your best as much as possible without procastination., instead of putting it off.
best wishes, ada.