PT1 A Formal email by Beatriz Varella

Bernardo

2020-06-01 22:03:25 UTC

Dear Ms Bernardes
I am writting this email to give you some improvement ideas to our canteen.
Firstly, i would recommend to lower the price of the food, because all of them have an abusive price.
Secondly, the line is too long, and because of this some people can't eat properly, so i would recomment to add another line.
It is all i have to say
Your sincerly, Bernardo

Helena

2020-06-01 22:03:32 UTC

Dear Ms Dielsen,
I writing to talk to you about the school canteen. I want to suggest some improvement ideas.
I think we have a good variety of food, but some drinks are a little expensive by the amount of liquid that comes. The food is really good and there are some "healthy" and unhealthy food. The açaí is really good and the people who work there are very cool.
A bad point is that the row is very full, so when we are going to eat the break ends.

Pedro Paz

2020-06-01 22:03:35 UTC

Dear mr. Wilson.
Im writing this to suggest some things that could add to our canteen. I would like to suggest to lower the prices of the food. They are very expensive, and most of the times, they’re small, so not worth it. Secondly, I want to suggest you is about the row, that sometimes is very messy, and people are always trying to jump the queue, what is pretty bad. In addition, the coordination could encourage most of the students to buy the tickets before the class, to the row in the interval don’t be very messy.
Well, I think that’s it.
Your sincerely, Pedro Paz.

joana :)

2020-06-01 22:04:09 UTC

Dear Ms. Bernardes,
I am writing you because a lot of people from the 8th grade were complaining about the canteen.
Firstly, I would like to say that the food is great, and there is nothing wrong with it. What really bother us, is the high price. As an example, a tortuguita can't cost 2 reais. I would like to recommend to lower the prices, some of them are insane.
Secondly, I would like to talk about the lines. Opening the second cashier when the line on the fist one is big would be a solution, for example. Moreover, the staff are very nice, so it really compansate.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Joana Reis.

Giulia

2020-06-01 22:04:15 UTC

Dear Mr. Silva
I am writing this to give you some ideas about CSVP's canteen. I think the snacks are very expensive, and there is not some really healthy food anymore, the healthy canteen has almost the same thing of the regular one.
I also think that should have more vegan and veggie meals.
Since the school changed the canteen, there is a lot of expensive sweets that nobody buys, for the best of the students, I think you could replace them with different options of healthy, vegan and veggies snacks.
Since what bothers us the must is the prices, I suggest the canteen replace these with, cheapers snacks.
Lastly

Rafael

2020-06-01 22:04:26 UTC

Dear Ms. Silva

I'm writing this to give some tips for canteen that I heard many students comment on. I think that despite the variety of healthy options the prices have gone up a lot, leaving a canteen less and less accessible and I also think we should devote more varieties for lunch. In addition, the employees are not very receptive, that is, some are using the cell phone instead of taking my orders. And just one more thing, the location of the canteen I don't think is practical and efficient at all, I preferred the old place, although it is also not very good.

beatriz

2020-06-01 22:04:46 UTC

Dear mr. ?
Im writting this email to give you some ideas to our canteen.
Firstly, I would like to say that your food is really good. However, the food is very expensive. I understand that we are living a crise, but i recommed to reduce the price, not all the students can afford it.

Antônio

2020-06-01 22:05:13 UTC

Dear Mr. Silva
I am writing to offer some suggestions about the school canteen.
Firstly, I would like to say that, the canteen is already very good. It offers healthy food, like fish or whole rice.
But secondly, I would say that it has not a lot of variety of healthy food.

Maryna

2020-06-01 22:08:01 UTC

Dear mr. santos
i am writing to suggest you about the canteen. i think most things are very expensive, and