7th grade Writing Feedback by Isabelle Li https://padlet.com/24ili/8f8c054h27lg Thanks for reading my writing! Please leave some feedback. en-us 2018-12-05 15:18:09 UTC 2018-12-07 15:21:30 UTC hello@padlet.com suspense narrative 24aeggert https://padlet.com/24ili/8f8c054h27lg/wish/312251149 I love your narrative and thinking about all your thoughts about all your ideas. 
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