-A lot of beautiful places there

-Their culture is very interesting 

-Their people are also good looking, both men and women.

-Like in the photo, the beach is so clear and pleasing to look at.

2. 

       I.          repeat the original auxiliary verb. 

      II.          balance the positive and negative.

    III.          add pronoun to match the subject.

3. for affirmation, or to ask a question.

4. When feeling confident, the intonation goes down. On the other hand, when feeling uncertain, intonation goes up.

Group Members:

Nazihah 

Nik Alisha
Muhammad Khairul Nashran

Syahidatul Faatihah

Saif

Mohamad Hafizul Hakim

Introduction:

Based on observation, males are more likely to take jobs early due to the fact that their physical abilities give them advantage for manual labour jobs which are easier to obtain for males than females. 

 

Thesis statement:

Females have less job opportunities than males so they are encouraged to further their education before trying for a job.

 

Body

Topic sentence 1:

The difference in mentality between genders.

Supporting details:

I.                 Males are likely to think that they are the head of the family and they need to support the family as soon as possible.

II.                Females get more pressure to pursue their study from the family.

Topic sentence 2:

Body physique.

 

Supporting details:

I.                 Males tend to think that it's better to start working early to support the family since they have more job opportunities due to their natural physical capabilities.

 

II.                Females have harder time getting a job because they may have some obstacle in doing physical oriented job. That is why they are prone to learn more and get a certificate for a job that's more suitable to their capabilities. 

Topic sentence 3:

Females tend to study more than males which gave them an edge in entering university.

Supporting details:

I.                 Females have more affinity in studying than males due to how they are able to give more focus.

II.                Better grades during high school years gave them credits to pick their choice university.

 

Conclusion:

In conclusion, because of their lack in physical capabilities, responsibilities and ability to focus, more females tend to apply for a university to further their studies in order to get an advantage over the males to get a job for their future.