Good to know... by Cathy https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy Add two points of feedback you've received on your draft that you'd like to share to help others improve too. en-us 2018-03-27 22:16:14 UTC 2018-03-27 23:22:30 UTC hello@padlet.com If you have any material in your draft which is matching in Turnitin, it MUST be referenced (or it will be considered plagiarism). challewell https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246711274 2018-03-27 22:42:53 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246711274 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713785 Make it evident what reading you are making of the subject.]]> 2018-03-27 23:05:35 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713785 Blurb should be before byline. https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713844 2018-03-27 23:06:10 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713844 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713846 Story should be presented in an order that accurately shows the invitation you wish to present. ]]> 2018-03-27 23:06:11 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713846 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713888 Revise throughout the use of commons, full stops, spelling and grammar]]> 2018-03-27 23:06:32 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713888 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713889 more reflection needed on what the subjects achievements say about them as a person

]]> 2018-03-27 23:06:32 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713889 Be clear on what stage of the persons life you are reflecting on. https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713905 2018-03-27 23:06:34 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713905 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713940 Link back to the representation of your character effectively]]> 2018-03-27 23:06:50 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713940 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713956 Revise use of commas and other punctuation]]> 2018-03-27 23:06:57 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246713956 Work on punctuation to integrate quotes. https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714002 2018-03-27 23:07:21 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714002 Be consistent with your viewpoint throughout the article https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714046 2018-03-27 23:07:38 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714046 Vary sentence beginnings https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714053 2018-03-27 23:07:40 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714053 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714057 Reword sentences to make sense]]> 2018-03-27 23:07:42 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714057 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714061 Structure is chronological and flows nicely.]]> 2018-03-27 23:07:42 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714061 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714075 You're not analysing the text; you are creating your own construction of the person of interest]]> 2018-03-27 23:07:46 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714075 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714079 Expand on existing building blocks]]> 2018-03-27 23:07:47 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714079 Verb tense https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714203 Stay in past tense throughout article.
May change to present tense on reflecting statement.]]> 2018-03-27 23:08:43 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714203 Make sure your focus characteristics are clearly identified and are reflected upon throughout https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714206 2018-03-27 23:08:43 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714206 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714267 Ensure that the article is engaging for readers]]> 2018-03-27 23:09:09 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714267 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714273 2018-03-27 23:09:15 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714273 MORE QUOTES- support statements https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714304 2018-03-27 23:09:27 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714304 short sharp sentences https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714427 2018-03-27 23:10:26 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714427 Don't double up on points https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714449 2018-03-27 23:10:38 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714449 Don't quote right after the headline <3 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714478 2018-03-27 23:10:54 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714478 Expressing Qualities https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714479 Make sure you have reflected on showing different qualities]]> 2018-03-27 23:10:54 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714479 https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714704 Make sure you have a lot of reflecting statements]]> 2018-03-27 23:12:57 UTC https://padlet.com/challewell/8en9ydh2uljy/wish/246714704