Agree or disagree by Garreth Keating

garkeat — 2026-02-23 11:34:49 UTC

Sports are a great way to keep fit and improve our health. However some sports like the UFC are dangerous and can harm us. For this reason, I think dangerous sports should be banned.

Boxing should be banned.

2026-02-23 11:38:00 UTC

Boxing should be banned because it is a dangerous sport. Unlike other athletic competitions, it involves two people intentionally harming each other. Participants in a match can be beaten until they bleed profusely, suffer broken bones, or sustain lifelong damage.EXCELLENT. WELL DONE. HOWEVER, THE INTRODUCTION IS MORE GENERAL THANTHIS. KEEP POINTS AND EXAMPLES FOR THE OTHER PARAGRAPHS

2026-02-23 11:40:35 UTC

Sport like Thai boxing is one that sport very dangerous for the people who are trying to learning it in comparison with other sports like football or basketball and volleyball is less dangerous WHAT IS EACH SENTENCE ABOUT? THAT IS THE GRAMMATICAL SUBJECT. YOU HAVE 2 IN THIS SENTENCE. SPORTS LIKE BOXING AND OTHER SPORTS.

Summer is the best season

2026-02-23 11:40:49 UTC

summer is often the best season OF the year, ~~and~~ toFOR many people. The days are longer, the weather is warm, in general felling of happiness, and happy days GOOD

2026-02-23 11:42:01 UTC

Is Summer the best season?

THAT Depends on your point of view, ~~exist~~ THERE AREpeople who think summer is the best because there are sun and energy although many people prefer winter cause we are more elegant however andWHAT about the BALANCED APPROACH ~~middle~~?

2026-02-24 09:19:39 UTC

I believe that men take sport too serious is not a question,IT is an affirmation, NEW SENTENCE HERE BECAUSE WE HAVE A NEW SUBJECT. NEW SUBJECT= NEW SENTENCE OR CONJUNCTION" AND, BUT"we can see every time, in any places and it should be studied DULL STOPalso why we need talk about it?

In my opinion it starts too early with boys, NEW SENTENCEin my countryIT is common( you) TO see baby’s in stadiums with ours fathers,THERE IS ( exist) a big pressionPRESSURE in childhood about which futbool club they need support and a manipulation by them fathersTHEIR PARENTS, children grow absolutely involved in organized fan groups listening about hate and regalityBETTER WORD?, upon reaching adolescence, they begin to take their own steps towards fanaticism and as a result, THERE IS an endless vicious cycle.

It need to be stopped with parents, that’s fineIT IS FINE TO love sports and football although we need to be humans first. EXCELLENT STRUCTURE IN PARAGRAPHS. RENEMVER TO CHECK FOR SUBJECTS , LIKE "IT IS, NOT "IS" N3XT TIME AND PUT A FULL STOPP OR LINKING WORD BEFORE EACH NEW SUBJECT.

OTHERWISE, GREAT JOB.