1. The Daragang Magayon Festival was a month-long annual festival celebrating Mt. Mayon. It was held in April.  in the entire province of Albay with most of the activities held in Legazpi City. The Fistival features agricultural products Display and trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events, street parades, photo/arts exhibits and sports events.

2. Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the ‘’It”) while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The Objective of the Game is for the players to hitted and knocked down the milk can with the pamato, and for its to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player Was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the “it”.

   
   

3. At the start of school Dora was afrid of her new Teacher. Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understan how the Teacher come up with the rules The rules were their so students would be respecful of theyselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best Teacher she evere had!

·         Of all the different types, black teas usually contain the most caffeine.

·         There are many different varieties of tea.

·         So, if you’re drinking tea late at night, you might want to choose the red or herbal tea instead of black tea if you don’t want to be kept awake by caffeine.

·         Teas can be grouped into a few major categories: black, green, white red and herbal teas.

·         On the other hand, red teas and herbal teas can be almost entirely caffeine-free.

Magayon Festival was a month-long annual festival celebrating Mt. Mayon. It was held in April. in the entire province of Albay with most of the activities held in Legazpi City. The Festival features agricultural products

Display and trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events, street parades, photo/arts exhibits and sports events.

2. Tumbang Preso or

Tumba Lata is an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stay behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toeline. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it".

3.At the start of school

Dora was afraid of her new Teacher. Mrs.

Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces.

As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the Teacher come up with the rules. The rules were their so students would be respecful of their selves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best Teacher she ever had!

Of all the different types, black teas usually contain the most caffeine. On the other hand, red teas and herbal teas can be almost entirely caffeine-free. So, if you're drinking tea late at night, you might want to choose the red or herbal tea instead of black tea if you don't want to be kept awake by caffeine.

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2. Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game where in one player guards the milk can (the ‘’It”) while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The Objective of the Game is for the players to hitted and knocked down the milk can with the pamato, and for its to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the “it”.

3. At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new Teacher. Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the Teacher come up with the rules the rules were their so students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best Teacher she ever had!

2.Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the ‘’It”) while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The Objective of the game is for the players to hitted and knocked down the milk can with the pamato, and for its to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the “it”.

3.At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new Teacher Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued, dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules were their so students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, dora though Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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1. The Daragang Magayon Festival was a month-long annual festival celebrating Mt. Mayon. It was held in April. In the entire province of Albay with most of the activities held in Legazpi City. The Festival features agricultural products display, trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events, street parades, and photo/arts exhibits and sports events.

2. Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an game. It is usually played in backyards, parks, or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it".

3.At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scared someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules. The rules were their so students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year. Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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1. The Daragang Magayon Festival was a month long annual festival celebrating Mt. Mayon. It was held in April in the entire province of Albay with most of the activities held in Legazpi City. The Fistival features agricultural products Display and trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events, street parades, photo/arts exhibits and sports events

2. Tumbang Preso or Tumbang Lata are an

indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The Objective of the game is for the players to hitted and knocked down the milk can with the pamato, and for its to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it"(period)

3. At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new Teacher. Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the chess to follow. She scared someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understan how the Pesacher come up with the rules were their so students would be respectful of themzelves and cach other. By the end of the year, Dors though Mirs. Davis was the best Teacher she ever had!

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There are many different varieties of tea.Teas can be grouped into a few major categories: black, green, white red and herbal teas. Of all the different types, black teas usually contain the most caffeine. On the other hand, red teas and herbal teas can be almost entirely caffeine-free. So, if you're drinking tea late at night, you might want to choose the red or herbal tea instead of black tea if you don't want to be kept awake by caffeine.

2.Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stay behind the toe- line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toeline. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it".

3.At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs.Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules. The rules were their so students would be respecful of their selves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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Once upon a time in the modest town of Willowbrook, there lived a phototechnical called Maya. And where did she without the camera and the lens? Indeed, Maya had a unique ability to capture the moments – short, instantaneous, but containing within themselves everything that is most precious in life. Maya’s passion for capturing these rare glimpses of special time began when she received her first real camera from her grandfather for his birthday. This gift changed her perception of the world – she began to see her native city differently, to see wonders. Therefore, armed with a camera she collected, Maya began capturing moments where everyone else breathed. That’s how she found her special vision in life: she walking down city streets.

There once was a girl named Luna. Luna lives with her grandmother, they live near the beach. The two of them only have each other as Luna is an orphan. Having no siblings nor parents, Luna tends to entertain herself by playing with the sand. Writing names and drawing pictures on the sand. She has quite a lonely life, but she always thinks to herself that a quiet and peaceful life with her grandmother whom she loves the most is better than anything else in the world.

One afternoon as the sun was setting, her grandmother called off Luna to go home together with her to eat. As Luna was walking, A cold breeze of wind reaches her. She paused for a minute, listening to the ripples of the waves in the vast ocean.

Looking at the endless waves, Luna suddenly tears up thinking to herself “This life of mine is worth living if i always get to listen to these calming waves of the sea.” Growing up, Luna always thinks that her life has was not valued because of being abandoned by her parents. That was until her grandmother found her and took her home to take care of her. Her grandmother served as her guardian and always made Luna felt the love she never received from anyone else. The sea and her grandmother means a lot to her as they were the ones that gave Luna the comfort she always longs for while growing up. Little drops of tears flowed from her eyes, Luna zones back up and wipes her tears. Smiling, she runs up to her grandmother and hugs her tight with a grateful smile on her face.

The two of them walks alongside the shore on the way home to enjoy dinner while the sun was setting. Enjoying the cold breeze and each others company while linking arms. A grandmother’s love for her granddaughter even if they’re not blood related is more precious than anything.

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2. Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the ‘’It”) while the others stays behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for its to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the “it”.

3. At the start of school, Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora began to understand how the teacher come up with the rules. There are rules so that students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best Teacher she ever had!

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There are many different varieties of tea.Teas can be grouped into a few major categories: black, green, white red and herbal teac. Of all the different types, black teas usually contain the most caffeine. On the other hand,red teas and herbal teas can be almost entirely caffeine-free.So, if you're drinking tea late at night, you might want to choose the red or herbal tea instead of black tea if you don't want to be kept awake by caffeine.

2. Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata is an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stay behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it".

3. At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scared someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules. The rules were their so students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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2.Tumbang preso or tumbang lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game where in one player guards the milk can (the "it") while the others stayed behind the toe line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player was tagged while covering the pamato, they become the it.

3. At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher Mrs. Davis seemed nice,but she had so many rules for the class to follow. Sge scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued,Dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules. The rules were their so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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2. Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks, or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for its to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it".

3. At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scared someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules. The rules were their so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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2. Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata is an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks, or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stay behind the toe line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player is tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it".

3. At the start of school, Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scares someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora began to understand how the teacher came up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respectful to themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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Let me tell you about my friend for a very long time,since we started junior high we became really good friends,I feel happy when she's beside me,we always laugh and have fun whenever we are together,we also do a lot of crazy things. But all of things change when we're in grade 9,our friendship is over now, because I just found out that she was talking bad behind my back and also using me for money,acads I thought our friendship will last forever but I guess everybody change. I feel so betrayed after I found out that news,I also feel hurt whenever I remember what happened,all I know is I treated her as my own sister and also give all I have,and if you might read this I hope your regretting what you did. Now I'm happy with my new friends and also im thanking god for making me realize that she isn't a true friend,I hope you guys can also learn a lesson from my story, don't trust anyone so easily they might also use you and take you for granted.

9-ABUEVA | ANDREIA ALEC OCAMPO

2. Tumbang Preso or Tumbang Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyard, parks or in the streets where there is vehicular traffic. It is a game where in one player guards the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hitted and knocked down the milk can with the pamato,and for its to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato,they become the "it".

3. At the start of school Dora was afraid to her new Teacher. Mrs.Davis seamed nice,but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules were their so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora through Mrs.Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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2. Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata is an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stay behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it".

3. At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scared someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules. The rules were their so students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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There once was a girl name Lilia.She was a high school student and it's her dream to be an artist,even though she doesn't draw very well yet treasure all her drawings like it's her whole world.

One day,she had an art project and her sister accidentally ruined her art project she was very mad but her sister apologize because she ruined Lilia's project ,so Lilia is thinking of a solution on how to fix her art project.Then she suddenly had an idea on how to fix her art project ,so she pick up her art materials then she starts fixing it ,a minute later she's done fixing it. Lilia is so happy that she fixed it .

The end🐸

In the bustling city of Metropolis, there was a group of individuals who were not like the rest. They were not the richest, nor were they the most powerful, but they were the most essential. They were the street cleaners, the maintenance workers, the garbage collectors the unseen heroes of the city.

Every morning, as the city was still asleep, they would begin their work. They cleaned the streets, fixed the broken lights, and collected the garbage, making the city presentable and livable for its inhabitants. They worked in the shadows, unnoticed and unappreciated, but they took pride in their work, knowing that they were making a difference.

One day, a massive storm hit Metropolis. The city was in chaos, with debris littering the streets and buildings damaged. The inhabitants were scared and helpless. But amidst the chaos, the unseen heroes rose to the occasion.

They worked tirelessly, clearing the streets, repairing the damages, and restoring order in the city. They braved the storm, putting their lives at risk for the sake of the city they loved. Their efforts did not go unnoticed this time. The inhabitants of Metropolis saw their dedication and bravery and started to appreciate them.

After the storm, a celebration was held in honor of these unseen heroes. The city's inhabitants came together to express their gratitude for their hard work and dedication. The unseen heroes were no longer unseen. They were recognized and appreciated for their efforts.

From that day forward, the inhabitants of Metropolis started to see the unseen heroes in a new light. They realized that these individuals were the backbone of their city, working tirelessly to ensure their comfort and safety. The unseen heroes became the celebrated heroes, their work no longer unnoticed but appreciated and valued

2. "Tumbang Preso" or "Tumba Lata" is an indigenous game typically played in backyards, parks, or streets with minimal vehicular traffic. One player guards the milk can (the 'It') while others stand behind the toe-line with their "pamatos." The objective of the game is to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato and return it to a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line. If a player is tagged while retrieving their pamato, they become the new "it."

3. At the start of school, Dora was afraid of her new teacher, Mrs. Davis. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had many rules for the class to follow, which scared someone to pieces. As the school year progressed, Dora began to understand why the teacher came up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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The Daragang Magayon Festival was month-long annual festival celebrating Mt. Mayon. It was held in April. In the entire province of Albay with most of the activities held in Legazpi City. The Festival features agricultural products display and trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events, street parades, photo/arts exhibits, and sports events.

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Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata is an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks, or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stay behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player Was tagged while recovering their pamato, they became the "it".

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At the start of school, Dora was afraid of her new Teacher. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scared someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora began to understand how the teacher came up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respectful to themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought that Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had.

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There were two girls who were friends when they were children, they were always together everywhere and agreed on anything. One day, a girl was introduced to her best friend, she introduced her new friend from Manila. At first everything was fine, but these past few days, the old friends don't talk much anymore, because she has a new friend. and one day his best friend moved away and ignored him until they stopped talking because his friend didn't have time for him because of his new friend and because of that they were no longer friends.

1. The Daragang Magayon Festival was a Month-long annual festival celebrating Mt. Mayon. It was held in April. In the entire province of Albay with most of the activities held in Legazpi City. The Festival features agricultural products Display and trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events, street parades, photo/arts exhibits and sports events.

2. Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the ‘’It”) while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The Objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for Its to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the “It”.

3. At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new Teacher. Mrs. Davis seems nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the Teacher come up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best Teacher she ever had!

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Once upon a time there lived 2 friends named Cassy and Katie. The world they lived in was getting attacked by many zombies. They were everywhere. Katie and Cassy ran into their tree house and hid in there for months. After a while they thought why not just go out and see how to world is now.

Chapter- 2

Both of them stepped out of the tree house and saw many zombies and everything was burned down. “We have missed a lot! Look at this place! It’s all burned down!” said Katie. “Yeah… Want to look around? We need to be really careful while walking around because there are so many zombies! We don’t want to be zombie food! Eww!” said Cassy. “Yes, let’s do it! First I’ll go down then you come behind me.” Said Katie. They both climbed down the tree house ladder slowly.

Chapter- 3

“Wow! It is really empty out here! I wonder if we are the last people in this world!” said Cassy. “Well, we might be! Let’s look around!” said Katie. “I can see no-one at all here! It actually feels like we are the last humans here!” said Cassy. “Yeah! There is no-one here! I will go to all the stores and Cassy go to all the restaurants!” said Katie. “I am hungry so sure!” said Cassy. “Come on! You’re not eating any food there! You never know, it can have poison in it!” said Katie. “Yeah, yeah. I won’t!” said Cassy. “Okay! Now let’s start! Call me if you find anything!” said Katie.

Chapter- 4

Both of them quietly walked away to explore how their world looked now. Cassy walked into a restaurant. All she could see is food on the walls, floor and ceiling! Just then she hears a noise! “Ouch! Ouch!” it said. Cassy slowly walked towards that sound and saw a huge caterpillar on the ground. “A-a-are you okay?” she asked politely. “Not really… One of the zombie bit me and it hurts a lot! I thought that this is a safe place to come and relax.” Said the huge caterpillar. “Oh! That’s bad! I have some medicines in my bag! Do you mind if I put one of them on you?” asked Cassy. “Oh yes sure! Thank you!” said the huge caterpillar. Cassy takes out a cream and gently puts it on the caterpillar’s body. “It feels much better now! Thank you so much! What’s your name?” said the huge caterpillar. “Oh no problem! I’m Cassy!” said Cassy. “I need to go now! I’m happy I helped you! Bye!!” said Cassy and left.

Chapter- 5

Katie was walking into one of the furniture stores. All the sofas and tables there were broken. “This place is a big mess!” said Katie to herself. “Yes, the indeed are.” Said a strange voice. “Umm... Who is here? Who was that!” said Katie. It was a huge robot getting controlled by a zombie! “Wow! I have never seen anything so cool in my life ever!” said Katie not even scared. The robot started destroying everything there! “Okay! Now I’m scared!” said Katie. She ran all around the store and the robot was still following her. “Boo!” said the strange robot. But! The person who was controlling the robot was actually just Cassy pulling a prank on Katie! “Hahaha got you!” said Cassy. “Oh my god! Cassy! I got so scared! This was not the correct time to prank me!” said Katie.

Chapter- 6

“Wait! Katie! Look! It’s some sort of radio! What if we can talk to people from here!” said Cassy. “Woah! What is this?” said Katie. Cassy picked it up and heard someone speaking. But the voice was breaking so they couldn’t hear them properly. “Helloooo? Anyone there?” said Katie. Both of them really wanted to meet someone. They were feeling very lonely there all alone. They knew that they wouldn’t be able to communicate with the person on the radio, so they just walked away. Cassy looked back and took the radio along with them. She knew that at least some day they would be able to communicate with them.

Chapter- 7

After a few weeks they heard someone say “Come to the nearest river you can find! I will be there! Come fast!” “Katie! Katie! Someone just told us to come to the nearest river we can find! It was from the radio! We can find new friends!” said Cassy. “OMG! Let’s quickly go!” said Katie. Both of them ran to the closest river to their tree house. “Hello? Anyone here?” said a voice. “Did you hear that?” asked Katie. “Yes! I did! Let’s respond!” said Cassy. “Yes? Hello! We are here! From the radio!” said Cassy. A person walked to them. They couldn’t believe who it was! It was one of their really old friend from school! “Jasmine! What are you doing here?” asked Katie. “Katie? Cassy! It has been so long! I was living in our school for the past year not knowing anyone would be alive! I found this radio, so I decided to pick it up!” said Jasmine (their old friend). “Wow!” said Cassy. “At-least we have company now! Jasmine why don’t you come and live with us in our tree house!” said Katie. “Wow thank you! Sure!” said Jasmine. They all moved in together and had a lot of fun! They also made friends with some zombies!

THE END!

Estelle Joyce Ella

9-Abueva

Magayon Festival

was a month-long

annual festival

celebrating Mt.

Mayon. It was

held in April. In

the entire

province of Albay

with most of the

activities held in

Legazpi City. The

Festival features

agricultural

products display

and trade fairs,

culinary shows,

cultural events,

street parades,

photo/arts

exhibits and

sports events.

2. Tumbang Preso

or Tumbang Lata

are an indigenous

game.It is usually

played in

backyards, parks,

or in the streets

where there is

little vehicular

traffic. It is a

game wherein

one player guards

the milk can (the

"It") while the

others stayed

behind the toe-

line with their

pamatos. The

objective of the

game is for the

players to hit

and knock down the

milk can with the

pamato, and for it

to be put back

inside a small circle

a few meters away from

the toe-line.

When a player

was tagged while

recovering their pamato,

they become the "it".

3. At the start of

school Dora was

afraid of her new

teacher. Mrs.

Davis seamed

nice, but she had

so many rules for

the class to

follow. She scared

someone to

pieces. As the

school year

continued, Dora

begun

to understand how

the teacher come

up with the rules.

The rules were their

so students

would be

respecful of

themselves and

each other. By the

end of the year,

Dora though

Mrs. Davis was the

best teacher she

ever had!

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varieties of tea. Teas can

be grouped into a few

major categories: black,

green, white, red and

herbal teas. Of all the

different types, black teas

usually contain the most

caffeine. On the other

hand, red teas and herbal

teas can be almost entirely

caffeine-free. So, if you're

drinking tea late at night,

you might want to choose

the red or herbal tea

instead of black tea if you

don't want to be kept

awake by caffeine.

In the attic of an old house, Aquisha discovered a dusty, forgotten diary tucked away in a corner. Curiosity piqued, she opened it and was transported back in time, into the life of its mysterious author, a young woman named Clara.

As Aquisha delved deeper into Clara's world through the pages of the diary, she uncovered tales of love, loss, and adventure. Through Clara's words, Aquisha experienced the joys and sorrows of a bygone era, each entry painting a vivid picture of a life once lived.

With each passing day, Aquisha became more enthralled by Clara's story, finding solace and inspiration in her words. She began to see parallels between Clara's experiences and her own, realizing that despite the passage of time, human emotions and struggles remained timeless.

Armed with newfound perspective from Clara's diary, Aquisha embarked on her own journey of self-discovery and adventure, determined to make her mark on the world just as Clara had done decades ago. And though their lives were separated by generations, Aquisha felt a deep connection to the courageous young woman whose story had been hidden away for so long in the forgotten diary.

THE END.

Mari is an Orphan, her parents died in an accident due to fire. He was adopted by a rich couple named Juliet and Romeo. Juliet taught her to be a modest woman. Mari followed Juliet's order. Mari has been a good daughter and obeys her parents.

At school he has no friends and is difficult to get along with. But there was a man who always approached her named Heiron. Heiron is also an orphan but poor, scolding and naughty. Heiron always teases Mari that's why they became lovers. But Juliet is against their relationship so she talks to Mari, Juliet says she has to stay away from Heiron because her parents are bad and his family is low, if she doesn't stay away from Heiron she has to leave her family. Mari didn't want her mother to be sad so she lied to heiron and ended their relationship.

Mari grew up and became a good Doctor. He did everything for his mother to accept him and make her proud of him. However, he still couldn't feel it. In an unexpected event, Mari and Heiron met, even though heiron was still angry at what mari had done, they still talked about their relationship. Mari told everything the real reason why she left Heiron. Because they still love each other, Mari has fought for their relationship.

She became brave and talked to her mother, Mari said that since she was adopted she never felt love, she was always controlled and had no freedom. He did everything to make his mother accept him but he didn't feel that she was proud of him. Juliet has come to her senses. He cried and was hurt because of what he did to Mari, he asked for forgiveness because he was cruel and didn't think about his daughter's feelings. Because Mari loves her mother, she has forgiven her. Juliet hugged Mari and said " I'll let the two of you love each other as long as you're happy child, but if Heiron hurts you I won't think twice about taking you again " And that's when Mari felt the love of a mother.

Despite her cheery filled personality, Yumi was insecure about her weight and appearance. Her mother always judge her about how she looked and said that no one will like her if she wasn't pretty or smart. This affected how she looked at herself and to her friends. She always stay close to them fearing that they would leave her, and did everything she can to maintain her relationships with them.

But in the end, she discovered that non of them even cared about how she looked. They supported her throughout her struggles, and maintained their daily lives. Soon, she gained confidence thanks to her friends.

The end🫰🏻🫰🏻🫰🏻🫰🏻

(Kelly Loise R Santos 9-Abueva)

1.)

The Daragang Magayon Festival was a month-long annual festival celebrating Mt. Mayon. It was held in April. In the entire province of Albay with most of the activities held in Legazpi City. The Fistival features agricultural products display and trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events, street parades, photo/art exhibits and sports events.

2.)

Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the ‘'It'') while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the Game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player Was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the “it”.

3.

At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new Teacher. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the Teacher come up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best Teacher she ever had.

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1. The Daragang Magayon Festival was a month-long annual festival celebrating Mt.Mayon. It was held in April , in the entire province of Albay with most of the activities held in Legazpi City.

The festival features: agricultural products , display and trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events , street parades photo/arts exhibits and sports events.

2. Tumbang preso or Tumba lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards , parks , or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic . It is a game wherein one player gurads the milk can

(the "it") while the others stay behind the toe line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato , they become the "it".

3. At the start of school, Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs.Davis seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules. The rules were their so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she

ever had!

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2. Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks, or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their
pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it".

3. At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scared someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules. The rules were their so students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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entirely caffeine-free. So, if you're drinking tea late at night, you might want to choose the red or herbal tea instead of black tea if you don't want to be kept awake by caffeine.

One day, I was shooting my daily blog. And I smell smoke!

"What could that even be?" I tell myself.

I walk outside to my neighbors house, and their whole shed is on fire! And somebody that looks like me had done it. I stare in shock as the police and fire department arrive and the strange criminal runs away!

The police are talking to my neighbors and the police ask for the description of the person.

"That young lady over there! She lit my house on fire! " the neighbor said in pure rage.

I hear a sudden giggle from on the porch! It's Mia!

Mia had the same outfit I did on, and looks exactly like me.

And she has my phone!

"I'm going to tell all of your fans that you committed arson!

" She chuckles.

" Mia! No!" I scream.

The police walk closer, and closer. And next thing you know I'm in hand cuffs. The police drive me away, I'm sobbing. I will have to serve 8 years in the county jail.

I'm a week into my prison sentence! I'm so mad that Mia would do such a horrible thing.

I see a young man come into the jail cell with me. He's so handsome!

"Omg.. hottie "I say accidently.

He turns his head, and gives me a glare. Then continues whatever he was doing.

A couple hours later, It's about midnight now. I'm lying in bed and the guy comes over and kissed me!

"Hey! " I scream

" Hey cutie.." he replies

"I don't even know your name, besides I'm the one and only famous blogger, Patricia.aesthetic.blogz. And I can't be seen with a criminal! "

"Aren't you a criminal? " he replies in disbelief.

"No! My sister committed this crime, pretending to be me!

He chuckles.

"Nice cover up but the cops won't believe you."

The next day, I remember something very important. I was blogging at the time it was set on fire! And all my 10 million viewers saw the fire!

I ask to talk to the sheriff.

Now, I'm in his office and guess what!

It's the boy that was in the cell with me! He was 20, the same age as me.

He looks at me and knows I did not do it, my sister did.

" But I need proof! My blog shows it all! Go to 30:26 you can see the fire that's she is setting!"

" This girl needs to spend twice the time as you, for impersonation and for arson! " he says in a deep voice.

I dive over the desk and kiss him!

"let's go get that arsonist! " he says with determanation

We arrive at my house.

My boyfriend bangs on the door.

My sister opens it!

"your under arrest for fraud, and stealing!" that's how my evil sister, tried to steal my fame.

2."Tumbang Preso" or "Tumba Lata" is an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks, or in streets where there is little vehicular traffic. In this game, one player guards the milk can (the "it") while the others stay behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. If a player is tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it".

3.At the start of school, Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scared someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora began to understand how the teacher came up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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1.The daragang magayon festival is a month-long annual celebration held in april,honoring mt.mayon in the entire province of albay,with most activities taking place in Legazpi city.The festival agricultural product displays,trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events, Street parades,photo/arts exhibits,and sports events.

2."Tumbang preso" or "Tumba lata" is an indigenous game typically played in backyards,parks, or streets with minimal vehicular traffic. one player guards the milk can (the 'it') while others stand behind the toe-line with their "pamatos."The objective of the game is to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato and return it to a small circle a few meters away from toe-line.If a player is tagged while retrieving their pamato,they become the new "it."

3.At the start of school,dora was afraid of her new teacher, Mrs.davis.Mrs.davis seemed nice, but she had many rules for the class to follow, which scared someone to pieces.as the school year progressed, dora began to understand why the teacher came up with the rules.The rules were there so students would be respectful of themselves and each other.By the end of the year,dora thought Mrs.davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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Once upon a time there was a young man named Liam. Liam was known throughout his small town for his incredible musical talent. He could play any instrument he picked up, but his true love was the guitar. Liam would often sit by the seashore, his fingers dancing on the strings of his guitar, creating melodies that echoed the rhythm of the waves. His music was so beautiful that it would draw crowds from all around, their hearts touched by the emotion in each note. One day, a famous music producer was passing through the town and heard Liam's music. He was so impressed that he offered Liam a chance to record an album in the city. It was an opportunity of a lifetime, but it also meant leaving his home and the people he loved.

After much thought, Liam decided to take the offer. He moved to the city and started recording his music. His album was a huge success, and he became a well-known musician throughout the country. But despite his fame, he never forgot his roots. He used his success to improve his hometown, building a music school for the local children. He would often return to teach classes, inspiring the next generation with his love for music. Liam's story is a reminder that no matter where life takes us, we should never forget where we came from. And as for Liam, he continues to play his guitar by the seashore, his music a testament to his journey.

1. The Daragang MagayonFestival was a month-longannual festival celebrating Mt.Mayon. It was held in April, inthe entire province of Albaywith most of the activities heldin Legazpi City. The festivalfeatures agricultural productsdisplay and trade fairs,culinary shows, culturalevents, street parades,photo/arts exhibits and sportsevents

2. Tumbang Preso or TumbaLata is an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards,parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the"It") while the others stay behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the"it".

3. At the start of school, Dora was afraid of her new teacher.Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora began to understand how the teacher come up with the rules. There are rules so that students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best Teacher she ever had!

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There's this one girl named Lily. Lily is an only child and her father is a doctor so she rarely gets to be with him and she doesn't get the chance to bond with him.

One day, her mother passed away due to a severe illness that's not possible to be cure. Lily refused to eat and she barely go out, because of what have happened. Lily always locked herself in her room. Her father had done everything to make her feel joy once again. Such as buying her new toys to play with, but no toy can make her happy.

Days has passed, Lily decided to get out to ease her sadness. While walking, she saw a poor cat that looked hungry and homeless so she took it home, and named the cat Lila. Lila became her friend and relieved her sadness. Lily was happy because she now had a friend and companion while her father was away. Lila is her source of happiness.

One day, Lily woke up to find Lila missing by her side. She searched the entire house but couldn't find her. Lily decided to look for Lila outside and found her, but she found her lifelessness. Lily was overcome with sadness because she lost her friend who was there to make her happy when she's feeling down and missing her mother. But now she is one of the loved ones Lily will miss.

#petslove

The end😁

Princess Mago 9-Abueva

During a time past, an active city of Fontaine had an impressive tower of clocks that was home to the guardian of time who named Lyney. This time protector had the duty of keeping time itself safe.

One day, something went wrong with time and it became confusing and disordered. If not monitored, it would be a disaster for both the city and outside world.

Lyney decision to go back in time through it was so dangerous but in order to put things right this way he met new friends who could help him on the mission but he meets mechanical robot named Lynette and ghost named Freminet

Together they held on during chaotic times, confronted challenges they stumbled upon some shocking secrets about history being but then their was a woman who showed she manipulated the time to change the future, they fight this woman and together they defeat them before she died she explained why she want to change the future.

They where shock because it was they're mother and Lyney froze. She explained every details to all of them and she said why Lynette and Freminet died in the first place it was a group of all powerful villains also knows the principles, They are speechless and before you know about it they cried because it was not fair he cried and he cried until he woke up, And tears flowing on his eyes he asked to him self, I am dreaming? but he wasn't and asked him self again, But it was all complete right?.....

After a year, It was finally over and all the people was happy and smiling because it was over and the people of Fontaine are safe but The Time Keeper Lyney found himself wondering it almost a year but he over thinks it all day like it happens yesterday. But the question is, It is all over?

THE END ⌛

2.Tumbang preso or Tumba lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards. Parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game where in one player guards the milk can (the "it") while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato. And for its to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato. They become the "it".

3.The start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs Davis seems nice. but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continue. Dora begun to understand how the Teacher come up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year. Dora though Mrs.Davis was the best Teacher she ever had!

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free. So, if you're drinking tea late at night, you might want to choose the red or herbal tea instead of black tea if you don't want to be kept awake by caffeine.

2. Tumbang Preso or Tumbang Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The Objective of the game is for the players to hitted and knocked down the milk can with the pamato, and for its to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it"

3. At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new Teacher Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued, dora began to understand how the teacher come up with the rules were their so students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, dora though Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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2. Tumbang preso or tumbang lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks, or in streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the “It”) while the others stay behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the “it”.

3. At the start of school, Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scares someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora began to understand how the teacher came up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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Very good Cy Jean. You're both improving in written and verbal. Keep shining!

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2. "Tumbang Preso" or "Tumba Lata" is an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks, or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stay behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line. When a player is tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it".

3. At the start of school, Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scared someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora began to understand how the teacher came up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respectful to themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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Amazing work, Aliza. Almost perfect. I'm looking forward on you further improvement. Keep rocking your acads.

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There are many different varieties of tea.

Teas can be grouped into a few major categories: black, green, white red and herbal tea. Of all the different types, black teas usually contain the most caffeine. On the other hand, red teas and herbal teas can be almost entirely caffeine-free. So, if you’re drinking tea late at night, you might want to choose the red or herbal tea instead of black tea if you don’t want to be kept awake by caffeine.

The next day, Layla and her teammates gathered at Covered Court 2 for their regular practice session. Layla's passion for dancing was evident as she displayed boundless energy and enthusiasm. Suddenly, a man named Ronald approached her. Ronald, one of her teachers, called her over, filling Layla with a mix of nerves and anticipation. After practice, Ronald called Layla over again, this time accompanied by a man named Harold. To Layla's surprise, Ronald and Harold informed her that she and Harold had been selected to participate in the dance sports competition. Layla, unsure of her own abilities, had never imagined she would have the opportunity to participate.

From that day on, Layla and Harold began practicing diligently every day to prepare for the upcoming competition. On the day of the competition, Layla felt a surge of nervousness as it was her first time participating in such an event. However, her determination and passion far outweighed her nerves. As they took their position in the middle of the dance floor, Layla and Harold suddenly forgot the next step they had learned. The nerves had gotten the best of them. However, they pushed through despite their temporary lapse, and continued their routine. Although their opponents were skilled, Layla and Harold's performance fell short of their expectations. Harold struggled to carry Layla properly, leading to difficulties in executing the choreography. Nevertheless, Layla did not hold any anger towards her partner; instead, she empathized and understood the challenges they faced.

Layla and Harold, unfortunately, did not secure a place in the competition. Layla couldn't help but feel a sense of sadness; however, she maintained her positive outlook. She accepted the outcome and made a promise to herself to work harder and improve for future opportunities. Layla's resilience and determination would serve as her motivation to become better next time.

One day, she decided to go to the library to look for the book she checked out yesterday. After some time of looking, she had found what she wanted and tried reaching out for it. Although Hannah is not a very tall girl, so she had a hard time reaching for it. Suddenly she felt a tall presence behind her that reached out the book for her. She was flabbergasted because of how close they were. The tall latter then walked away and left Hannah dumbfounded. Hannah just decided to brush it off of her mind and go home with the book she wanted.

The following morning, Hannah had finished the novel she got, so she went off to go back to the library once again. As she was walking to reach her destination a random guy called her and handed her a letter. She decided to open it once she was in the library. She then reached her harbour, took a sit at her local reading spot and then opened the letter. She reads what's in it and it says, "Look behind you ;)" She got a little scared because of how the sentence was stated. But she's gonna do it anyway. As she was looking back, with the slightest hesitation, she saw a good-looking guy waving at her. The guy then called her to sit next to him. The latter introduced himself that he was the one who reached out the book for her. Hannah was feeling shy and thanked him. The guy said that ever since he saw Hannah in this library he was starstruck by her so the time Hannah was reaching the book he took the opportunity to do the move. Hannah got confused because she assumed that the random guy who gave her the letter was the one to reach the book. Turns out it was the guy's friend. So then they talked and got to know eachother.

The end.lol. ;')

By: Johnnalyn Jalina// 9 - Abueva (⁠~⁠￣⁠³⁠￣⁠)⁠~

2. "Tumbang Preso" or "Tumba Lata" is an indigenous game typically played in backyards, parks, or streets with minimal vehicular traffic. One player guards the milk can (the 'It') while others stand behind the toe-line with their "pamatos." The objective of the game is to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato and return it to a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line. If a player is tagged while retrieving their pamato, they become the new "it."

3. At the start of school, Dora was afraid of her new teacher, Mrs. Davis. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had many rules for the class to follow, which scared someone to pieces. As the school year progressed, Dora began to understand why the teacher came up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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Great Job, Meisha. I see how much you improved. Keep exploring!

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(this is a personal experience, I'm very sorry if it's very triggering :')) )

One sunny day, my friends and I decided to go to the park because it's holiday, and to be able to unwind as well.

We packed a big basket with sandwiches, fruits, drinks and snacks. I carried a blanket, and we found a comfortable spot in the park.

We sat on the blanket and enjoyed our delicious picnic food. I had a sandwich with bacon and mayonnaisse, my favorite! The sun warmed our faces, and the gentle breeze made the trees sway.

After eating, we talked to each other, took pictures and played some games. We laughed a lot and had so much fun together. The park was filled with the sound of our laughter and the chirping of birds.

As the day ended, we packed our things and headed home, feeling happy and full of wonderful picnic memories with my friends. I can't wait for the next sunny day to have another picnic adventure!

Aliza Encinas (9-Abueva)

2) Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks, or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stay behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line. When a player is tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the “it”.

3) At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scared someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora began to understand how the teacher came up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

CHECKED!

Well done, Aleczha! You have the potential. Keep shining.

SCORE: 9/15

There are many different varieties of tea. So, if you’re drinking tea late at night, you might want to choose the red or herbal tea instead of black tea if you don’t want to be kept awake by caffeine.

Teas can be grouped into a few major categories: black, green, white red and herbal teas. On the other hand, red teas and herbal teas can be almost entirely caffeine-free.

A kid named Lara was never really good at socializing with other people. She prefers being alone in dark places, and just reading instead of having fun and talking to others. It was as if she had her own little world. No one ever heard her voice, not even once.

Many would say she's a creep and weird, they would make fun of her and talk about her. They would call her names, take pictures of her without her consent, and make fun of the photo taken, even posting it online.

She has no idea that this was all happening because she doesn't use social media. Until one day, Lara was forced to make a speech about her life in front of the class. Everyone waited for her to speak up. Lara looked worried, and looked like she was on the verge of crying.

She took a deep breath, closed her eyes before grabbing a paper and a pen. She slowly started writing. Everyone was wondering what she was doing, and why she was writing, instead of just actually speaking. They were murmuring hateful things, until they read the first sentence Lara wrote. "Hi, I'm Lara. And I'm mute."

2.) Tumbang Preso" or "Tumba Lata" is an indigenous game typically played in backyards, parks, or streets with minimal vehicular traffic. One player guards the milk can (the 'It') while others stand behind the toe-line with their "pamatos." The objective of the game is to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato and return it to a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line. If a player is tagged while retrieving their pamato, they become the new "it."

3.) A t the start of school, Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scared someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora began to understand how the teacher came up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respectful to themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

CHECKED

Show your strength in class Trish Jane. You have a great potential in writing and I hope you should enhance that orally. Well done!

SCORE: 9/15

In the quiet town of Daet, where sunsets paint the sky blue and gold, there lives a young woman named Tamara. Every night, before she closes her eyes, Tamara whispers to the stars her hopes and wishes for the coming day.

One night, while Tamara was walking along the road, she stumbled upon an old bookstore. Tamara walked inside, greeted by the smell of old inks. While she was wandering, Tamara found a dusty book hidden in a corner. With trembling hands, Tamara opened the book, its pages filled with stories of courage and love. Written in elegant script, is his own story, waiting to be told.

With renewed determination, Tamara closed the book, her heart burning with the promise of tomorrow. And as he walks out into the night, the stars above twinkle in approval, guiding him on his journey to a brighter tomorrow.

Andrei N. Azur (9-heroic)

Love and sacrifice

Once apon a time there was a couple named Jane and Julian . One night when they were talking about their prized possessions, Jane got her jewelry box from her dresser and brought it to Julian and pulled out a necklace. "This is my favorite necklace, it belonged to my mother. She gave it to me as a ferwell gift before I left my home country. Too bad the chain broke a long time ago." Said Jane as she looked at the necklace, her head filled with the memories of her mother. "What about you? Do you have any special possessions?" She asked to her lover. "Yes actually. " Replied Julian, then Julian went to his room, when he came back, he was holding a guitar. "This guitar was from my Father. I used to love it when he played songs when I was a child, he used to teach me how to play until, he passed away. It's so old the strings started to rust. I wish I could play with it again." The atmosphere turned dreary for a little, before Jane suggested to Julian that it's time for bed.

In the middle of the night Jane couldn't sleep because she was too busy thinking about what she's gonna gift her lover because there anniversary is in a few days. Then suddenly Jane got an idea, she remembered about Julian's old guitar. "Julian really love's his Father's old guitar, and he really wants to play with it again but the strings got rusty. So I'm going to buy him a new set of strings. " Jane thought to her self as she drifted to sleep.

As the sun rose so did Jane, she got up and got ready to go to the guitar shop. At the Guitar Shop Jane was browsing through the items. The Shop Keeper saw Jane and went to her to ask her if she needs any help. "Is there anything you need help with? There are many item's here if you need something for your guitar. Guitar picks, strings, and many more." Asked the Shop Keeper. " Really want this guitar string. But it's so expensive." Said Jane. Jane and Julian aren't the wealthiest but Jane got an idea. "How about we make a trade?" Jane asked to the Shop Keeper "I'll trade you my necklace for the strings" Jane offered. The Shop Keeper was hesitant at first but he inevitably agreed to the trade. Jane was a little sad when she traded her mother's necklace, but she knew that it was worth it just to make her lover happy. And she believed that if Julian was in her shoes he would do the same thing.

At the day of their anniversary, Jane and Julian went on a candle lit dinner in a restaurant. When they finished their food Julian announced to Jane that it's time for them to exchange gifts. Jane gave her gift to Julian with a grin on her face, as did Julian. As Julian opened his gift, "Guitar strings for my guitar. " His voice sounded excited at first and then slowly sounding Disappointed. "What's wrong? Don't you like your gift" Asked Jane with a worried tone. "No, I love it... it's just that... I sold my guitar to buy you your gift." Replied Julian, his voice sounding disappointed. As Jane opened her gift she saw that it was a chain for her necklace "It's a brand new chain for my necklace... I also have a confession. I sold my necklace to buy you your gift" Her voice also sounding disappointed. As the two felt upset that their gifts didn't make their lover happy, they both realised that, their partner sold their most prized possession just to make them happy. As the two looked at each other they felt love like they never felt before. "You really love me so much that you would sell your most prized possession just to make me happy?" Said Jane with tears of happiness falling to her cheek. "Of course. Those are just objects that I can replace. But you my love, I can never replace you." Said Julian, his emotions pouring from his heart. At the of their date they went home. With their strong love for each other they will surely will happily ever after.

THE END❤

Teas can be grouped into a few major categories: black, green, white, red and herbal teas. Of all the different types, black teas usually contain the most caffeine. On the other hand, red teas and herbal teas can be almost entirely caffeine-free. So, if you're drinking tea late at night, you might want to choose the red or herbal tea instead of black tea if you don't want to be kept awake by caffeine.

GRADE 9-ABUEVA

1.The Daragang Magayon Festival is a month-long annual celebration held in April, honoring Mt. Mayon in the entire province of Albay, with most activities taking place in Legazpi City. The festival features agricultural product displays, trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events, street parades, photo/arts exhibits, and sports events.

2.Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata is

an indigenous game typically played in backyards, parks, or streets with minimal vehicular traffic. One player guards the milk can (the 'It') while others stand behind the toe-line with their "pamatos." The objective of the game is to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato and return it to a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line. If a player is tagged while retrieving their pamato, they become the new "it."

3.At the start of school, Dora was afraid of her new teacher, Mrs. Davis. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had many rules for the class to follow, which scared someone to pieces. As the school year progressed, Dora began to understand why the teacher came up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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I see your improvement, Chloe. Try to come out on your comfort zone and share your knowledge to the world. Great Job!

SCORE: 13/15

2. “Tumbang Preso” or “Tumba lata” isan indigenous game typically played in backyards,parks, or streets with minimal traffic.As the game starts one player guards the milk can (the ‘it’) while the others stand behind the toe-line with their “pamatos”.The objective of the game is to knock down the milk can with the pamato and return it to a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line.If a player is tagged whilst retrieving their pamato,they’ll become the new “it”.

3.At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher,Mrs. Davis seemed nice,but she had so many rules that the class must follow ,which scared her to pieces. As the the school year continued,Dora gradually began to understand why the teacher came up with the rules in the first place.The rules are there so that students would be respectful of themselves and each othe. By the end of the year Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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I've seen your greatness in critiquing English lessons. It's also good to witness your improvement Fiona.

SCORE: 8/15

Ellen looked up to her mother ,her beauty, her grace, and her caring nature but most of all Ellen loved her mothers cooking.The meals she would create the warm it gave ,the stories it told which she loved over and over.

While her mother was in the garden picking herbs Ellen wanted to try making a sandwich to suprice her,ellen prepared all of the ingredients in the counter.There was cheese,ham and mayo but wait- the bread isn’t sliced yet, no worries she’ll just use a knife easy peasy her mother did it all the time how hard could it be.

Crying, Ellens mother came rushing in the kitchen to see her daughter, her finger bleeding.Ellens cries subsided as her mother treated her finger and kissed her forehead. Ellen complained “its no fair how came when you use the knife its so easy mama, you cut vegetables so fast and bread evenly b-but when i..”her mother caressed her face and told her to wait and practice “i don’t understand” ellen said, just wait and one day you’ll see.

That was eleven years ago,her mother died 6 months earlier that year.Ellen didn’t realize while cutting vegetables to make some beef stew that tears were streaming down her face.Ellen looked at the recipe book that her mother left her and said with a mournful smile “Thank you mama”.

3. At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She sacred someone to pieces, As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules. The rules were their so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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I see how much you try and improved, Brent. Keep showing up! Pay attention on the spelling, present and past participle, and capitalization. Keep striving.

SCORE: 4/15

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Great Job, Christine! I know you can do this.

SCORE: 12/15

The woman always bluffs about her husband abusing her; how pitiful. I don't know what to do; the only thing I can do is "listen".

One time, I heard her laughing. I'm so happy that she's smiling again. But there were tears streaming down in her face. Why is she laughing despite the fact that she is crying? "People like him should die HAHAHAHAHAHA. I will kill him. She raped me." I can't. I want to cry. I want to hug her.

She's like not in her right mind.

One day, she suddenly didn't visit me anymore. She left me. She left me with this shitty trash. I always wonder what happened to her and where she is now. I always hope that she's already doing fine.

"Woman from Nagoya, Japan Unit 2.12 found dead, suspecting that the woman suddenly fell while cleaning her window from the 12th floor," I heard from the news. WHAT, THEY'RE LYING. That woman doesn't fell; she's abused by her husband; she's suicidal. I can't die without doing justice to her. I'm the only one who knows about her suffering. I'm the evidence. But what am I going to do? I'm burning. Someone help her; she's so pitiful. She needs justice. I don't want to die. I am NOTHING, and I cannot HELP, because I am only a BOOK.

Christine Montalban (9-Affable)

Here is a story about Ally and Enzo, where Ally has admired Enzo for 6 years, and decides to finally confess her feelings to him:

Ally has been secretly admiring Enzo for the past 6 years. They went to the same high school, but rarely interacted due to their different social circles.

One day, Ally is walking down the hallway with her friends when they spot Enzo up ahead. Ally can't help but steal a glance in his direction, her heart fluttering. Her friends immediately notice and start teasing her about her obvious crush.

Enzo happens to overhear the conversation. He's surprised to learn that Ally, a girl he's always found intriguing but never had the courage to approach, has been catching feelings for him all this time.

Later that day, Ally can't stop thinking about the encounter. She realizes that she can no longer keep her feelings bottled up. Mustering up her courage, she decides to finally confess to Enzo.

Ally approaches Enzo in the hallway, her palms sweaty. "Enzo, can I talk to you for a minute? There's something I need to tell you."

Enzo turns to face her, his expression curious. "Sure, Ally. What is it?"

Ally takes a deep breath. "I... I've had a crush on you for the past 6 years. I know we've never really talked much, but I just wanted you to know how I feel.

Enzo was initially caught off guard by Ally’s confession. They had never been particularly close, and he wasn’t sure how to respond. Enzo took a deep breath and gently said "Ally, I'm flattered, but I'm not sure I'm ready for a romantic relationship at the moment. We don't know each other very well, and I want to make sure I'm making the right decision."

Ally's heart sink, but she understood and respected Enzo’s honesty. She thanked him for his response and assured him that she would be okay with whatever decision he made. Ally knew that it had taken a lot of courage to confess her feelings, and she was proud of herself for finally taking that step, even if the outcome wasn’t what

she had hoped for.

As Ally and Enzo parted ways, both of them felt a sense of relief and a newfound respect for each other. Ally was grateful that she had finally been able to express her feelings, and Enzo was impressed by her courage and maturity. While the future of their relationship remained uncertain, they both knew that this experience had brought them closer together, even if only in a small way.

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Nice story, a matter of acceptance and building courage. Well done, Cornelia.

Content - 5

Grammar - 5

Mechanics - 4

Organization - 5

SCORE: 19/20

2. "Tumbang Preso" or "Tumba Lata" are indigenous games. They are usually played in backyards, parks, or on streets where there is little vehicular traffic. The game involves one player guarding the milk can (the "it") while the others stay behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with their pamato, and then put it back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player is tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it".

3. At the start of school, Dora was afraid of her new teacher, Mrs. Davis. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. Which scared Dora. As the school year continued, Dora began to understand how the teacher came up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she had ever had!

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Very good, Corenelia! I got you.

SCORE: 11/15

(1)

The Daragang Magayon Festival was a month long annual festival celebrating Mt.Magayon .It was held in April in the entire province of Albay with most of the activities held in Legaspi City.The festival features agricultural products display and trade fairs , culinary shows, cultural events, photo/arts exhibits and sports events.

(2)

Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an indigenous game.It is usually played in backyards, Parks,or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic.It is a game wherein one player guards the milks can (the "It") while the other stayed behind the toe-line. When a players was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "It".

(3)

At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new Teacher.Mrs.Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the chess to follow.She scared someone to places.As the school year continued. Dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules.The rules were there, their .So student would be respectful of themselves and each other by the end of the year,Dora though Mrs.Davis was the best teacher she ever had!.

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The highlighted words and symbols need further improvements. Pay attention on the spelling, present and past participle, and capitalization. Keep striving, Jocelyn.

SCORE: 2/15

There are many different varieties of tea.Teas can be grouped into a few mejor categories: black, green, white, red and herbal teas .Of all the different types black teas usually contain the most caffeine.On the other hand, red teas ang herbal teas can be almost entirely caffeine-fee .So, if you're drinking tea late at night, you might want to choose the red or herbal tea instead of black tea if you don't want to be kept awake by caffeine.

There were two friends who lived in a small village near Jaipur called Jay and Vijay, and they were friends since childhood and were studying at a college with each other, and this college was far from their place of residence, and they had to cross river and hills and pass over sandy areas to be able to go to college together. One rainy day, Jay and Vijay had to walk to college as usual, and on their way they were discussing what they had learned about atomic theory in college. They differed in their views, which led to sharp discussions between them that reached the use of vulgar vulgar language. In a fit of anger, Jay slapped Vijay, then Vijay was shocked by his friend and got angry and wrote on the sand, "Today my best friend slapped me." Then they both continued walking towards the college in clear silence. On their way they reached the river which was overflowing and they had to cross it, Vijay walked towards the river knowing that he could not swim, he started to drown, and with the force of the water flowing and the flood he felt as if the river would take him forever.

Jocelyn De Leon. (9- HEROIC)

2.The Tumbang Preso or Tumbang Lata is an indigenous game.It is usually played in backyards,park or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic.It is a game wherein a one playerguards the milk can (the”It”) while the others stay behind the toe-line with their

pamatos.The objective of the game is for the players to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato,and for it to be put back in a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line.When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato,they become to the “it”.

3.At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher Mrs.Davis seamed nice,but she had so many rules for the class to follow.She sacred someone to pieces,As the school year continued,Dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules.The rules were their so students would be respectful of themselves and each other.By the end of the year,Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had.

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I see how much you changed and improved, Von. I am rooting for your success.

SCORE: 5/15

Walker's job was to rewrite people's backstories. He had started out forging documents, then moved on to inventing anecdotes for politicians, scripting dates and interviews, that sort of thing. Now every character was clamouring for his services.

"The whole thing's a fiction, anyway,' he said. We were in his office. It was a dark afternoon, and I was watching the raindrop shadows travelling down his face. I wondered whether he was happy.

How did I know he hadn't made up his story? That he really was who he said he was?

'Of course I made it up, kid. You think I waste all the good storylines on strangers? But I like you, so here's the deal. I'll give you the gist of it, the bare bones. You find it works, we'll flesh it out together, and you can pay me what you like. How's that sound?"

I couldn't deny that it sounded fair.

'So, what's the problem? Nothing criminal, I hope?"

I shook my head. No, no, it wasn't anything like that. I had always been too good for my own good.

'Ah, a bit of excitement then? You wanna be someone who's up for anything, someone who knows how to have a grand old time, an inspiration to others!"

Yen, that was it. A life worth writing about. Mr. Walker laughed. 'Anything worth writing about is worth rewriting,' he said, descending upon his typewriter.

That's my story, and I'm sticking to it.

9-HEROIC

1. The Daragang Magayon Festival was a month-long annual festival celebrating Mt. Mayon. It was held in April In the entire province of Albay, with most of the activities held in Legazpi City. The Festival features agricultural products display, trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events, street parades, and display, trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events, street parades, and photo/arts exhibits and sports events.

2. Tumbang Preso or Tumbang Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The Objective of the game is for the players to hitted and knocked down the milk can with the pamato, and for its to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it"

3. At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new Teacher Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued, dora began to understand how the teacher come up with the rules were their so students would be respecful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, dora though Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had

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The highlighted words and symbols need further improvements. Pay attention on the spelling, present and past participle, and capitalization. Keep striving, Nicole.

SCORE: 0/15

9-HEROIC

There are many different varieties of tea. Teas can be grouped into a few major categories: black, green, white, red and herbal teas. Of all the different types, black teas usually contain the most caffeine. On the other hand, red teas and herbal teas can be almost entirely caffeine free. So if you're drinking tea late at night, you might want to choose the red or herbal tea instead of black tea if you don't want to be kept awake by caffeine.

2. Tumbang Preso or Tumbang Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the "It") while the others stayed behind the toe- line with their pamatos. The Objective of the game is for the players to hitted and knocked down the milk can with the pamato, and for its to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player was tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the "it"

3. At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new Teacher. Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. She scared someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules were their so students would be respectful of themzelves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

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The highlighted words and symbols need further improvements. Pay attention on the spelling, present and past participle, and capitalization. Keep striving, Elizabeth.

SCORE: 3/115

2. Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in the streets where there are little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the ‘’It’’) while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players to hitted and knock down the milk with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe-line. When a player is tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the ‘‘it’’.

3. At the start of the school, Dora was afraid of her new Teacher. Mrs. davis seemed nice, but she scared someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora begun to understand how the came up with the rules. The rules are created for the students to be respectful of themselves and the each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the worst teacher, but it was the other way around, and now thinks she was the best teacher she ever had!

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The highlighted words and symbols need further improvements. Pay attention on the spelling, present and past participle, and capitalization. Avoid adding something, all you need to do is to correct the text. Keep striving, Jhoar.

SCORE: 5/15

Title: Family

In a quaint neighborhood nestled amidst bustling streets, the Cruzana family radiated warmth and solidarity. Amidst the chaos of daily life, they found solace in each other's embrace. Ella, the heart of the household, enveloped her loved ones in affectionate care. Her husband, Alvin, stood as a pillar of strength, providing unwavering support in both joy and hardship. Together, they cultivated an atmosphere of understanding and love, where their children flourished. Every evening, the family gathered around the dinner table, sharing tales of their day's adventures and dreams for the future. In this haven of togetherness, the Cruzana found their greatest source of happiness—each other.

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I'm afraid it is copy pasted from an AI Generated. Be constructive in using AI helper next time.

Content - 3

Grammar - 4

Mechanics - 4

Organization - 4

SCORE: 15/20

Once upon a time in a bustling city in the Philippines, there were two neighbors, Coline and Zyvier. They lived in adjacent apartments but had never spoken before. One rainy evening, as Coline struggled with her umbrella in the downpour,Zyvier appeared out of nowhere with a big smile and shared his umbrella with her. From that moment on, their chance encounter blossomed into a beautiful friendship, and eventually, into something more. They fell in love under the rainy skies of Manila, proving that sometimes, love finds you when you least expect it.

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Smooth transition but needs to pay attention on using punctuations at the right spot. Very good!

Content - 4

Grammar - 5

Mechanics - 4

Organization - 5

SCORE: 18/20

Festival was a month-

long annual festival

celebrating Mt. Mayon. It

was held in May. In the

entire province of Albay

with most of the

activities held in Legazpi

City. The Festival features

agricultural products

displays, trade fairs,

culinary shows, cultural

events, street parades,

photo/arts exhibits and

sports events.

2. Tumbang Preso or

Tumba Lata is an

indigenous game. It is

usually played in

backyards, parks or in the

streets where there is

little vehicular traffic. It is

a game wherein one

player guards the milk

can (the Tt") while the

others stay behind the

toe-line with their

pamatos. The objective

of the game is for the

players to hit and

knock down the milk

can with the pamato, and

for its to be put back

inside a small circle a few

meters away from the toe

line. When a player Was

tagged while recovering

their pamato, they

become the "it".

3. At the start of school,

Dora was afraid of her new

teacher. Mrs. Davis

seamed nice, but she had

so many rules for the

class to follow. She scared

someone to pieces. As

the school year

continued, Dora begun to

understand how the

teacher came up with

the rules, the rules were

there so students would

be respecful of themselves

and each other. By the

end of the year, Dora

thought Mrs. Davis was

the best teacher she ever had.

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The highlighted words and symbols need a room for improvement. Very good Khen!

SCORE: 7/15

Title:who's behind of these letters?

Once upon a time there was a boy named Lucas, who live in a city. He is so popular in their campus,why? because of his talent, being academic achiever , sports etc... Lucas is kind of introvert , not friendly and not talkative, that's why he doesn't have much friends. One day Lucas found a paper in his bag , he was so confused, so he open and read it .At first he didn't mind it at all , but as the day passed he start thinking of it

"Who's the one who keep sending me these papers!?!?" Lucas said (confused)

One night Lucas start to think suicide, he was so devastated and problematic. Everyone think that his life is so perfect and it's not .As he tried to attempt, he saw a paper so he open and read it ... Lucas was too stunned to speak because the letter are related to him , he said , "Woah , it's like this letter came from future and know what I'm gonna do !"

The next day , Lucas try to find the person behind of the letters. Hours passed , but still he couldn't find the mystery person , he's tired and exhausted and still he has no clue who it is "I have to find this person , he gave me hope and power to fight my depression... I owe her/him.When he about to go home , he saw a girl looking at him

"Oh great...i'm tired exhausted and still has no luck and now i saw my enemy!?!? ugh I'm sure she's happy seeing me hopeless and sad!"

Lucas pick up his bag and saw a letter..."Woah how did it get here!?" the letter says

" You know me , I know you , I'm right here but you never saw me. I always looking out for you , take care."

"Wait...what?? I know this person?? how come I didn't notice?? geez" -Lucas said Next morning at school he saw his enemy/"Leana" smiling

while walking toward at him

" hey let me help you with that" - Leana said

" No thanks ( with a cold tone)" - Lucas said

" No I insist"- Leana said

When she about to help Lucas, she accidentally spill the paint lucas was holding at his papers too

" What the heck is your problem Leana!? I know you did this purposely!" - Lucas said with a mad tone

"No I didn't, I'm so so sorry Lucas..." - Leana said

Lucas took his things and left without saying a word.

"I really hate that girl!!

" Now I have to do this again!"

When Lucas was about to look at the papers again , a paper fell , when he picked it up he recognized the hand writing...

"wait... it's her???

no no no it cannot be her , it's impossible. I know she hates me..."

Lucas is so confused.After a few minutes he returned to the classroom. He find Leana , but Leana left , he chased Leana and apologize to her. Leana accept his apology. Soon they became best friends.

CHECKED

Interesting story, I want to read the missing pieces. On the other hand, please pay attention on the considerations such as content, grammar, mechanics, and organization. Above all, very good!

Content - 5

Grammar - 4

Mechanics - 4

Organization - 5

SCORE: 18/20