Paraphrasing Practice by L BERGS https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f GS-730 Section 2 en-us 2017-02-16 17:57:02 UTC 2025-10-27 16:33:38 UTC hello@padlet.com Atefeh and Sha happynewyou_c https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996606 Most of bicycling deaths are caused by head injuries. Since using helmets can reduce the intensity of shock in accidents, people should wear them while biking.(Consumer Reports, May 1990)]]> 2017-02-20 19:12:50 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996606 lostin1976 https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996619 2017-02-20 19:12:55 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996619 Junseon & Dena dzion https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996632 Head injuries are the main cause of death in bicycle accidents, whose major victims are school-age children. Hence it is important for students to use bike helmets which protect their heads.  (Consumer Reports, May 1990)]]> 2017-02-20 19:13:02 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996632 Erica and Aram liumeixiazi https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996679 The majority of bicycling deaths result from head injuries. According to a study, bike helmets effectively protect the head during an accident, and therefore the probability of death significantly decreases. (Consumer Reports, May 1990)]]> 2017-02-20 19:13:17 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996679 Linqi & Zhanhan yuzhanhan https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996722 Head injuries account for the main cause of bicycling deaths. Study shows that wearing helmet can be a practical way to prevent school-age children from head injuries in bicycle accidents.  (Consumer Reports, 1990)]]> 2017-02-20 19:13:35 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996722 Yenan and Didong lididong https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996770 Head injury risk in bicycling accident can be significantly alleviated by wearing a bike helmet. Since head injury is the cause of three-fourths bicycling deaths, head protection provideby bike helmet can be vital.  (Consumer Reports, 1990)]]> 2017-02-20 19:13:53 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996770 Jesus & Yuchen qyc1128 https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996775 Head injuries, which is the major cause of bicycling deaths per year, can be reduced by using bike helmets that soften the impact of the head with the ground.(Consumer Reports (May 1990))]]> 2017-02-20 19:13:54 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154996775 Rita and Matias https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154997174 A majority of deaths associated with bicycling are due to traumatca brain injuries and mostly involve 6 to 15 years old. Bike helmets have been proven to be protective as they act as shock absorbers. (Consumer Reports(1990)

]]> 2017-02-20 19:15:57 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/154997174 With a partner, correct these two sentences in a new window. labergschneider https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157000278 1. This article points out that the phenomenon that jobs for males are decreasing while new jobs like health aide are increasing.

2. In this article, the author discussed about the situation where the fast growing jobs are predominately female jobs.]]> 2017-03-01 13:25:54 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157000278 Yenan & Atefeh https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157140366 1.This article points out a phenomenon that blue collar jobs are decreasing while pink collar ones are growing.
2.This article highlights that most of the fast-growing jobs now are considered as "female jobs".]]> 2017-03-01 19:05:27 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157140366 Dena & Yuchen qyc1128 https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157140797 1. This article points out the reason why jobs for males are decreasing while new jobs like health aid are increasing.

2. In this article, the author discusses the situation in which the fast growing jobs are predominately female jobs. ]]> 2017-03-01 19:06:45 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157140797 https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157141421 1. This article refers to the phenomenon of decreasing number of men's jobs and increasing number of health-related positions.
2. In this article, the author discussed the situation where the fast growing jobs are predominately female jobs.
]]> 2017-03-01 19:08:57 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157141421 lostin1976 https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157141423 1.This article points out that jobs for males are decreasing while new jobs like health aide are increasing.
This article describes the phenomenon of decrease in jobs for males while increase in new jobs like health aides.
2. In this article, the author discusses a situation where  the fast growing jobs are predominately female jobs.]]> 2017-03-01 19:08:57 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157141423 Didong&Sha happynewyou_c https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157141702  1.Currently jobs for males are decreasing while new jobs for women like health aide are increasing and this article mainly focuses on this phenomenon.
2.]]> 2017-03-01 19:09:48 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157141702 Junseon, Jesus and Erica https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157141830
1. This article points out the phenomenon of decreasing of male jobs and increasing of female jobs

2. In this article, the author discussed the situation where the fastest growing jobs are predominately occupied by women. 




                                                ]]> 2017-03-01 19:10:09 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157141830 Rita & Aram https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157141978 1. The article discusses the phenomenon of decreasing male dominated jobs , in contrast to the increasing female dominated ones. 

2.In this article the author highlights the fact that most of the fastest growing jobs are female dominated. ]]> 2017-03-01 19:10:32 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/157141978 Sha & Dena dzion https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/158776222 This table shows us the top places of origin of international students during the 2 - year period from 2014 to 2016. From the table we see that about 1/3 of international students in the US are from China while only about 0.6% population are from Spain. Among all the countries, India has the biggest increase in the number of international students of about 25%, meanwhile Brazil has the biggest decrease of about 20%. Overall, the entire population of international students went up in the year of 2015 - 2016 comparing to that of 2014 -2015. We would expect further increase for the period of 2016 - 2017 as well. ]]> 2017-03-08 18:52:50 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/158776222 https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/158782050 Table II summarize the number of international students in U.S. and how much of the total student body of higher education they represent from 2004/05 to 2015/16. In 2014/15, the number of total international students increased by 10% while there are only 7.1% more international students during the 2015/16 period. In 2004/05, only 3.3% of the students in higher education are international students. But in 2015/16, international students account for the 5.2% for the higher education population. Based on the previous data, we may expect more international students to study in the U.S. in the future.]]> 2017-03-08 19:08:04 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/158782050 labergschneider https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/187648588 Paraphrasing Example 1 

Original:Students frequently overuse direct quotation in taking notes, and as a result they overuse quotations in the final [research] paper. Probably only about 10% of your final manuscript should appear as directly quoted matter. Therefore, you should strive to limit the amount of exact transcribing of source materials while taking notes. Lester, James D. Writing Research Papers. 2nd ed. (1976): 46-47.]]> 2017-09-14 16:24:07 UTC https://padlet.com/labergschneider/8b4czcctc36f/wish/187648588