There are many different kinds of entertainment, such as music, games, books, or movies. Explain your favorite type of entertainment and why you like it. by Daphne Greer Harvey

Aubree roblox (incomplete)

2017-01-19 17:06:56 UTC

(Where is your introduction. Sounds like you started in the middle of the story)

My favorite entertainment is Roblox. I have lot of friends on it . Most of those people I know . I am obsessed with his one call Roaqautica and I've been there before in real life . It is better to play with friends.

You can do so many things on Roblox. You can play with your friends. You can play all kinds games . It is just so fun.has all kinds of simulation games. Everything is just fun.

Obstacle courses , hotels and escape people .Water parks ,pools, building things .If you get bored playing something on roblox their is always more to play. Their is just so much to play and do.

STARWARS: Amelia. B (Good job-Your conclusion has some new information that could go in another paragraph. You last sentence is good for the conclusion. It needs 2 more sentences.))

2017-01-19 17:07:00 UTC

I love STARWARS Becuase it has a great story, it is very entertaining. Some people may think it's just about war, but it has much more to it. They have different problems, and solutions.

They have great characters, like Han Solo. He is very sarcastic, and funny. His character developed a lot, which is a good thing because character development is crucial to understand and know the character better.

The antagonists were great too, I liked the fact that they still killed characters. They were good villains because not everything had a happy ending. I was never bored watching STARWARS. -Amelia

Legos :Christian G. (incomplete)(Great intro but 1 sentence is missing. You did not finish your body and you need a conclusion)

christiang2006 — 2017-01-19 17:08:39 UTC

I like legos because you can make anything you want and they make so many sets.You can build anything as long as you have imagination.
They have Batman sets,Marvel sets, Starwars sets and they even have magazines. Legos are awsome!

Kassidy . C (incomplete)

2017-01-19 17:08:46 UTC

I LOVE baking cause it is SO much fun and there are endless possibitys . And I esspechally like making thin mint cupcakes! Baking is my favorite I hope it is yours to ! :) Kassidy . C

The Princess Bride : Peyton W. (Great Job-The last sentence could be in the introduction. "I like these movies,... but my favorite is...) Then only talk about your main idea in the conclusion.)

2017-01-19 17:09:13 UTC

I love The Princess Bride because it's a Romantic action movie . I love the characters in the movie . Princess Buttercup loves a farm boy named Wesly who went off to fight off the dread pirate robbers . And buttercup find out that he dies.

Wesly doesn't die he becomes the dread pirate robers . Princess Buttercup gets captured . Wesly goes after them and saves buttercup and they have to kill one of the princes evil hence men kind of. Then buttercup and wesly ride off in the sun set on white horses.

tThere's more to the movie than what i have written down so i hope you guys watch it :) i like many other movies like the Star Wars Sequel and Finding Nemo and Finding Dori and many others.!!!!

NO NAME Pirates Golden pride-author me (incomplete-while this is a great story, you did not read the directions at the top. Please save this for another assignment-I love it)

2017-01-19 17:09:51 UTC

once in a small village lived a stunning young lady named Lilly Ann. One day in the quiet and humble village a group of pirates broke into the village and ran up to the villagers amongst them was Lilly. "Give us all your gold now!". one of the men In the village said "please spare us please we have vary little and not worth your time." he pled. " I will make a deal, I want a young maiden to come with me crew and marry my son. everyone didn't know what to say. no one wanted to go with the pirates. Suddenly someone shouted from I will go". then they saw it was Lilly!

Eli C. A.K.A. Sith_Lord (incomplete) I love the flow. You need to separate your ideas in paragraphs and have 3 per paragraph. Then write a conclusion about them all.

2017-01-19 17:09:58 UTC

I like video games, books, and playing with my friends I like video games because I'm good at them and I feel like I'm not very good at much. I like books because I can feel like I'm in another world and I forget and loss all my stress and worries. I like playing with my friends because if one of my friends just walks into the same room as me I'am instantly extremely happy and I just smile for no reason at all.

skyrim,anime, books, and making videos on youtube - Aurora C (incomplete)

2017-01-19 17:10:09 UTC

Put the title into a complete sentence and say, but you like skyrim the best. Then right about that in your body and write 3 conclusion sentences - Out of all the games I like.... best because

i like skyrim a game because i can go on journeys on it, fight, and do quest and anime i like because i think its very fun and books i like because i like to read them and making videos on youtube of amv's is cool because i get to put what music i want for me video and pictures and gifs that i can use for it and i think about all that is fun

De'John D. (I Enjoyed reading this)

2017-01-19 17:10:33 UTC

My favorite cartoon is the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles because they love to eat pizza, they talk, and they protect people against bad people.

The Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles are not like other regular turtles there favorite food to eat is pizza which is very different from what regular turtles eat, they also talk which other turtles do not have the ability to do which is very unusual but I love it, they also fight bad people to protect the safety of others.

I have seen many other cartoons that are good, but none of them compare to the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles they are by far my favorite cartoon to watch because of their unique characteristics.

Brooklyn S. (incomplete-3 sentences needed for each paragraph)

2017-01-19 17:11:34 UTC

My Favorite movie is Secret Life Of Pets

It is my favorite movie because it is all about pets and I love animals

Secret Life Of Pets is about a dog named Max and his owner got another dog and he was sad because his owner was paying more attention to Duke than Max they broke her vase and they ran away then cats cut off the collar and they went in the sewer and landed in a place then they were sad because the wanted to go back home to there owner they landed into a river under the Brooklyn Bridge and later on in the movie they returned home

Michael B A.K.A lego Jurassic world master (incomplete-I separate into an intro, body, conclusion, the body doesn't match the intro, check for punctuation-periods)

2017-01-19 17:11:46 UTC

I love Legos because I have played with Legos since I was 5. The reason I have Legos is because you can make anything.

My favorite 2 games are terraria and Minecraft the reason I like terraria is because I have beat the game t I beat the moon lord and I have the strongest weapon the meow-mer I know it sounds silly but it dose 5000 attack damage I can 1 hit the wall of flesh and the wall of flesh is weak to me it dose 1/2 of a heart to me be cause I have a jet-pack + I have the strongest amour in the game witch is the solar amour and it gives me 500 amour a peace

so terraria, Minecraft, and roblox are the best games ever. dnu dnu dnu dnu BATMAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Abigail N (Love the Introduction. needs a conclusion) incomplete

2017-01-19 17:12:07 UTC

I Like movies because they are entertaining to me. I never know what is going to happen. They are fun to watch.

My favorite movie is Star Wars 3. It is cool to see all the aliens, robots and space ships. It looks so real to me. There are cool light saber batles. Funny things happen to storm troopers, they dont seem to be very smart. I like to see the good guys win at the end.

Kylie B (incomplete)

2017-01-19 17:12:17 UTC

I like video games. They are very fun.

(Wrong writing prompt. Follow directions at the top-incomplete) Snow by emma bates

2017-01-19 17:12:20 UTC

the other day it snowed .for the first time in a while.some of it was like powder.

when i woke up in the morning it was meted.but there was ice left over.it was very cold.

Harleybd (incomplete)

2017-01-19 17:12:22 UTC

I like to read because it is fun.And my faverit book is "90 minutes in heaven".My other faverit book is the wind in the willows.

dalton (incomplete -but good start)

2017-01-19 17:12:22 UTC

I like books, video games playing online games board games and art.
I like video games because they are fun. I also like puzzle games like those who did it games like clue or like excape room that you can get on the app store or gessing games like heads up. I like to draw pant and play with wilbur or pet pig.

Anika (incomplete-This is not a complete sentence)

2017-01-19 17:13:25 UTC

reading and cooking because they are peaceful

Jonathan.H (incomplete) What is the main idea? It should be in the introduction. Then the body talks about each part of the idea. The conclusion tells briefly about the main idea such as Finally, or This is why I like...)

2017-01-19 17:15:19 UTC

My favorite thing is to do is play video games. My favorite game is Black Ops 3. I play a lot online with my friends. We beat new levels almost every day.

I would like to join the Football team Alabama, because they have the best defense.
I also like to help my brother with math and history.
At home I like to cook and hang out with my amazing mom and dad.

Statyn V. (Great job)

2017-01-19 17:15:42 UTC

My favorite type of entertainment is College Football. There are many teams to watch on Friday's and Saturday's during football season. My favorite team to watch is Alabama.
I like to watch Alabama because we have a coach that is not just doing it for a win. Coach Saban loves to coach because of the relationship he gets to form with the team. The other reasons I like them is because they are respectful to the coach and to the teams they play and to their own players. Alabama has 16 National Championships and has won the SEC with Coach Saban .
I love watching Alabama play and seeing their enthusiasm every season. It makes me want to play football more and more. They are a team that I want to learn from because of their morals and values. Alabama is an overall AMAZING team. ROLL TIDE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Barak (Excellent)

2017-01-19 17:15:48 UTC

My favorite kind of entertainment is probably video games. There are so many games you can play like Mine-craft and Marvel Avengers. Even though video games are time wasting they are still a lot of fun. The fun games are the ones were you get to beat level after level like Lego Batman.

I have an Xbox 360 there are so many games that I can't even count. The first game I ever got was Lego Batman when I was like 7. Every time I play my Xbox I play till my fingers hurt.

So that's the my favorite entertainment. Whats your favorite entertainment I hope it's gaming. Reading is my second favorite second favorite so I hope you like that two. Thank you for reading my story.

john p. (incomplete-You need more to your 1st sentence which is your intro. The 2nd sentence should go in your body. You need a conclusion)

2017-01-19 17:15:53 UTC

I like to play my xbox 360,and then at CHRISTMAS time I got a ps4 and my favorite game is fallout.There are a lot of different games for the ps4.I like fallout because you can get a pet dog and a pet robot. You can also get them to help you find items.

James H. (Your introduction has too many main ideas- love the body. Good facts. Make the conclusion a different paragraph-good job)

2017-01-19 17:16:09 UTC

Computer and video games are my favorite type of entertainment. There are so many different games and genes to chose from you never get bored. I got an Xbox One S for Christmas and I enjoy playing Minecraft Story Mode, and Battlefield. My whole family likes to play Jeopardy, it's something that we can all do together. Computer games are used for much more than just entertainment though, they even help you learn all kinds of skills. Doctors practice doing surgery on games so they can get better or to learn new ways of doing things.
People say video games can rot your mind, but I think they can really help your brain. Some studies have concluded that playing video games actually make you smarter. They also help people with Alzheimer's like my grandpa. I don't think they make people violent, but you should always have balance in your life. I conclude that people will always have different opinions when it comes to gaming whether they are helping people or hurting people, but I think that they are helping people improve their lives and making the world a more interesting, safer place.

Luke H. Great Job.

2017-01-19 17:16:10 UTC

(add two more concluding sentences)
I like this video game called Terrairia. I like it because it has lots of stuff you can do. There's even different modes you can play! There's Easymode, Hardmode, and Hard-core mode.
Even if you're a pacifist, you can still play. You can mine! There are TONS of different ores you can mine. Like gold, silver, platnum, and a lot of other stuff that's completely awesome.
Even if your not a pacifist, you can play. You can fight! There are swords galore in this game! In Hard-mode (after you defeat the Wall of Flesh) You get the legendary sword called the Breaker Blade that is the best sword for beginer Hard-mode players.
There are guns too! In Easy-mode there is this gun called the minishark. In hard-mode you can use that to make the Mega-shark. And there are these books the shoot stuff. Like the one I have, the Greek Fire book, it shoots fire that can burn underwater.
In Terriaria you can fight and you can mine. Terriaria is a game for anyone and everyone. Well! I think I've made my point! My favorite entertainment is playing Terrairia.

Anika.p (incomplete-Please write in complete sentences-needs 3 paragraphs with 3 sentences eat)

2017-01-19 17:16:10 UTC

boss baby I really want to see it the pevews are amazing

Emily M (GREAT WRITING. You have good structure, grammar, punctuation, all well put together. Great intro and conclusion.)

2017-01-19 17:16:15 UTC

Entertainment! I tried to choose just one but I can't! There are so many great things about Music, Movies, Books, and Games! You can do so many things with these forms of entertainment! So I thought what the hey! I'll cover them all!

Music
Music can move you, something to get lost in, something beautiful. The rhythm can be fast, making you want to dance and have fun. Or slow, reminding you of someone or something that you lost long ago. Music can help you through tough times, reminding you that its going to be okay.

Movies
Movies are a way to enter another realm while already having pictures to help you imagine it. Movies can make you laugh, cry, scream out with fear, they can make you do these things, they will leave an impression on you. My favorite movies currently are mostly Disney, Pixar, and Harry Potter. However there are more, I don't want to type all day and night lol

Books
"Books! The best weapons in the world, arm yourselves"- The Doctor. I think this quote is one of my favorites because, well... books, and... the doctor. Well moving on, Books! If you are like me then it is another world! an entire realm of imagination, and like other forms of entertainment they leave a big impression on you. At least that's what I think a good book does. As you read if you are like me, you forget you are looking at print! You just watch the scenes of a movie play out in your head, but the characters change apperence as more detail is added to there description.

Games
Games are a way of exploring another place, getting to know characters, and in some games, real people. There are many many MANY games out there a few of my personal favorites are the Five nights at Freddy's series, Undertale, The Sly Cooper series, and The Rachet and Clank series. In games made about movies, you can further explore a world that you saw once before, talking to minor characters can make something that puzzled you in the movie make all the more sense. They can also, depending on the game sharpen your reaction skills

In conclusion, all forms of entertainment are great, remember these are just a few forms of entertainment! There are many more! I would have gone into more detail, but I didn't want my hands to fall of from all this typing LOL. Anyways I hope you enjoyed reading this because I enjoyed writing this, anyway I'm gonna leave it here (my hands are falling off lol)

- Emily McDowell

William D. (incomplete- Good start. The last sentence is run-on and doesn't make sense. you need a body and conclusion)

2017-01-19 17:16:25 UTC

We like to rescue animals and we like to go and find good homes and give them a happy life for good people what want them for good and they will always be with us.

Carver C (incomplete)

2017-01-19 17:16:39 UTC

i like Any thing that you can play. Yea

Emily V. (incomplete)

2017-01-19 17:16:54 UTC

I like to play outside and with my little brother. We listen to music and act so weird. But sadly today my little brother is sick .Hopefully he will be better soon so we can play outside again.

Zayoujneia M. (incomplete-read the directions at the top)

2017-01-19 17:18:04 UTC

Basicly anything that is outside,in a book,on tv,or on
a tablet.

Elijah H. (incomplete)

2017-01-19 17:18:12 UTC

i like reading and games reading cause it helps me slow down.Games cause they are very fun.But reading helps me with school and helps me learn cool things.And mincraft and overwatch is fun.

I love space books they are so cool.
By Elijah H.

John B (incomplete)

2017-01-19 17:18:20 UTC

I like games the best. Because they are fun, most make you use your brain and the teamwork. I played with my brother when he was in California.

I like games more than other entertainment.

SAVANNAH S (incomplete) check spelling

2017-01-19 17:18:32 UTC

Check spelling, You need 3 sentences in 3 paragraphs- intro, body, conclusion.

Music is my favret because it is fun to lison to and fun to dance to . My hole famiel likes it to and it helps me clien . That is why i like music.

Nicolas G (incomplete)

2017-01-19 17:19:45 UTC

I like games because they are fun to play,they're awesome,and it gives me something to do when i'm bored. You can play with your friends. You can make new friends.

If you're waiting for something you can play games while you wait. Games are the best thing in the world.

Baseball by Spencer S. (GREAT JOB!! Harvey)

2017-01-19 17:19:56 UTC

Overwatch by Carson (incomplete-(Sounds like you started with the body. It needs an introduction of Overwatch. Your last sentence could be in your conclusion)

2017-01-19 17:23:57 UTC

Overwatch is a vidoe game about heros that help citizens but are bounty hunters.0r robots cyborgs until they get recalled and help the people and ominics wich are robots .I love this game because its unique and neat and its fun also it has action. I love action

TYRA O (incomplete-You can make an introduction and body from this. Then write your conclusion)

2017-01-19 17:26:29 UTC

I love to play games , but i love to play mincraft more. i have it on my phone. Its very fun cause now it is updated and awsome. you can fly, ride horses and more. it has a thing called my world and i've spent my time making it huge.

chris (incomplete)

2017-01-19 17:27:06 UTC

i like to play vidoe game about sonic.

Sonic Boom (incomplete-NO NAME)

2017-01-19 17:27:35 UTC

Sonic boom is so awesome it has a lot of action in it and you get to battle Eggman

Kira B. (incomplete)

2017-01-19 17:27:42 UTC

I play star stable because you get to ride horses and do quest plus it really passes time p.s it super awesome.

Amarcus (incomplete-(use commas instead of a lot of ands; check spelling. Star Wars should be in your body. Its about playing games, your main idea.You do not have a conclusion)

2017-01-19 17:29:01 UTC

I love to play games and I play games all day and be the best.I all ways beat my cousin 1 on 1. M favorite game is Star wars battle front.I cant wait till battle front 2 comes out this year. My 2 favorite game is battlefield 1. I mostly like rush on battlefield 1.I mostly like shooting games. And that's my 2 parargraph's for today's lesson.

2017-01-19 17:33:27 UTC

christopher (incomplete)

2017-01-19 17:34:08 UTC

I like games and spongebob squarepants

Olivia

2017-01-25 17:23:37 UTC

I find my entertainment sewing, crochet, singing and reading
. I am currently in my church youth choir and voice lessons and i love it! I love sewing because it is almost like a therapy and it relax's me and i have about 1,000 crafts in my room! I love escaping to a new world when i read!
these are all very entertaining for me!

Jonathan H. My Free Time At Home (incomplete - you changed the subject in your body. Your 1st paragraph should have the main idea, body talk about the main idea, and conclusion ends the main idea.)

2017-01-25 17:43:28 UTC

My favorite thing to do is watch movies. My favorite movie is, "Chappie". In the movie, he is a robot police officer. I also like when he got decorated by fellow officers and that he faught crime and put bad people in jail.
This is what I like to do in my spare time at home. I also like to go outside and play football with my brothers and group of friends. We do this almost everyday. It is always fun, we always laugh at one another if we are tackled.
I like playing outside when the weather is warm and beautiful. Rainy days are my movie days. We can't play football if it is wet and slippery, we might fall and get hurt. I hope I can go outside today.

Skyrim The Elder Scrolls Christian G. (incomplete)

christiang2006 — 2017-01-25 17:43:52 UTC

(Harvey-some of your facts should be moved to your body, not in your concusion.)

I like Skyrim because it is fun an you can create characters and go on missons. The main subject of the game is to go on different missons and kill dragons until you kill the last dragon.

There are some dragons you don't kill. Some of the dragons are good. Those are the ones you don't kill.

You can speak to the dragons because you are a dragonborn. You learn different shouts to defeat dragons,enemy's,and other creatures.Shouts are a type of power.Different shouts do different things.some of them can call dragons. Skyrim is cool!

Emily V. (incomplete)

2017-01-25 17:43:57 UTC

I like to play outside,and learn new things I like to learn gymnastics i think its fun. Im not good at it because im still learning Gymnastics. I like to play outside with my brother too. Three reasons why I like to do

Amarcus (incomplete)

2017-01-25 17:44:44 UTC

My favorite game to play is StarWarsBattlefront. The game is amazing the graphics are the best.I play the game all day and have all the dlc's. My favorite villan is Krinick and my favorite hero is Jyn Erso.

i like to talk with my familey and be around them (incomplete)

2017-01-25 17:46:51 UTC

MIA

(Good introduction, but where are your 3 paragraphs with 3 sentences?)

Brooklyn S. (incomplete-intro, body, conclusion)

2017-01-25 17:47:51 UTC

Music-I like Jacob Sartorius music because I love the beat and his voice

He has very good auto-tune it make his voice more clear and has very good timing.
I listen to it when I am sometimes when I am cooking,cleaning,fixing my hair, at the pool I just love his music
Sweatshirt-2016
Hit or Miss-2016
Last Text -2016
All My Friends -2016
Jordans-2017
Love Me Back-2017
Bingo-2017
By Your Side-2017

At the end of his songs he will have a low beat

William Durrett (incomplete)

2017-01-25 17:48:09 UTC

Me and my like to recuse animals any tip of animal.we like to take  them out for a walk them around the park.

chris (incomplete)

2017-01-25 17:49:05 UTC

I like to play minecraft

Dustin (incomplete)

2017-01-25 17:49:41 UTC

my favorite game to play is smite and I like to talk to my friend

mia youngblood (incomplete- 3 paragraphs? check spelling and punctuation like capital letter)

2017-01-25 17:49:42 UTC

I like ? be around my family. i just love talking to them. we laugh and play games. I"m really close to my family and i love just talking all the time. we just have so much fun. we play mario kart and super mario. We love just sitting and talking about our dsy. All of uys just laugh at everything we do. That"s what i love to do

one last drop (incomplete-you did not write from the prompt at the top - incomplete)

2017-01-25 17:50:04 UTC

introduction: Once their was a kingdom far away from here with a vary evil king who was named king hordact. Body: and so the rebellion came up with a plan to destroy hordact. so they decided that they would poison him so their wont be that big of a fight. Lilly sneaked in and took a storm trooper outfit and got to the kitchen and grabbed a gold cup. conclusion: And with the evil king defeated the rightful rulers returned to the thrown and they lived peacefully ever after

books by james g (incomplete)

2017-01-25 17:51:47 UTC

inspiers you to do the imposible just like Nel Armstrong. books rule!

air hockey Nathaniel C (incomplete)

2017-01-25 17:53:33 UTC

i like air hockey in my free time. i play it all the time. and i usually never lose because i played it forever

Jeremiah G (incomplete)

2017-01-25 17:55:28 UTC

I like to play games. They are a fun thing to do when bored.

Guinea pigs and dogs by Jazmine (incomplete)

2017-01-25 18:00:08 UTC

I love Guinea Pigs and dogs, Their cute faces and fluffy fur, i love how guinea pigs let out a "Sqquueeaakkk" when they are hungry, or how a dog whimpers exitedly when you leave for a little bit! They are ADORABLE!!!

Star wars: Caden

Deznuts — 2017-01-25 18:19:24 UTC

i like reading and waching star wars. my favroit person is kylo ren. maybe a few of you have seen my profile pic.once i start a star wars movie you cant pull me away from it. its like my eyes are guled to the tv, book, video game, or bulding a star wars lego set. I love to play star wars battle front i like: Han Solo and bosk.
I also enjoy playing sports i played football for 5 years and basketball for 3 years. i made great shots and tackles.i also like to exersize a lot with my dog coco.unfortunly we had to give her away beacause we move A LOT.appearently to much for her to handel.
i still love to exersize on my bike, with my 5 siblings,or any way i can find.i have a lot of nerf guns so i have nerf gun wars also. I also play:black ops3, CALL OF DUTY modern warfare,CALL OF DUTY infanit warfare,and the battlefields1,2,3,4,5,

Brooklyn S. - Book

2017-01-26 17:09:43 UTC

l like ''Corduroy.'' Corduroy was a little brown stuffed bear with green overalls with one missing button who lived in a toy store in a mall.

Corduroy wished someone would take him but nobody would but then the next day a little girl and her mom came to the toy store that Corduroy was in she looked at all the other toys but she saw Corduroy and she wanted him but that night Corduroy left the toy store looking for his button he tried to get one from the mattress but he knocked a lamp he went back to the toys store and tried to put it on but it was too big.

The next day the little girl came back and got Corduroy and so she payed for Corduroy and went home she got a button and sewed it on to his overalls He was happy that he got a home.

Skyrim The Elder Scrolls Christian G.

2017-01-26 17:42:08 UTC

Intruduction:I like Skyrim because it is fun an you can create characters and go on missons.
Body:The main subject of the game is to go on different missons and kill dragons until you kill the last dragon. There are some dragons you don't kill. Some of the dragons are good. Those are the ones you don't kill. You can speak to the dragons because you are a dragonborn. You learn different shouts to defeat dragons,enemy's,and other creatures.Shouts are a type of power.Different shouts do different things.some of them can call dragons.

Conclusion: In the end you can still do missons or make another charater.Its the best game ever!And thats why I like Skyrim.

Safia h. The Thea By:Thea Stilton - Book

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