1. Financial strain

The youth has the tendency to buy more than other generations because of booming fashion or advertising and today's materialistic society. IN ADDITION TO THIS, Shopping malls usually use an interesting marketing campaignS with CELEBRITIES AND celebrity image, influences INFLUENCERS in social media, which have negative enormous influences on purchasing behavior of youth. Youngsters update new trends followed by famous people constantly and shopping malls where the youth frequently -> spend hours and a significant portion of earning to acquire trendy items .-> This behavior can lead to financial strain or SEVERE DEBT indebtedness. 

Spending too much time in shopping malls hurts the spirit of today’s part of young people, but it also has many negative impacts on their physical health.

VIẾT LẠI

TẠI SAO NGƯỜI TRẺ DÀNH NHIỀU THỜI GIAN Ở SHOPPING MALLS -> When young people spend too much time walking around shopping malls, they miss out on important time that could be spent outdoors playing sports or participating in other recreational activities ->

From that, young people develop a sedentary lifestyle that easily causes bad health PHYSICAL conditions such as being easily bored or afraid of getting sick when shopping conditions change, affecting themselves and society.

There are an excessive number of shops, and a large amount of eye-catching advertising in the shopping malls that easily attracts young people who are DAILY/ CONSTANTLY influenced by new trends

and young people tend to follow new trends (IN ADDITION TO +N-PHR)

SHOPPING MALLS PROVED an excessive number of shops, and a large amount of eye-catching advertising in , IN ADDITION TO IMPULSIVE SHOPPING HABITS OF YOUNG PEOPLE who are DAILY/ CONSTANTLY influenced by new trends

--> Youngsters who regularly go to shopping malls can find themself end up in spending a significant portion of their income on clothing items products that they truly do not need

-->As a result, it can lead to financial instability and long-term problems for young people such as debt accumulation and limited financial independence.

SHOPPING MALL NHIỀU SP HAY VÀ QUẢNG CÁO + NGƯỜI TRẺ THÍCH CHẠY THEO TREND --------> NG TRẺ VUNG TIỀN MUA SẮM

Idea 2: Frequently going to shopping centers may have a negative impact on young individuals’ educational performanceS.

--> (Shopping centers are often filled with sales, promotions, and trendy merchandise which is tempting and distracting for young people.)

-->For example, young people can waste a significant amount of time by browsing around shopping malls or buying products, and they can utilize that time to complete their assignments or pick up acquire new knowledges.

young people can waste a significant amount of time by browsing around shopping malls or buying products, WHICH CAN LEAD TO A SEVERE LACK OF TIME FOR completING their assignments or acquiring new knowledges.

-->As a result, their grades may decline, and they may struggle to keep up with coursework and assignments.

they may struggle to keep up with coursework and assignments., (THEREBY) MAKING GRADES DECLINE

--> which can cause poor academic performance.

CHIA THEO OBJECT:

• YOUNG PEOPLE

• SELLERS

• INVESTORS

• SHOPPING MALLS

CHIA THEO SUBJECT:

• WORK AND JOB

• EDUCATION

• HEALTH (MENTAL HEALTH + PHYSICAL HEALTH)

• ENVIRONMENT

• ENTERTAINMENT

• ECONOMY/ FINANCE (MONEY)

• LAWS/ CRIME (SECURITY)

• TECHNOLOGY/ MEDIA (INVENTIONS)

• SOCIETY (RELATIONSHIPS)

Many young people spend time going to shopping malls BECAUSE. Shopping malls have a variety of items such as technologies and cosmetics. Young people always think of shopping according to trends........... -----> Shopping on trends can tempt them to buy things they do not really need--> Spending too much on shopping leads to unwise financial decisions ----- > cause them into debt or even criminal activity

IDEA 2: .........

young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls --> At the shopping mall young people can buy anything they want --> A lot of shopping leads to a lot of waste such as product packaging and nylon bags ---> leading to a lot of waste in the environment --->That is the cause of negative impacts on the living environment such as the greenhouse effect and natural disasters.

The negative effects of many young people going to shopping malls.

•At shopping malls, ENGAGING events and promotions WITH CELEBRITY ENDORSEMENT can also stimulate young people to spend lavishly ON ->Young people are often interested in products and services such as EXTRAVAGANT CLOTHES, electronics, technology accessories, toys and entertainment experiences ( indiscriminate shopping habits of today's youth). -----> Therefore, their personal assets are reduced to the value of their assets minus their TO PAY FOR debt STEMMING FROM IMPULSIVE SHOPPING HABITS .

- Emotional shopping -> Normally, people spend their free time shopping, they will spend time surfing shopping websites, exceeding their budget.

- Gradually losing close relationships -> Focusing on shopping too much among young people causes surrounding relationships to gradually become distant.

→ It can tempt them to buy things they do not really

→ Young people who rely totally on their parents’ financial (E04) → Young people, particularly those with limited financial resources, may feel pressured to spend money at shopping malls to keep up with trends or impress their peers-> .......(SHOPPING MALL CÓ NHIỀU HĐ QCAO + PROMOTION + TRENDY PRODUCTS KHIẾN NGƯỜI TRẺ TIÊU TIỀN)......-> This can lead to financial strain, debt, and poor financial habits.

Idea 2: Unhealthy eating habit (E24)

.....(TẠI SAO SHOPPING LẠI CÓ NHIỀU FAST FOOD CHAINS (vị trí đắc địa khiến nh chuỗi đồ ăn nhanh muốn thuê mặt bằng) ........→ The abundance of fast food and sugary drinks in shopping malls has, without doubt, impacted on THE EATING HABITS (thói quen ăn uống) and the health of many young . -> CAUSE MEDICAL CONDITIONS SUCH AS DIABETES, HIGH CHOLESTEROL, HEART AND RESPIRATORY PROBLEMS (tiểu đường, cholesterol cao, vấn đề về tim mạch và hệ hô hấp) are all on the rise due to FATTY AND SUGAR-RICH FOOD (đồ ăn nhiều chất béo và nhiều đường).

1. Financial pressure

• Shopping malls are places where various famous luxury brands showcase their products and establish their presence.

-> So many young people are attracted to these trendy items despite most of them are not financially independent

-> Consequently, this creates pressure on them to earn enough money to be able to afford these SEEMINGLY UNECCESARY items, (even though some are really not be essential), leading a significant waste of money and time.

-> INSUFFICIENT TIME FOR STUDY AND PHYSICAL ACTIVITIES/ MENTAL CONDITIONS (STRESS/ EXHAUSTION)

- Some young people might LACK THE PATIENCE TO CAREFULLY CONSIDER OPTIONS BEFORE [E38] making purchases 

 -> lead to COMPULSIVE SHOPPING [E38] (nếu dừng lại ở đây thì chưa fully extended, tiêu chí task response giảm, đẩy ý càng xa thì strong hơn.)

-> they could get into debt  -> create a financial burden on themselves and their family

2. ENVIRONMENT

- Young people are becoming materialistic and consumption-focused, WHICH leads to ever-increasing numbers of products

->  results in more waste stemming from manufacturers POLLUTING RIVERS AND OCEANS [E11]) and the depletion of natural resources 

 -> give rise to ENVIRONMENTAL DEGRADATION and pose a threat to natural habitat of other living creatures.