Mrs. Daggon's Class Writing Goal: by Mrs. Rumsey https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l In my writing tomorrow, I will.... en-us 2019-02-27 17:31:50 UTC 2019-03-08 17:02:46 UTC hello@padlet.com Name: rumseyl https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339360562 My writing goal for next time is.....]]> 2019-03-08 16:07:30 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339360562 Carly my goal is to have a better ending https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362247 2019-03-08 16:10:47 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362247 Addysen https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362248 My writing goal is to write a longer essay.
Also to write a unique lead and a strong conclusion. 
I can use transition words and phrases.]]> 2019-03-08 16:10:48 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362248 Juliana https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362260 My writing goal for next time is to make my thesis statement more unusual and more intriguing. 
  Also to make my conclusion more interesting and stronger.
 Next time my goal is to use more meaningful words.]]> 2019-03-08 16:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362260 Sri https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362292 My writing goal for next time is to add mini stories to each paragraph.]]> 2019-03-08 16:10:52 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362292 Colton https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362299 My writing goal for next time is to add a unique lead to my passage .]]> 2019-03-08 16:10:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362299 Zoe My goal is to try to go back to my main idea in the middle of the story so you can clearly tell how that is a strong reason. Also another goad goal I am trying to do is write longer essays and put a cool and interesting lead to my story or essay I write. I am trying to do this because I am wanting my essays to be cool https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362309 2019-03-08 16:10:54 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362309 Lila My writing goal for next time is that to make my ending better for the reader to understand and make it bigger. https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362530 2019-03-08 16:11:21 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362530 Wyatt https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362554 My writing goal next time is to add more next time I write]]> 2019-03-08 16:11:25 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362554 Carly my goal is to have a longer story https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362964 2019-03-08 16:12:16 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339362964 Carly my goal is to https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339363593 2019-03-08 16:13:36 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339363593 Wyatt https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339363686 My goal next time is to add a interesting lead]]> 2019-03-08 16:13:48 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339363686 Emma https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364235 My goal for next time is to make sure I spell things right. ]]> 2019-03-08 16:15:03 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364235 Catelyn https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364247 My goal for the next time is to have my writing thoughts and ideas more clear and easier to read also make the reader understand what I am feeling and get a visual and to have a longer conclusion and go back to the thesis and make the reader get intrigued with what im talking about also next time I will better edit my essay with the CUPS method and when I am writing my thesis It will be much stronger and also I know next time I will follow my graphic organizer and It doesn't go off topic]]> 2019-03-08 16:15:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364247 Soluchi https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364248 My goal is to get better at hooking my reader in my beginning, and to try and get better at having evidence to support my claim.]]> 2019-03-08 16:15:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364248 JACKSON!!!!! My goal is to have a longer essay. Also to have a good lead and to make my essay in to more paragraphs. https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364284 2019-03-08 16:15:07 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364284 my goal next week when i get to school is to have a stronger lead and write with good handwriting. Brennan https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364406 2019-03-08 16:15:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364406 Lila My goal for next time is that to make my second reason bigger. https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364637 2019-03-08 16:15:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364637 Lindy:) https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364763 My WrItiNg GoAl fOr nExT tiMe is to cApiTaliZe ]]> 2019-03-08 16:16:16 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339364763 Lila My goal for next time is that to make my essay with more details and punctuation. https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339365240 2019-03-08 16:17:10 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339365240 AnDeRsOn https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339365341 mY gOaL iS tO wRiTe A gOoD eSsAY aNd A sTrOnG eNdInG]]> 2019-03-08 16:17:23 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339365341 Soluchi Nnamani https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339365762 My goal is to use more sophisticated transition words in my essays]]> 2019-03-08 16:18:15 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339365762 JaCkSoN mY gOal Is To MaKe My eSsAY In tO BeTTer MomeNTS AnD To Go baCK inTo My ESSAy and In sOme ParTS Tie iT Back TO THE mAiN IDIA!!!! https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339365784 2019-03-08 16:18:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339365784 my other goal is to have a stronger ending i didn't feel so good about my ending this year BRENNAN WILSON https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339366010 2019-03-08 16:18:45 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339366010 Soluchi https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339366373 My goal is to add more mini stories in my essays.]]> 2019-03-08 16:19:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339366373 Brooklyn My goal for next time is to end with a strong conclusion. https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339367056 2019-03-08 16:20:50 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339367056 my goal is to get some moree of my work https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339367638 2019-03-08 16:21:59 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339367638 Kaylin my goal is to clearly state my feelings so the reader knows what I am feeling.and to be more descriptive in my writing! https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339368140 2019-03-08 16:22:58 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339368140 Soluchi https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339368464 My goal is to use stronger word choices in my essay.]]> 2019-03-08 16:23:37 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339368464 my goal is to get more of my work done https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339368676 2019-03-08 16:24:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339368676 sAe:) odiseas_tsimboukis_492 https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339368718 mY writing goal iS tO dO a LeAD and use more periods aNd rEmemBer to use mini story's aNd cUp'S]]> 2019-03-08 16:24:08 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339368718 jAcKsOn MY GOAL IS TO HAVE GOOD HAND WRITING AND TO TAKE MY TIME WRITING UNLESS THERES LIKE TWO MINITES LEFT. https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339368928 2019-03-08 16:24:34 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339368928 Zoe I am going o try to make my leads mor unnice https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339369221 2019-03-08 16:25:12 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339369221 my goal is to https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339369830 2019-03-08 16:26:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339369830 Lila my goal for next time is to make my lead unique https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339370346 2019-03-08 16:27:28 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339370346 JACKSON https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339371104 2019-03-08 16:28:59 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339371104 grant https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339381495 to always get a 100 or more]]> 2019-03-08 16:50:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339381495 grant lee https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339383126 write more than I do now]]> 2019-03-08 16:54:20 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339383126 grant lee https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339384337 to be a better student]]> 2019-03-08 16:56:54 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339384337 grant https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339386326 always try my best]]> 2019-03-08 17:01:23 UTC https://padlet.com/rumseyl/869zguzzw83l/wish/339386326