Group 4 by Emma https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston A place to post anything we have written today. It is a non-judgmental space, everything we write is important. en-us 2021-09-28 13:15:38 UTC 2024-07-05 02:33:20 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/270d.png Anything you want to write about? er352 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1799679523 We want you guys to enjoy these sessions so let us know what topics (e.g. writing poetry like song lyrics, script writing, writing about football... literally anything!) and we shall try our best to include them in some way!!]]> 2021-10-07 13:02:52 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1799679523 It was a normal day for Star Lord as he just cruised through the galaxy, searching all the other planets for unknown items in the universe. Eventually, after hours of looking he finds a new planet to explore. He lands his space ship and goes down the elevator to the space ship's basement where he puts his space suit on. The tight, leathery suit is put on with ease and his rocket boot https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1800062249 2021-10-07 14:46:13 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1800062249 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1800067990 I saw a pigeon limping on the sidewalk, and wasn’t sure whether it wanted some privacy to recuperate or if it needed help. I decided that now was the time; I looked around me to see if the coast was clear and chanted the words “actus animalis” 3 times whilst thinking of a pigeon. I felt my pores widen and held my breath in pain as the feathers grew out of me. My mouth turned into a beak, and by now my eyes were level with the pigeons. It looked at me with an air of surprise and after the initial shock it finally cooed  “those seagulls, they’re brutal!”
“Sorry to hear it - do you need any help?” I tweeted back. 


]]> 2021-10-07 14:47:51 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1800067990 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1817297156 It was just another ordinary day, well for me not for others. I have to save people climb buildings and swing on webs. I remember the first day I had my power as if it was yesterday the tingly sense when anything is gunna harm me and boom I react in an instance and the first time I climbed a wall. It happened when my mate pushed me and made me jump and landed onto the wall, I thought I was fine until I saw my friends face turn pale and sick. Then I looked down and realise how high I actually was just there stuck to the wall. My heart dropped lower than ever before and I started to shake as if I was in an earthquake. Also, the first time I shoot a web when I sneezed at it flung straight into my mates’ food, I don’t think he was very happy as he had a big frown, in the end he forgave me and realised so we went out to go play football but the weather had turned dark and gloomy as there was going to be a thunder storm. The sky rumbled just like my mate’s tummy as he had no food. We heard screams and running from a distance but we just ignored it as if it was a normal thing as my mate nudged me and just turned and ran without hesitation. My mind was in pure confusion but it was as if I was frozen stuck as I saw a glowing blue figure in the sky just floating 

 

]]> 2021-10-14 14:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1817297156 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1817309472 Today was no different to any other day, it was clear skies no cloud in sight, But not for one particular person, he was called Joey, Joey was a 16 year old boy who was misunderstood in school but recently he has acting very suspicious, there was not a day last week where he didn't wake up before 5 am which is very unusual because Joey often liked to sleep in, however he had been getting up and leaving before 6pm which surprised his dad very much, His dad was a lean and angular man in his late 30s he was gentle and had healthy conditions which had held him back from getting his dream job as a carpenter many years ago.  


]]> 2021-10-14 14:43:53 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1817309472 Colour-coding er352 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1817360338 Blake - Green posts 

Jack - Blue posts 

Bradley - Yellow posts 

Emma and Teeva - Purple posts ]]> 2021-10-14 14:58:58 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1817360338 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1833777905 the day was 28th of may 2022 it was the day of the champions league final, Real Madrid vs man city there was around 100,000 fans all staring as the fans chants filled the stadium. some fans were nervous and some was cheerful as the pen shoot out commenced. I stood there hoping my team would win with all my heart. the first player for real Madrid stood up for the first pen … GOAL. unfortunately they scored and my heart started pumping fast. how ever the first man city player stood up to take it and … GOAL. this continued until it was the last pen out of five for each team and I knew I had to take one. my heart dropped as I realized the best pen taker for real Madrid was walking up to take the pen and in my mind I thought we was screwed. he done his signature run up and … what a save by Edreson as the ,man city fans go wild. in my mind I knew this was it our chance for glory I shook with nerves and my stomach turned as I had butterflies. as I was walking up to take the penalty my heart thumped against my chest as I looked up and saw all the fans I could let down if I missed. I took a deep breath and started to run towards the ball... GOAL MAN CITY WIN THE CHAMPIONS LEAGUE! the crowd went crazy as I ran to my teammates as we celebrated are glory and I had a moment just to think " I will never forget this nigh.]]> 2021-10-21 14:45:11 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1833777905 Football narrative - Audience https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1833778660 I had to win this bet. It was a silly bet which I'd agreed upon when Dean and I had had one too many drinks. If my team lost, I'd let Dean choose what I wear to the graduation ceremony, and if his team lost he'd have to pay for our trip to Scandinavia. My eyes became blinkered as focused on the penalty-taker's feet; he seemed have decided on a promising angle. I imagined the humiliation that I knew Dean would put me through if he won. There's no doubting he's a wonderful friend, but he has an undoubtedly sadistic streak in him, especially when he's in a place of power.]]> 2021-10-21 14:45:23 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1833778660 Football - Goalie POV er352 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1833780553 Jumping up to hit the top post with my gloves, I stared at the player's feet. I'm not getting tricked again. This goal was my territory and no one was going to invade it, not even the best striker in the world. I wanted the gold badge on my kit next season and the gold medal to match. There would be no other option. Squatting down low, I glared up at the stadium lights letting the roar of the crowd fill my blood as it pumped through my body. I was going to give them a show. I couldn't wait to hear them cheer my name as I saved the last penalty kick in the Champions League final. Smelling the powerfully sweet scent of Lucozade in the bottle by my feet, I took one last swig from my bottle before I chucked it to the side. I waited for the ref's whistle and never left my eyes from the ball. The crowd became a blur as I dived to the left and captured the ball in my hands. Immediately the screams of celebration exploded across the pitch as my teammates came to congratulate me. I'd done it. We were champions. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:45:56 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1833780553 Emoji Stories - Jack M er352 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867749183 it was a ad day for Bradley as when he went to the toilet and took his hamster it jumped into the toilet as he flushed it. the hamster scurried through the pipes and was in fear but yet it had ambition that it would be good in the end. he kept going and going until he saw a little bit of light so his heart dropped with happiness and he ran all the way to it. out of no where he was shot up into a fountain which had some strange sign saying do not drink or you will die.

]]> 2021-11-04 15:24:36 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867749183 Emoji Stories - Blake er352 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867796698 Early one winters morning when the snow was falling and there wasn't a cloud in sight young Ethan woke up,  he was doing his normal routine, he woke up, had a shower, got dressed, and went downstairs. The cat which was purring from the window was trying to show Ethan something it was a snowman, that had miraculously appeared in the garden

]]> 2021-11-04 15:42:11 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867796698 Emoji Stories - Bradley er352 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867808091 a sunny day jack went on walk with his master to the local park. the park was very new and many people would go there daily but today it was empty, not a soul in site. there was a massive fountain in the centre of the park and people would flip coins into it to make wishes. so jack decided to make a wish himself. As the coin flipped into the fountain jacks hamster decided to jump in a fetch the coin but the master could not swim. jack panicked and jumped in and all the water splashed into his mouth as he tried to save the his hamster. the fountain had a massive sign saying the water isn't for drinking and jack unfortunately swallowed the water and tragically died but the hamster jumped out I still had the coin

]]> 2021-11-04 15:46:21 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867808091 Bradley - Phone - Object Narrative https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867811502 its pitch black wherever I am, I don't know where I am or where I'm going. Its very bumpy wherever I am and I can feel others around me in the vehicle. we come to a sudden stop. I hear the vehicle door open and we are picked up by someone and then put into a room I'm guessing the we are just left again. after a while, the boxes we have been living in was opened and hands picked me up and placed me in a smaller box and the it was dark again]]> 2021-11-04 15:47:31 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867811502 Jack - Football - Object Narrative https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867813358 it was a bright Sunday as my dad woke me up saying "come on get ready for football" so I got ready and got to the game as I saw the football sitting in the bag.

you may be wondering how I got here just a casual football sat in a bag. it was like it was yesterday that I was made in the Nike factory it was so big but there was millions of my friends we all thought we would get bought all together but it wasn't as we thought. I was bought just by myself and I wondered where I was going. maybe to a house, maybe to another box or even maybe to a professional football team but nope it was just in a dirty bag with a strange distinctive smell of shin pads and football boots. it was bad at first but I just learnt to get along with it and then I would look forward to every Sunday where I would get taken out and flung about between people. you may be thinking it would hurt me but it doesn't at all, surprisingly it makes me happy as it brings joy to the people that are playing football with me.

]]> 2021-11-04 15:48:15 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867813358 Teeva - Book story https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867813590 I was tracing my finger along the spine of my book I thought I heard a giggle. "That must be my sister" I thought, and proceeded to open the front page of "Summertime". I wrote my name in the corner in case I should lose it, and as I did so, I heard more giggling - this time louder, and less muffled. "Sorry, I'm a bit more sensitive than my siblings". To my surprise and horror, the book had started talking. "Now now, don't be scared - I know you're a trustworthy human who's endlessly curious about literature so it was only a matter of time before we'd decide to talk to you." I felt honoured, but thought it might be a dream. "No no, you're awake" It could read my thoughts! "You may be wondering how I was made, where I'm from, who has read me and why I'm so ticklish... well, sit comfortably and stop gaping." "It all began in Winchester. I began as a blank page, and had to witness Mr. Coetzees frustration as he tried to type out the first few words of my story."

]]> 2021-11-04 15:48:21 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867813590 Blake - Bucket - Object Narrative https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867814843 Just after coming out of the factory I was a bit confused about where I was, i got loaded into a truck along with thousands of other buckets it was a rough journey, the road was rocky and bouncy and i wasn't feeling very well, at last the journey was over and we were being transported, it was rather sunny, i saw it, it was the beach i couldn't wait for the children to play with me however things took a turn for the worse

]]> 2021-11-04 15:48:49 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1867814843 Comedy Character - Brainstorm from Jack and Blake https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1884493833 Dodgy hair, funny walk, funny posture, mumbled speech, big teeth, live in larkman bright red with green dot tracksuit, floppy fake blade, sliders with socks, a tie.  ]]> 2021-11-11 15:34:01 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1884493833 Writing Comedy - Jack M https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1884529944 A guy named s2slashy lived in Larkman. He was very well known by the whole area as the “roadman” who wore a bright distinctive tracksuit which had green spots on it and also for wearing his socks and sliders everywhere he went.

He was strolling down the street having a great day with his Fanta in his left hand and his phone in the other. he saw this girl who was his crush and he wanted to impress. “lightbulb” he had what he thought was the greatest idea in his life to try backflip off of the bin. So he got up and leaped and as it happen the bin fell and he went into the air almost sideways with no way to stop this fall. His face turned just as red as his tracksuit and he was full of embarrassment as the girl burst into laughter and walked away.

]]> 2021-11-11 15:47:50 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1884529944 Writing Comedy - Blake https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1884532364 Down in larkman one day lived the local “roadman” his name was C2trappy everybody knew him as the crazy guy of the block, he went out drinking with the boys, on this occasion he was at the bar trying to impress a girl, he then offered her a drink he ordered the drinks then tried to impress her by throwing the drink into the air and catching it, as soon as he done this somebody put their leg out and C2trappy tripped stumbled to the ground and broke his elbow the whole croud laughed they were bamstruck! 
Blake]]> 2021-11-11 15:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1884532364 Opening Line - Horror, Teeva https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1899880591 Dusk had not yet arrived, and the library interior looked still, solemn and overgrown with abandoned thoughts.]]> 2021-11-18 15:44:48 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1899880591 Detective Novel Opening Line - Emma er352 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1899883218 Finally the heavy, black smoke from the fire cleared and Detective Bloomberg's eyes caught a shadow of movement from behind the building as a tall, dark figure ran down the alleyway leaving ash footprints as he ran.]]> 2021-11-18 15:45:36 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1899883218 Bradley: this house has been built for many years but for awhile no one decided to step foot into it. https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1899888501 2021-11-18 15:47:43 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1899888501 Horror story Blake https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1899891661 The farm had been abandoned for several years now, ever since the day the old man died, the farm had never been the same.]]> 2021-11-18 15:48:50 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1899891661 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1899892140 in the summer of 1982 it was strangely cold and there was a hurricane ]]> 2021-11-18 15:49:01 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1899892140 Horror Writing Images Task - Jack er352 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1912886893 The house looked drained and broken as if it's had to deal with many things. The windows smashed and the glass sharp as a knife. The clouds near it struck with lightning that was so loud it was if it pierced through you.

]]> 2021-11-25 15:52:30 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1912886893 Horror Writing Images Task - Balke er352 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1912891406 The torrentuous, thundering clouds lay thick over the dismal derelict house, the bushes entangle over the dreaded walkway of terror.

]]> 2021-11-25 15:55:32 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1912891406 Horror Writing Images Task - Bradley er352 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1912892760 An abandoned old fashion style house with multiple smashed windows and weirdly has 2 front doors. the mist clouds collide with the roof of the house which had a roof which was rotting away.

]]> 2021-11-25 15:56:27 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1912892760 Horror Writing Image Task - Jack er352 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1912895013 The pumpkin had a strange but terrifying smile with seeds that were sharp as blades for its teeth and its eyes glowed orange just like the sun at dusk. The wrinkles gave an expression of oldness and that he had been scaring people for many years. With one long root that extended out with four short legs that crawled just like a spider.

]]> 2021-11-25 15:58:02 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1912895013 Horror Writing Images Task - Bradley er352 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1912896720 The pumpkin looked like it had been put on the end of a sunflower stork with a terrifying smile and has pumpkin seeds as teeth. Its eyes had an orange glow to them and the pumpkin looked very old and wrinkly.

]]> 2021-11-25 15:59:04 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1912896720 Horror Writing Images Task - Blake er352 https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1912899588 The pumpkin had red ferocious looking eyes, a mouth that can only be described as out of a horror movie, stem lechering almost like it will jump out the ground.

]]> 2021-11-25 16:00:50 UTC https://padlet.com/er352/group4ormiston/wish/1912899588