Year 10 creative writing. by Charlotte Cook https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q Descriptions. en-us 2019-03-12 14:36:06 UTC 2019-03-18 14:57:19 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Shakinghands.png cookc14 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/340455081 2019-03-12 15:02:03 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/340455081 Challenge: cookc14 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/340769139 Can you include ideas for metaphors, pathetic fallacy or personification?]]> 2019-03-13 09:33:19 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/340769139 Luke zonel https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221373 Beams of vibrant lights lured in swarms of unsuspecting youths from near by towns, as if they were flies heading for the sun. The highest point of the park cut through the pink stained sky, exposing a gush of blue blood. Amongst the sea of energised chaos was a single adolescent, climbing the steps to the towering coaster.]]> 2019-03-14 09:18:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221373 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221469 - loops of laughter come from the people as they are having the time of their life.

]]> 2019-03-14 09:19:06 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221469 Rides that free you from the confines of gravity https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221503 2019-03-14 09:19:13 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221503 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221527 Spirals of confusion, stand like skyscrapers in the centre of a city.]]> 2019-03-14 09:19:19 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221527 Willow https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221543 - An electric atmosphere buzzes through the fair]]> 2019-03-14 09:19:22 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221543 Zoe joblingz https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221557  - Neon lights from roller coaster illuminating the horizon

]]> 2019-03-14 09:19:25 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221557 Daisy Hill https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221571 Bright, lit up, illuminated, neon lights - a frenzy of colours ]]> 2019-03-14 09:19:28 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221571 Charis https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221628 Vibrant colours clashing with ecstatic noises explode into an array of happiness and exuberance.]]> 2019-03-14 09:19:40 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221628 Rides Saturated with magnificent hues https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221663 2019-03-14 09:19:48 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221663 roller coaster https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221686 exciting, fun, thrilling ---> sounds of scream and laughter ----> mood = jolly
Wheezing by people cry at it's presence while others enter with pride. ]]> 2019-03-14 09:19:53 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221686 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221748 screaming with excitement]]> 2019-03-14 09:20:09 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221748 Bismah https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221875 Peachy pink candyfloss dances in the air. ]]> 2019-03-14 09:20:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221875 Amy and Alice https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221906 -swarming crowds
-luminous/inviting lights
-twilight
-thrill seekers

]]> 2019-03-14 09:20:40 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221906 can hear roller coasters and people screaming and shouting on it with laughter and fear. vibrant bright colours. https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221908 2019-03-14 09:20:41 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221908 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221932 bright lights- striking and enticing]]> 2019-03-14 09:20:48 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221932 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221950 vivid bursts of amber and fuchsia light up the silent skies ]]> 2019-03-14 09:20:53 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221950 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221985 calm tranquil sky juxtaposing the hectic fair ground ]]> 2019-03-14 09:21:01 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341221985 Juxtaposition of fun and corporate greed https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222021 2019-03-14 09:21:11 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222021 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222045 Bright colours]]> 2019-03-14 09:21:18 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222045 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222049 Brilliant neon lights

Excited screams echoed from rides

]]> 2019-03-14 09:21:19 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222049 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222147 strong screams coming from the rollercoasters hurting my ears]]> 2019-03-14 09:21:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222147 Amelia https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222190 mouth watering food smells travel through happy bodies]]> 2019-03-14 09:21:55 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222190 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222192 - intoxicating smells of sugar]]> 2019-03-14 09:21:56 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222192 The mechanical chatter of roller-coasters zipping by https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222352 2019-03-14 09:22:32 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222352 Daisy https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222523 Bright, lit up, illuminated and vibrant neon - a frenzy of exotic colours]]> 2019-03-14 09:23:11 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222523 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222562 The rides have bright neon signage and you can hear teenagers screaming with fear. ]]> 2019-03-14 09:23:19 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222562 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222616 Gravity-defying loops and twists reserved only for the biggest thrill-seekers]]> 2019-03-14 09:23:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222616 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222731 Piercing screams ring through the air]]> 2019-03-14 09:24:02 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222731 The warm lights of the different stall fronts shone like molten gold out of the dusky umbra cast by the setting sun. Candy floss clouds seemed to swell with the sweet scent from all around. Writhing like glowing serpents, roller coaster tracks erupted out of the ground. griffinl3 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222858 2019-03-14 09:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/341222858 https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/342436803 blazing colours adorn the enormous metal frames 
miasma of smells from the various foods
bombardment of noise]]> 2019-03-18 14:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/cookc14/842ua0psnh8q/wish/342436803