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MY MOM

phanlank51ulis — 2023-03-08 12:22:38 UTC

Write a short paragraph (from 25 – 50 words) about your Mom. Circle the topic words or the words about the topic in each sentence. Underline the topic sentence and the concluding sentence.

My mom Le Quyen Khanh

2023-03-08 13:29:54 UTC

My mom is the best woman that I ever met.She is very beutiful,young women. She always kind with me and my family.She always appease me if I had stress.My mom also a best chef she always cook for me the delicious food.In the office my mom also a exemplary person. I love my mom and wishes she always hapiness and kind with everyone.

Format: ok
Structure: ok
Unity: ok
Coherence: nearly ok
Vocab and Grammar: con sử dụng được một số từ vựng hay, nhưng chú ý hơn phần ngữ pháp khi viết câu nhé.

=> 6.5/10

Suggested answer:
My mom is the best woman that I have ever met. She is a very beautiful young woman. She is always kind to my family and me. She always encourages me if I feel stressed. My mom is also the best chef, and she always cooks delicious food for me. In the office, my mom is also an exemplary person. I love my mom and wish her always happiness and kindness to everyone.

Nhật Minh

2023-03-08 13:29:55 UTC

My mom is the greatest person in the whole world. My mother name is Trang. My mom is 38 yeas old this year. Now, my mother is a accountant for agriculture bank. She is look after me and my brother very careful when my dad go for a business travel. My mother Trang is the person I most beloved in my family.

Format: ok
Structure: ok
Unity: ok
Coherence: ok
Vocab and grammar: con chú ý viết đúng chính tả và chia động từ thích hợp. Ngoài ra, con có thể phát triển ý thêm để bài viết phong phú nhé.

=> 6/10

Suggested answer:
My mom is the greatest person in the whole world. Her name is Trang., and she is 38 years old this year. Now, my mother is an accountant at Agriculture Bank. She looks after me and my brother very carefully when my dad goes on a business trip. My mother is the person I love most in my family.

About my mom (Thùy Dương)

2023-03-08 13:30:01 UTC

“We have only one sun and only one mother.” That is a saying in a song about my mother, which I like very much, she is the one who takes care of us, every meal, every sleep for us. My mother is very beautiful, has a tall and slim body, she has big round black eyes, and she is the one who cooks every meal for me, so I really appreciate her love for me. I love my mother very much.

Format: con chú ý lùi đầu dòng nhé.
Structure: ok
Unity: ok
Coherence: ok
Vocab and Grammar: good

=> 9.5/10

My Mom - Mai Khanh

2023-03-08 13:31:11 UTC

My mom is the best person in the world. Her name is Chi, a good accountant. At 37 years old, she is a very pretty woman. With her long hair and nice body, for me, she is as beautiful as a professional model. She is also my teacher, too. She teaches me Maths, Vietnamese,...My mom always takes care of me when I have a cold. In my heart, you are the superhero, Mom! I love you!

Format: con nhớ lùi đầu dòng nhé.
Structure: ok
Unity: ok
Coherence: nearly ok
Vocab and grammar: con cần chú ý hơn về chính tả và cách diễn đạt.

=> 7/10

Suggested answer:
My mom is the best person in the world. Her name is Chi, and she is a good accountant in an international company. At 37 years old, she is a very pretty woman. With long hair and a nice body, she is as beautiful as a professional model. She is my teacher, too. She teaches me Maths, Vietnamese and other subjects. My mom always takes care of me when I have a cold. In my heart, you are the superhero, Mom! I love you!

My mom - Mai Thu Giang

jangmina0510 — 2023-03-08 13:31:13 UTC

My mother is the most important person in the family. She is a great housewife. She is very kind and gentle. She always helps me with everything I need. I love my mom.

Format: ok
Structure: ok
Unity: ok
Coherence: ok
Vocab and structure: ok

=> 7/10 (con cố gắng viết bài dài hơn để thể hiện hết khả năng viết của mình nhé)

MY SUPERHERO _ Minh Khuê

2023-03-08 13:32:14 UTC

This is my mother. Her name is Nhu. She is 38 years old. Even though she's 38 years old, she's still as beautiful as never. Mom is a teacher and is teaching at Dan Phuong high school. Mom's work is quite busy, but she still spends all her free time with her family. Mom is not perfect, but to me, she is a superhero. Most importantly today is Women's Day in VietNam, wishing you a lot of health and becoming more and more beautiful. I love you!

Format: ok
Structure: ok
Unity: ok
Coherence: ok
Vocab and grammar: some spelling mistakes
=> 8.5/10

Chi

Nguyen_Chi — 2023-03-08 13:34:31 UTC

My mom is the best woman ever in my life. She is working as an officer, and she can do many things. At the office, she always tries to finish all the work on time. If someone asks her to help, she will happily do it. And she is very kind to her colleagues. At home, my mom usually does the housework. She likes cleanliness, so she never lets our room be messy. She also teaches me English. And she takes care of me and my sister very well. I hope she will be happy and beautiful forever in her life, at the age of 40. I love you, mom!

Format: ok
Structure: ok
Unity: ok
Coherence: ok
Vocab and grammar: good
=> 9.5/10