Which piece of writing is better? Why? by Mr. Lee Chun Hei Joseph https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56 en-us 2023-03-25 03:35:31 UTC 2023-03-28 02:44:49 UTC hello@padlet.com lch59 https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2531062096 2023-03-25 03:37:36 UTC https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2531062096 e.g. Group X lch59 https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534115564 e.g. 
- exemplar 1 is better.
- The student wrote more words.]]> 2023-03-28 01:00:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534115564 GP5 s201809084 https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534260046 Exempar2 is better
Cause the conclusion is better (maybe)]]> 2023-03-28 02:41:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534260046 Group 4 https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534260667 The examplar 2 have topic sentences,and also they have the researches to support their view]]> 2023-03-28 02:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534260667 Gp 1 s201809016 https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534261652 Exemplar2 's topic sentence is clear than the exemplar1]]> 2023-03-28 02:42:47 UTC https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534261652 Gp6 s201809055 https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534262387 Exemplar 2 is better 
Because there wereabundant details to support the sentence ]]> 2023-03-28 02:43:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534262387 Gp3 Exemplelar 2 is better s201809040 https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534262416 More experience ]]> 2023-03-28 02:43:21 UTC https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534262416 GP2 s201809002 https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534263529 Exemplar 2 is better
1.passive voice 
2.relative  cause ]]> 2023-03-28 02:44:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lch59/831trz1wsz8n6j56/wish/2534263529