Noah Google Sites Peer Feedback 2019 - 2020 by Noah Nocum https://padlet.com/26nnocum/82zq0al542ef Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 16:40:27 UTC 2019-12-10 19:21:14 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png https://padlet.com/26nnocum/82zq0al542ef/wish/420860942 I enjoyed the story I like the part when you made The dad kind of fight back bob was being annoying because it was the same reason his mom died I it kind of all fit in with the plot of the story ]]> 2019-12-06 16:50:36 UTC https://padlet.com/26nnocum/82zq0al542ef/wish/420860942 Story feedback-Lucas Cacciatore 26lcacciatore https://padlet.com/26nnocum/82zq0al542ef/wish/422376427 I like how you showed bobs feeling and didn’t tell how he felt. A strength you can use for your story is to edit your story so there's not that much dialogue. 
This can help people understand the text more so it's not back and forth dialogue. I wish that bob would learn a lesson before being nice for know reason.     

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