https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz en-us 2023-09-27 16:56:29 UTC 2025-10-27 15:18:30 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723471860 I think i should work on adding details and examples. While being specific and clear]]> 2023-09-27 17:03:04 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723471860 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723475625 After the feedback I received from my essay I think I could focus more on my thesis statement. I can also work on giving better examples to back up my claim.]]> 2023-09-27 17:05:23 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723475625 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723475896 Some writing goals i need to work on are my transition and vocabulary words. I also need to work on being more descriptive on my writing. ]]> 2023-09-27 17:05:34 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723475896 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723476941 Some writing goals I need to work on are, using more examples/details and better transition words. I also need to work on using better vocabulary words and being more clear and specific. ]]> 2023-09-27 17:06:06 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723476941 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723477387 -I plan on establishing stronger conclusions.
-I plan to improve on my organization and be straightforward in my essays.
-I plan on using more interesting transitions,words, and hooks to give my essays more of an intriguing effect. ]]> 2023-09-27 17:06:23 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723477387 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723477591 What I think I need to improve on is adding more examples and explaining things more. In addition, I can also add better intros and claims to my essay.]]> 2023-09-27 17:06:32 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723477591 elliep71 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723478695 After the feedback I received from the baseline essay, I think that my writing goals should be to improve my grammar. I also think I need to work on building a stronger conclusion and to write better details.]]> 2023-09-27 17:07:16 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723478695 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723478905 After the feedback I received from the baseline essay some of my writing goals are to improve my grammar and to add an appropriate amount of evidence. Another thing I could work on is my transition words.]]> 2023-09-27 17:07:25 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723478905 ethanj64 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723480844 My goal is to improve more on developing my introductions and my conclusions. ]]> 2023-09-27 17:08:40 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723480844 elijahj137 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723481051 Some of my writing goals are to get better at writing different details and to make sure that I don't repeat what I already said.]]> 2023-09-27 17:08:48 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723481051 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723481541 Based on the feedback I received, I should work on being more specific with my examples and give more analysis/insight on them. I also think I could work on adding more advanced vocabulary.]]> 2023-09-27 17:09:07 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723481541 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723481852 One of my writing goals is to be clearer with my writing and be able to further explain what I mean. I also want to use more higher vocabulary words and organize my ideas better.]]> 2023-09-27 17:09:20 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723481852 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723484790 My writing goals are that I need to focus on putting more details,add transition words and explaining things more detailed.]]> 2023-09-27 17:11:00 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723484790 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723485850 After I read through my feedback I think I need to strengthen my conclusion and give more analysis on my evidence/ examples.]]> 2023-09-27 17:11:47 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723485850 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723486017 After the feedback I received from the baseline essay I should work on further elaborating on my introductions and making sure my thesis is clear and understandable ]]> 2023-09-27 17:11:54 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723486017 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723487325 One of my writing goals is have better evidence and write essay with hard evidence. Another writing goals that I have is have better thesis.]]> 2023-09-27 17:12:44 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723487325 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723487455 Some of my writing goals are to explain more details and or add examples to my writing but also to restate the conclusion. ]]> 2023-09-27 17:12:46 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723487455 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723490917 Bᴀsᴇᴅ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ғᴇᴇᴅʙᴀᴄᴋ I ʀᴇᴄᴇɪᴠᴇᴅ,  sʜᴏᴜʟᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋ ᴏɴ ᴇʟᴀʙᴏʀᴀᴛɪɴɢ ᴏɴ ᴍʏ ᴇxᴀᴍᴘʟᴇs ᴀɴᴅ ᴍʏ ʀᴇᴀsᴏɴɪɴɢ. I ᴀʟsᴏ sʜᴏᴜʟᴅ ɴᴏᴛ ɢᴏ ᴏғғ-ᴛᴏᴘɪᴄ ɪɴ ᴍʏ ʀᴇᴀsᴏɴɪɴɢ.

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]]> 2023-09-27 17:14:59 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723490917 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723491168 From the feedback that Ms.Brizard gave me I found out that I will not include the actual reasons in my intro and I will use YOU instead of I whenever I am talking about my own expieriences.]]> 2023-09-27 17:15:10 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723491168 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723493677 One of my writing goals is to stay more on track, i kept repeating some of my examples. Another writing goal is to come up with more ideas because I was running out of things to say.]]> 2023-09-27 17:16:42 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723493677 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723494427 When I read the feedback on my essay. I came to the conclusion that I need to work on strengthening my claim. I also might need to work on my transition and grammer. Another thing I need to work on is just restating my claim and be less vauge overall.]]> 2023-09-27 17:17:11 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723494427 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723496274 After the feedback I received from my baseline essay, one of my writing goals in the future is to check my organization skills. The main reason why I said this is because last time I made my essay, I was unaware that I put the wrong topic in the wrong paragraph. Next time I am given an essay, I will make sure to keep track of this when revising. ]]> 2023-09-27 17:18:27 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723496274 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723496746 Based on my feedback, Some things of my new writing goals would be having a stronger conclusion and more transition words in the beginning of the paragraph.]]> 2023-09-27 17:18:46 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723496746 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723505297 One of my writing goals is to stay on track, i kept repeating my examples,  So for next time I won't do the same. I will do even better to get a 4 next time.]]> 2023-09-27 17:24:41 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2723505297 https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2730221262 Based on my feedback, I need to work on being more specific about an idea and sticking with that idea. I need to stop getting caught in the weeds and analyze the main topic/main idea.]]> 2023-10-03 13:12:05 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/82uanjlnykzciviz/wish/2730221262