i like how you write how surya & binar slowly succumbs into their raw desire & lust. (and somehow very relatable reaction from surya on how working life be :D)

this as a meal is also a joy to read because who doesn't love nen being taken care by syong :3

truly penulis bokep kabupaten favorit warga [salute]

looking forward to your writings in the future, gemi!! 💗

the first thing i noticed was how this work was more formal-ish (for the lack of better words) compared to your other writings, and i found it very fitting to sungchan’s character here as he is older than your usual characters. i love your writing style either way, and i can still sense your usual style. your writing have their own charms that makes me goes ‘oh, this is kak gemi’ really, but i love how this work feels more serious which is highly suitable in depicting surya’s train of thought as someone in his thirties.

on top of that, characterization was definitely your strong point. i can understand both surya and binar’s point of view clearly here. i can feel surya’s admiration towards binar and how binar wants surya badly just the same. i’m not good in visualizing thing in my head, yet you really have your way with words to describe something detailed enough and effectively that it allows me to create a mental image about how pretty binar is in surya’s point of view, which undoubtedly contributes to a pleasant reading experience overall.

another thing that i love the most is how this work feels heartwarming to read. i’m such a sucker for consent, so i’m definitely touched to see how surya values consent here, how he asked binar when he’s about to do the penetration part, how he refused binar’s request because he knows binar is not in the right state to think. despite the work was intended to be written as porn, it’s full of tenderness and warmth, and it’s genuinely endearing.

good job, kak gemi! thank you for writing, and once again, i deeply appreciate you for choosing me to read this one. i’m so glad i get to live in the same lifetime as you and i were given a chance to enjoy your masterpieces. your writings never fail to give me a happiness, so i hope you always find your happiness in writing too.

beberapa tulisan orang lain yang aku baca masih banyak bagian nsfw yang buat aku bingung buat bayanginnya, tapi tulisanmu sama sekali engga, semua digambar rapih sama kamu.

kalo dari aku sendiri jarang banget buat baca gs, apalagi aku baru-baru ini suka riize mungkin baru sebulan(?)

Karena disatu sisi aku ngga nyaman, tapi aku bisa buat pengecualian untuk tulisan kamu!

Binar bener bener ditulis sempurna, walau gs aku bisa liat cantiknya dia situ... ketemu Surya yang perbedaan umurnya cukup jauh menurut aku. makasih udah buat binar disayang sayang (habis ini aku ambil antrian buat sayang binar FUFU)

ditunggu next work mu kak, muah❣️

I’ll be separating the review by aspects so, here ya go:

— PLOT WISE

It’s the classic trope pekob terapis done right, I’d call this PWF (porn with feelings) instead of PWP 🤣🤣🤣.

Plot wise, I like how it flows smoothly. Pacingnya enak, dan terkesan lebih lambat (in a good way) to let us savor every scene. Transisi scenenya nggak terburu, nggak kelihatan terpaksa, it’s ~flows~. Suka, sih, pas ngeliat dua duanya memang anapologetically horny to each other 😙😙😙 kayak, semua frustasinya Surya yang kita liat di awal jadi bahan olokan aja, toh ujung-ujungnya mau sama mau (gw sampe bilang ‘HA MAMAM NOH MALU-MALU’ ke Surya).

— CHARACTER WISE

Binar is so PRETTY. The vague description about her beauty feels right, nggak dipaksakan, nggak terlalu memuja (bcs they just met), tapi keliatan banget Surya tuh kesemsem 😅 tp makes sense sih karena ya Binar, both physical and behaviour wise, sangat screaming ‘KEMBANG DESA’. What I like is while she’s shy about her needs, doesn’t mean she don’t know what to do. She got talent ya 😛

Surya … Surya is funny. Sesama budak korporat gw paham capeknya. His hesitation to call the therapist is actually endearing, ragu-ragu dan hati-hati nya Surya indicates he’s a good person. Tapi ya, the moment he’s blinded with desire, perlahan keliatan sih Surya yang nakal gimana. He’s suave, he knows what to do with his hands (and mouth), dia dewasa, tapi keragu-raguannya bikin dia keliatan lebih juvenile dr itu (wajar Binar bilang Surya looks younger than his actual age).

Dinamika mereka gemas, si pemalu dan si canggung. Pelan pelan banget sih, suka :”)))

— WRITING WISE

I always adored how you write porn tbh HAHA, kayak anapologetically horny tapi juga sweet dan gemas (seperti di kita usahakan onesie kodok itu), di sini diamp-up sweetnessnya makanya I call it PWF. Meskipun mereka belom ada ikatan emosi apapun, at least we know how they feel.

Kayaknya my only complain adalah bagaimana relasi Surya dan Binar abis itu 😛😛😛😛 siapa tau Surya jd punya sesi pijat privat sama Binar HAHAHA

Kira kira begitu sih HAHAH, thankyou again for the opportunity and may u success in ur endeavor ❤️‍🔥

aku beneran TERIAK?!?! SENENG BGT 🤧🤧🤧

Pertama baca aku langsung ngeh kalo ternyata karya kakak kali ini ditulis dgn bahasa yg lbh formal daripada biasanya. Kak Gemi selalu jago bgt buat membawa cerita, semua diceritain secara pelan-pelan tapi JELAS. Surya dari awal udah naksir berat sama Binar, sampe canggung dan mjd tolol. Tapi siapa yg ga naksir sama mbak binar yg ANGGUN DAN KALEM AAAGGH. Binar juga diem-diem udah kesemsem sama Surya kannn. Surya kocak bgt, canggung tapi lu NAKAL tapi CANGGUNG dan lucu. Binarr...malu-malu tapi mau. Dinamika mereka berdua menarik bgt!

Penjabaran karakternya bener-bener rapi dan runtut, jadi baca dari awal sampai akhir pun kita jadi inget kalau karakter surya dan binar tu spt ini, dan itu asik bgt🌟 Buatku bagian yg paling kocak waktu surya balik badan?!?!? 😭😭

Trus kita smpe di part paling DEG, "kalau mau pijat ***** *******" disensor soalnya kalian hrus baca sendiri!! :p

DAMNN, pening kepalaku. Sbg pembaca bisa tau masing-masing povnya surya dan binar, tanpa pusing sama sekali, agh enjoy bgt bacanya nyamm. Aku paling suka waktu surya nnyain consent ke binar

AGHH MAS SURYAAAA:((( kak gemi kenapa bisa bikin porn yg sweet begini:( ♡♡

Bener dah, tulisan kak gemi tu alus, ngalir gitu aja sampe tulisan porn aja bisa se ngalir ini, ga buru-buru. Scenenya pun semua asik beneran, kalo dilewatin 1 scene aja kayak RUGI DONG?!

Aaak aku cuma bisa menulis sampai segini:( gomenne. Aku menunggu kelanjutannya BINAR DAN SURYA🔥🔥kira" mas Surya dan mbak Binar msh berhubungan atau bgaimana ☎️

KEREN KAK GEMIII!! Makasih udah menulis karya se CANTIK INI, makasih udah milih aku buat review karya kakak yg sgt muach💓💓 Semoga kakak makan enak dan tidur nyenyak hehe:D :D, ditunggu selalu karyanyaaaaa🤧🌟🤟🏻

seperti biasa tulisan kamu ngga pernah mengecewakan! selalu suka gimana cerita kamu ngalir banget, flownya kaya pas aja gitu. enak banget dibaca🥺 not to mention walaupun kamu nulis bokep kampung yang banyak menggunakan local profanities tapi tulisan kamu sangat rapih dan cantik? idk pokoknya aku suka banget sama writing style kamu :<

walaupun aku ngga familiar sama syongnen, tapi aku sangat menikmati bacanya! gimana surya yang dari awal masih malu-malu dan gugup, terus binarnya juga... dari cara kamu nulis karakter dia aku bisa bayangin kalau dia cantik banget! pantes si surya itu ketar ketir :p

padahal mereka itu ngewe di pertemuan pertama... tapi... kenapa ya romantis banget? manis banget? kaya aku senyam senyum sendiri bayangin mereka bersenggama dengan penuh cinta? seneng deh baca tulisan ngewe dengan indah kaya gini. makasih ya gemi udah mau berbagi tulisan-tulisan indahnya buat kita semua♡

p.s. aku cinta mati please nulis terus mwah