Dear Darren, Hello! Guess what? I am writing this email to you is because I want to invite you to my schools trip to the science museum.I am the most excited to see the dinosaurs bones at the science museum.That is all from me,bye! Love,

Giselle Leong

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Dear Darren,

Hello! Guess what? I’m writing this email because I want to invite you to my school’s trip to the science museum next Sunday. I’m most excited to see the dinosaur fossils there — they are going to be so cool!

I hope you can join us on this trip. It will be an unforgettable experience!

Love,

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Giselle Leong Dear Ella, Hi!Guess what?I saw a notice about a swimming course that I think you would really like.I would like to invite you to the swimming course at Bukit Indah Public Pool from 10a.m. to 11.30a.m. , every saturday and it starts from 1 August 2025 , the fee is RM100 for 4 lessons. It is suitable for beginners,and it is taught by a certified coach Mr.Qi Han.You can contact 012-7788990 for registration,that is all from me,bye! Regards,

Giselle

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Dear Ella,

Hi! Guess what? I saw a notice about a swimming course that I think you would really like. I would like to invite you to join the course at Bukit Indah Public Pool. It will be held every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m., starting on 1 August 2025.

The fee is RM100 for four lessons. The course is suitable for beginners and will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han. If you’re interested, you can contact 012-7788990 for registration.

I hope you can join me! That’s all from me. Bye!

Regards,
Giselle

Dear Darren,

Hi! My school is organizing a trip to a science museum. I would like to invite you to this trip in Singapore on Sunday from 7a.m. to 1p.m. I am excited to see the different kinds of experiments. Let me know what if you are interested. Bye!

Regards,

Aden

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Dear Darren,

Hi! My school is organizing a trip to a science museum, and I would like to invite you to join us. The trip will be held in Singapore on Sunday from 7:00 a.m. to 1:00 p.m.

I’m really excited to see the different kinds of experiments there, and I think you’ll enjoy them too. Please let me know if you’re interested in coming along.

Bye for now!

Regards,
Aden

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Dear sister,

I saw a notice about a swimming course and I would like to invite you. It is at Bukit Indah Public Pool ant 1 August 2025 on every Saturday from 10.00 a.m. - 11.30 a.m. The fee is RM100 for 4 lessons. The fee is affordable and reasonable. Plus, the courses are suitable for beginners and it is taught by a certified coach Mr. Qi Han. If you have any questions, feel free to contact 012-7788990 for registration. Let me know what you think. Bye.

Regards,

Aden

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Dear Sister,

I saw a notice about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to join me! It will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool starting on 1 August 2025, every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.

The fee is RM100 for four lessons, which is affordable and reasonable. The course is suitable for beginners and will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han.

If you have any questions, feel free to contact 012-7788990 for registration. Let me know what you think and I hope you can join me!Bye for now!

Regards,
Aden

Dear Darren ,

Guess what ? My school is organising a trip to a science museum and I would like to invite you to join me . It starts from 8 a.m. to 3 p.m. and will be held on 1 December 2025 , at KL . I am excited to explore the science museum . We will going to have a whale of time .Don’t miss the boat !

Regards ,

Misha

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Dear sister ,

Guess what ? I came across a notice about a swimming course and I would like you to join me . It will be held on 1 August 2025 , every Saturday 10 a.m. to 11 30 a.m. , at Bukit Indah Public Pool . The fee is RM 100 for 4 lessons . It is reasonable and affordable . The lessons will be taught by a certified coach Mr . Qi Han . Call 012-778-990 for registration . Would you like to join ?

Don’t miss the boat !

Regards ,

Misha

Dear Darren,

our school is organizing a trip to a science museum.I wanted to invite you. It you are interesting in this trip, please join me!

Regards,

Tze xuan

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Dear Darren,

Our school is organizing a trip to a science museum next Sunday, and I would like to invite you to join us! If you are interested in this trip, please come along with me! I am excited to see dinasour fossils. It will be lots of fun!

Regards,
Tze Xuan

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Dear sister,

I saw a poster about swimming course.The location is at Bukit Indah public pool.The start Date is 1 August 2025.The class start every Saturday,10.00a.m.-11.30a.m.The fee is Rm100 for 4 lessons.Suitable for beginners.Taught by certified coach Mr.Qi Han.

It you are interested in swimming,you can sign up.

Your brother,

Tze xuan

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Dear Sister,

I saw a poster about a swimming course and thought you might be interested. The location is Bukit Indah Public Pool, and the classes will start on 1 August 2025. They will be held every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.

The fee is RM100 for four lessons. The course is suitable for beginners and will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han.

If you are interested in swimming, you can sign up for the course. Looking forward to your reply!

Your brother,
Tze Xuan

Dear Darren,

Hi! How are you doing? There is a swimming course at Bukit Indah Public Pool, I would like to invite you because I know you love swimming. It will start at 1 August 2025, every Saturday, 10.00a.m. to 11.30p.m. The fee is Rm 100 for four lessons. I am super excited explore it. I will give you the contact number, it is 012-7788990 for registration. Would you like to join me? Looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

Lucious.

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Dear Darren,

Hi! How are you doing? There is a swimming course at Bukit Indah Public Pool, and I would like to invite you because I know you love swimming. It will start on 1 August 2025, and the classes will be held every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.

The fee is RM100 for four lessons. I’m super excited to explore this course, and I think we will have a great time together. If you’re interested, you can contact 012-7788990 for registration.

Would you like to join me? I’m looking forward to your reply!

Regards,
Lucious

Dear Darren,

Hi! I hope you are in the of health. I would like to invite you organizing a trip to a science museum in Kuala Lumpur on this Sunday. I am excited to see the experiment in the science museum. I hope you can join the trip with me.

Write back soon.

Regards,

Yan Ann

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Dear Darren,

Hi! I hope you are in the pink of health. I would like to invite you to join a trip to a science museum in Kuala Lumpur this Sunday. I’m really excited to see the experiments there, and I hope you can join the trip with me.

Write back soon!

Regards,
Yan Ann

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Dear sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a notice aabout a swimming course and I would like to invite you to join me. The swimming course start on 1stAugust2025, every Saturday, from 10:00a.m. to 11:00a.m. The fee is RM100 for 4 lessons which is reasonable and affordable. If you are interested, you can contact 012-7788990 for registration.

Write back soon.

Regards,

Yan Ann

Dear Darren,

Hi! My school is organizing a trip to a science museum. I would like to invite you to go with me. This trip is at Kuala Lumpur and will be scheduled this Saturday at 8.00a.m. I am excited to explore the model of the sun galaxy. I bet it will be fun. would you join me?

Regards,

Powell

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Dear sister,

Hi! I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a notice about a swimming course and would like you to join me. This swimming course is at Bukit Indah Public Pool. It starts on 1 August 2025 at every Saturday,from 10.00 a.m. to 11.30 a.m. The fee is RM100 for 4 lessons. It is affordable. This course is suitable for beginners, and the lessons are taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han. If you want to register,do not hesitate to contact 0127788990 for registration. Looking forward to your reply.

Your brother,

Powell

To: darren@gmail.com

Subject: A trip to a science museum

Dear Darren,

Hi! Guess what? My school is organizing a trip to a science museum. It will start the trip to the science museum on Saturday, at Melaka . I can't wait to see the experience of making a potion as I'm very interested since I was little. I also can't wait to play some games there. In my opinion, It would be a whale of a time if we could join together. Do you want to tag along?

Let me know if you're interested. I'll pen off now. Bye!

Regards,

Hoi Ling

Part 7 14/15

Hi! How are you? I hope this email finds you well. Guess what? I saw a notice about a swimming course, and I think it would be fun to join it together. The swimming course starts on 1st August 2025, every Saturday, from 10.00 a.m. to 11.30p.m. at Bukit Indah Public pool. The fee is RM100 for 4 lessons, it's affordable and pratical, reasonable. Plus, ithe class will be taught by a certified coach ,Mr. Qi Han. If you're interested ,please contact 012-7788990 for registration.

Let me know if you're interested. Bye for now.

Regards,

Hoi Ling

Dear Darren,

Hi! My school is organizing a trip to a science museum next Sunday. I would like to invite you to go to the trip join me!I am excited to see some science exhibits. I hope you can go with me the trip. Hope to see you at there.

Regards,

Zhen Hong

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Dear Sister,

I hope you are doing well. I saw a notice about a swimming course. I would like to invite you to come with me. The swimming course is starts on 1 August from 10a.m. to 11:30a.m. at Bukit Indah Public Pool. The fee is RM100 for 4 lessons and it is affordable. It is suitable for beginners, and we are taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han. If you are interested, you can contact 012-7788990 for registration. Hope to see you at there. Await your reply.

Regards,

Zhen Hong

Dear Darren,

How are you? My school is organizing a trip to a science museum. The trip will be held on 8 November 2025 from 7.30a.m. to 5.00p.m. I am very excited to see the robot dog because I think it is very cute. Do you want to join me?

Regards,

Law Qin Er

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Dear Sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a notice about a swimming course. The swimming course will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool ,the start date is on 1 August 2025 ,every Saturday from 10.00a.m. to 11.30a.m. The fee is RM100 for 4 lessons. It is suitable for beginners. The coach is Mr . Qi Han. Do you want to join me? If you want to join, you can contact 012-7788990 for registration. Looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

Law Qin Er

Guess what? I've signed up for a weekend cooking class to learn Italian cuisine! It starts this Saturday at 10 a.m. As you know, I've always loved Italian food and want to improve my cooking skills. I believe you'll find it interesting too!

Let me know if you'd like to join!

Best regards,

Veann

Dear Darren,

Hi! My school is organizing a trip to a science museum. I hope you can go with me to the science museum. It's at Penang in next Saturday. I most excited to see the science of pictures can be move. Can you join with me?

Regards,

Chloe Chin

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Dear Darren,

Hi! My school is organizing a trip to a science museum, and I hope you can go with me. The trip will be held in Penang next Saturday.

I am most excited to see the science exhibits where pictures can move — it sounds so interesting! Can you join me?

Regards,
Chloe Chin

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Dear sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a notice about a swimming course. It's at Bukit Indah Public Pool on 1 August 2025 every Saturday, 10.00 a.m. - 11.30a.m.. The fee is RM100 for 4 lessons. The couch is by certificate couch Mr. Qi Han. If you are interesting, contact 012-7788990.

Let me know soon.

Regards,

Chloe

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Dear Sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a notice about a swimming course that I think you might be interested in. It will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool starting on 1 August 2025, every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.

The fee is RM100 for four lessons, and the course will be taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han. If you are interested, you can contact 012-7788990 for more details.

Let me know soon!

Regards,
Chloe

Dear Darren,

Hi! I hope you are in the pink of health. My school is organizing a trip to a Kuala Lumpur Science Museum. I would like to invite you to join me. The trip is on 16th October2025, Saturday from 10am to 6pm. We will depart from School ABC. I am most excited to see the ancient mummies. Besides, I would like to do the science experiment with you. It will be a fun and interesting trip.

Don't miss the boat. Let's go together. Looking forward to your reply. Bye!

Warm regards,

Kah Him

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Dear Yi Qing,

I saw a notice about a swimming course. I would like to invite you to join. The swimming course will start on 1st August 2025 and will be held every Saturday, from 10am to 11:30am. The monthly fee is RM100 for 4 lessons, it is reasonable and affordable. It is located at Bukit Indah Public Pool. The swimming course is suitable for beginners. It will be taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han. Please contact 012-7788990 for registration.

Don't miss the boat. Let's go together. Looking forward to your reply. Bye!

Your brother,

Kah Him

Dear Darren,

Hi! My school is organizing a trip to a science museum in Kuala Lumpur. I would like to invite you to join the trip. It will be held on 17 October 2025. I'm excited to see dinosaur fossils and space dome. Would you like to join with me? Please write back soon. Bye!

Regards,

Esther

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Dear Ella,

How are you? I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a notice about swimming course. Would you like to join with me? It will be held on 1 August 2025, at Bukit Indah Public Pool from 10:00a.m. to 11:30a.m. The fee is only RM100 for 4 lessons. Sounds amazing , right ? It's suitable for beginners like us. Moreover, it is taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han. If you are interested, please contact 012-7788990 for registration. Don't miss the boat. Hope to hear from you soon. Bye for now!

Regards,

Esther

Dear Darren,

Hi! My school is organizing a trip to a science museum. I would like to invite you in 9.00 a.m. to 11.00 a.m. I am excited to see the space gallery. Looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

Joe Mun

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Dear Darren,

Hi! My school is organizing a trip to a science museum, and I would like to invite you to join me. The trip will be held from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m.

I’m really excited to see the space gallery, and I hope you can come along. I’m looking forward to your reply!

Regards,
Joe Mun

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Dear Sister ,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a notice about a swimming course. I would like to invite you. The location on Bukit Indah Public pool. The start date in 1 August 2025 and time at Saturday l0.00 a.m. at 11.30 a.m. The fee is RM100 for 4 lesson. Looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

Joe Mun

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Dear Sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a notice about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to join me. The course will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool.

It will start on 1 August 2025 and take place every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. The fee is RM100 for four lessons, which is budget friendly. If you are interested, please contact 012-7788990 for registration.

I’m looking forward to your reply!

Regards,
Joe Mun

Guess what?My school is organizing a trip to a science museum .I would like to invite you to go a trip in science museum on this Saturday.I am excited to see the science history.I hope you can join this trip.Looking forward to your reply.Bye!

Regards,

Giselle Cham

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Dear Darren,

Guess what? My school is organizing a trip to a science museum, and I would like to invite you to join me. The trip will be held this Saturday, and I’m really excited to learn about the history of science.

I hope you can join this trip. I’m looking forward to your reply. Bye for now!

Regards,
Giselle Cham

Dear Darren,

Hi! I hope you are in the pink. Our school is organizing a trip to a science museum, and I would like to invite you in the trip. I am excited to explore the physics zone. I hope you can come to the trip along! We will have a lot of fun together.

Regards,

Yihan.

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Dear Emma,

Hi! I hope you are in the pink. I saw a notice about a swimming course and I would like to invite you to join me. The location It is held at Bukit Indah Public Pool,on 1 August, every Saturday,from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30a.m. Guess what? The fee is only RM 100 for 4 lessons. The course is suitable for beginners, and its taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han. If you are interested to join this swimming course,you can contact 012-7788990 for registration. I hope we can join this swimming course together.

Regards,

Yihan

Dear Daren,

Hi! I hope you as fit as a fiddle. Our school is organizing a trip to a science museum. I would like to invite you, the sains muzeum is at penang island. I am excited to explore, for example sains quiz, animal corner and more. The ticket is RM 20 per person. are interested? Let me know. Bye for now!

Regards,

Kayson Lau

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Dear Darren,

Hi! I hope you are as fit as a fiddle. Our school is organizing a trip to a science museum, and I would like to invite you to join me. The science museum is located on Penang Island.

I’m excited to explore all the activities, such as the science quiz, animal corner, and many more. The ticket price is RM20 per person. Are you interested? Please let me know.

Bye for now!

Regards,
Kayson Lau

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Kayson Lau Rui Xuan

Subject: Swimming Course

Dear Sister,

I came across a notice about a swimming course. I would like to invite you to join me. It well be held on 1 August and 10:00a.m. to 11:30a.m . The fee is RM 100 for 4 lessons, the course is suitable for beginners. Taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han. If you are interested, please contact: 012-7788990 for registration. Don't miss the boat. Looking forward to your reply. Bye for now!

Regards,

Kayson Lau

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Dear Sister,

I came across a notice about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to join me. It will be held on 1 August from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. The fee is RM100 for four lessons, and the course is suitable for beginners. It will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han.

If you are interested, please contact 012-7788990 for registration. Don’t miss the boat! I’m looking forward to your reply. Bye for now!

Regards,
Kayson

Dear Darren,

Hi! My school is organizing a trip to a science museum, so I'd like to invite you to come with me! The museum is at Kuala Lumpur, and the trip is held on 4 November. I'm very excited to go to the museum with you, because I like to explore the Historical relics! Can you join with me? Hope you can free at on that day. Bye for now!

Regards,

Yun Xuan

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Dear Celine,

Hi. I'd like you to join with me the Swimming Course. I'm interested at that course! Can you join with me? I hope you can. It's at Bukit Indah Public Pool, and start at 1 August 2025. The time is every Saturdays, from 10.00a.m. to 11.30 a.m. It's taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han. Looking forward to you reply, bye!

Regards,

Yun Xuan

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Dear Celine,

Hi! I’d like to invite you to join me for a swimming course. I’m really interested in this course, and I hope you can join me too!

It will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool and will start on 1 August 2025. The classes are on Saturdays from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. and will be taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han. He is an experienced coach.

I’m looking forward to your reply. Bye for now!

Regards,
Yun Xuan

Dear Darren, How are you?I hope you are in the pink of health.I would like to invite you to organize a trip to a svience museum.It is in KL and it is organizing at 29thSeptember.In there, we can exprole some exciting things.There are very interesting,you must join it!If you're intereting,please let me know.Looking forward to your reply. Regards, Jia Xian corrected

Dear Darren,

How are you? I hope you are in the pink of health. I would like to invite you to join a trip to a science museum. It will be held in Kuala Lumpur on 29th September.

There, we can explore many exciting exhibits and learn new things together. They are very interesting, and you must join us! If you are interested, please let me know.

I’m looking forward to your reply!

Regards,
Jia Xian

Part7 - 11/15 Dear sister, How are you?I hope you are in the pink of health.Guess what?I saw a notice about a swimming course.The start date is 1Agust2025.The location is Bukit Indah Pubic Pool.The time is every Saturday,10.00a.m. to11.30a.m.The fee is RM100 for 4 lessons.If you're interested,taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han and the contact is 012-7788990 for registration.Let me know if you are interested.Looking forward to your reply. Regards, Jia Xian

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Dear Sister,

How are you? I hope you are in the pink of health. Guess what? I saw a notice about a swimming course that I think you might be interested in.

The course will start on 1 August 2025 and will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool. The time is every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. The fee is RM100 for four lessons. The course will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han, and you can contact 012-7788990 for registration.

Let me know if you are interested. I’m looking forward to your reply!

Regards,
JIa Xian

Guess what?I saw a notice about a swiming course.I would like to invite you join swiming course.We start on 1August2025 .Every Saturday,10.00a.m.-11.30a.m. . The fee RM100 for 4 lessons it is bouget friendly.Taught by certified Mr.Qi.If you want to join you can contact012-7788990 for registration.Looking forward to your reply!

Regards,

Giselle Cham

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Dear Sister,

Guess what? I saw a notice about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to join me. The course will start on 1 August 2025 and will be held every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.

The fee is RM100 for four lessons, and it is budget-friendly. The course will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han. If you want to join, you can contact 012-7788990 for registration.I’m looking forward to your reply!

Regards,
Giselle Cham

Dear Darren,

Hi! how are you?I would invite you to join with me on a trip to a science museum in Kuala Lumpur on 5th October.I am excited to explore static displays of objects related to natural history.Would you like to join with me?Bye for now!

Regards,

Rou Xuan

Part 7

Dear Rou En,( wrong name)

Hi!How are you?I saw a notice about a swimming course.I would invite you to join with me.The date is star from 1August2025, from 10:00a.m. to 11:30a.m.the swimming course will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool.The fee is only RM100 for 4 lesson. I t was affordable and reasonable.It is suitable for beginners.If you are interested please contact 012-7788990 Mr.Qi Han for registration.Please reply back as soon as possible.Bye for now!

Regards,

Rou Xuan

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Dear Darren,

Hi! How are you? I saw a notice about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to join me. The course will start on 1 August 2025, from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m., and it will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool.

The fee is only RM100 for four lessons, which is affordable and reasonable. The course is suitable for beginners and will be taught by Mr. Qi Han.

If you are interested, please contact 012-7788990 for registration. Please reply as soon as possible. Bye for now!

Regards,
Rou Xuan

Dear Darren,

How are you? Our school is planning a trip to the science museum soon.It will be on Wednesday, at kuala lumpur. There will be so many interesting exhibits, like planets, robots, and chemistry experiments. I think it will be fun to explore and learn at the same time. I think you should join because love science.

Lets not miss the boat.Looking forward to your reply.

Best Regards,

ChinHongZe

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Hi sister,

Guess what? I came across a notice about a swimming course and I would like to invite you to join it with me.

It will be on every Sunday from 10:00 AM to 11:30 AM, at Bukit Indah Public pool and it starts on 1 august 2025. We need to pay RM100 for four lessons. It is very suitable for beginners because we will be taught by a certified coach, Mr Qi Han. If you want to join , don't hesitate to contact 012-7788990 for registration.

Let's not miss this golden opportunity. Looking forward to your reply.

Best regards.

ChinHongZe

I hope you are doing very great! Today I noticed an advertisement in our school hall, it is about a trip to science museum. It will be held on 22 October, and this trip will be start at Tech Penang Museum. I'm sure that we will see some special robot or some kind of thing that we can see our inside body. I would like to go with you because we can share our experience with each other and we can also learn about STEM, STEM means science, technology, engineering and math. Come and join me! Looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

Lucious

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Dear Darren,

I hope you are doing great! Today, I noticed an advertisement in our school hall about a trip to a science museum. It will be held on 22 October.

I’m excited to see some amazing robots and even an exhibit that shows how the human body works.I would love to go with you so we can share our experiences and learn about Science.

Come and join me! I’m looking forward to your reply.

Regards,
Lucious