https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi Rate each sample based on the Written Communication Rubric en-us 2018-08-16 14:24:43 UTC 2025-11-26 17:09:56 UTC hello@padlet.com macervan https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273488788 Sample 1:

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]]> 2018-08-16 14:27:01 UTC https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273488788 emende1223 https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489568 Sample 1:It is emerging emerging because its confusing  and hard to read. 
Sample 2: It is developing because the intro is good but grammar is confusing.
sample 3: It is Advanced because the intro its really good also the body paragraphs goes with the intro grammar is good.]]> 2018-08-16 14:29:32 UTC https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489568 https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489577 Sample 1:  Emerging because the controlling idea is not clear, grammar errors, and does not explain the controlling idea.
Sample 2: Developing because it doesn't use transitions and the controlling idea is clear around the article.
Sample 3: Advance because everything is clear and the controlling idea is around the story and also is clear ]]> 2018-08-16 14:29:34 UTC https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489577 https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489578 Sample 1: Emerging because main idea is unclear and is not evident through the writing.

Sample 2:   Proficient because  the writing is organized and main idea is mostly clear but has some grammar errors.

Sample 3: Advanced main idea is clear, it has some minus errors and has many transitions

]]> 2018-08-16 14:29:34 UTC https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489578 https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489580 Lauren Olene 
Valeria
Clarissa
Sample 1: This is emerging because it has no controlling idea, repeating itself, and no conclusion.

sample 2: Its Developing because it doesn't have transition words and there is misspelling words.

sample 3: Its proficient because it explains the topic and doesn't use correct spelling.]]> 2018-08-16 14:29:34 UTC https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489580 https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489596 Sample 1:  It is emerging because the controlling idea is there but its repeating too much.
Sample 2 : It is developing but there is no transitions and there is misspellings.
Sample 3: It is proficient because the thesis is clear. It doesn't repeat and it sites textual evidence with some errors.]]> 2018-08-16 14:29:37 UTC https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489596 https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489631 Sample 1: This is emerging because there a lot of grammar mistakes, repetition, no controlling idea, and the ideas are unclear.  
Sample 2: This is developing because it has many forms of repetition, there were not many ideas presented.    
Sample 3: This is proficient some ideas were presented, controlling was mostly presented, and had acceptable grammar.  ]]> 2018-08-16 14:29:41 UTC https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489631 https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489664 Alan Garcia 
Elijah Alajmi
Sample 1: This is emerging because it doesn't have proper writing/ language

sample 2: This is developing because it almost has a main idea but the grammar  is mostly good but has some errors that distract us from understanding it. 



]]> 2018-08-16 14:29:46 UTC https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489664 https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489702 Sample 1: This is emerging because it's unclear he/she didn't specifically explain his/her topic
Sample 2: This proficient because the conclusion didn't go with the introduction 
Sample 3: this is proficient because  it provides partial explanation.

]]> 2018-08-16 14:29:53 UTC https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489702 https://padlet.com/macervan/7w6mdrtf98mi/wish/273489822 Sample 1: this is emerging because the controlling idea is unclear and not evident. Ideas are underdeveloped, evidence is disorganized. language, style, and tone are inappropriate. 

sample 2: its developing because the controlling idea is somewhat developed. language, tone, and style are somewhat appropriate. ideas are not well organized. 

sample 3: this is proficient because controlling idea is present but is not connected throughout the paper. ideas and evidence are present and organized but off topic.  language, tone, and style are mostly organized. 
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