https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v en-us 2016-11-15 12:31:33 UTC 2016-11-15 19:05:07 UTC hello@padlet.com kernsli https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137681836 Score: 
Lacking an opening and closing, Very little text evidence, Rubric Specific Comment....]]> 2016-11-15 12:34:14 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137681836 220832 https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137856774 I gave this essay a 4 because this person had a great opening, closing and transitions.]]> 2016-11-15 18:37:32 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137856774 1217311 https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137856836 The student´s response needs more textual evidence and an attention grabber to response. :) ]]> 2016-11-15 18:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137856836 927770 https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137857622 Score 0 
The reason why I gave it a zero is because there were a lot of mistakes with the words like the person spelling the words wrong, not looking back in the story ]]> 2016-11-15 18:39:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137857622 924285 https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137857796







]]> 2016-11-15 18:39:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137857796 221516 https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137858305 score number 3 because it had an okay opening and closing
and have a few details and   full of text evidence.






]]> 2016-11-15 18:41:03 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137858305 926637 https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137858376 In essay number 5, he/she received a 2. The reason why he/she received a 2 is because, they did not have enough information, and they did not have an "Attention Grabber."]]> 2016-11-15 18:41:15 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137858376 321821 https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137858718 Score: 3
This student responses deserves a 3. This responses includes a strong ending, great textual evidence, and the compositional is effective. It was lacking a opening but it has a strong ending. And it has one whole paragraph. This response needed three paragraphs in total. It has amd full command of the conventions of standard English at an appropriate level of complexity. It had minor errors but the meaning is very clear. ]]> 2016-11-15 18:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137858718 321821 https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137862441 Score: 2
This responses is a development of the claim or topic that is somewhat appropriate to the task by using some reasoning and text-based evidence. It demonstrates some coherence, making the writer's progression. It somewhat has a general has a opening and closing. There may be errors in mechanics, grammar, but the meaning is generally clear. ]]> 2016-11-15 18:49:17 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137862441 927770 https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137864495 Score:5
The reason why i picked a one was because they spelled something wrong and only had one wrong ]]> 2016-11-15 18:53:49 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137864495 220832 https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137864739 The student had a lot of mistakes and did not even have a paragraph. Essay did not make sense and there were a lot of punctuation mistakes. ]]> 2016-11-15 18:54:22 UTC https://padlet.com/kernsli/7vxkn3hwec0v/wish/137864739