You can rate each writing with 1-5 stars.

Remember, you can't score a 3 on GMAS without an Intro or Conclusion in your writing!!!!

Did you know that 20% of mammals are bats? I have five facts about bats that will make you go wow. Here are my facts bats are the only mammal that can fly, bats are a nocturnal animal, they are the second largest order of mammals, some of the species of bats are fruit bats, and micro-bats mostly use echolocation. I hope you learned a lot about bats.

_{Tyler, you rocked writing an introduction.}

_{Next, I want you to always read for editing to ensure subject verb agreement. Also make sure its at least 4 sentences or more.}

_{Antoine great use of research skills. Great job writing an intro. Next, remember to add commas for a series of things. Go back and correct.}

There are a lot of different kinds of bats. There are big bats, and small bats. did you know that big eared bats are very large bats.

_{Great effort to write an introduction Owen.}

_{Check your last sentence and see what you can edit.}

Did you know that bat are mammal an some also eat insect. they help us by eating bugs. Do you know that bats sleep during the day and active at night

_{Great effort Chaies. Go back and read to make sure it has subject-verb agreement. Add at least one more big idea.}

_{Trent I am impressed with your knowledge of writing an introduction.}

_{Next, write an essay about JuJu.}

_{Girls you rocked writing an introduction.}

_{Next, reread and see what you can edit.}

_{Great job Team 2. Your introduction makes me want to read more.}

_{Next, check for capital letters and ending marks.}

Did you know that some sea creatures use features to survive? Some use features to help them find food. Some use features to help them stay safe. For example, the pistol shrimp uses noise as loud as a rocket ship to stun its prey.

_{Great job writing an introduction.}

_{Next, we will analyze a prompt.}

_{Great job writing an introduction.}

_{I can see that your team work together to complete the task.}

_{Next, reread the introduction and see where you can make changes. (What is the North Pacific?)}

Have you ever wondered what helps sea creatures survive? Sea creatures have unique features for example the octopus's uses its feathers to fund. Some sea creatures like the pistol shrimp use noise to stun their prey.

_{WOW!!! What great team work in creating a great introduction.}

_{Next, start your own introduction.}

Did you know that architects design the buildings that you live in? Architects must use materials that are strong and resist decay. Architects (He or She) draw up plans for new buildings. Sometimes, architects look for ways to use natural materials like wood. At the end, architects have many different styles to design buildings that you live in.

_{Nyla I am so impressed with your hard work. You always go above and beyond to ensure all task are presented at top level.}

_{I am hooked on Nyla's work : )}

_{WOW!!! What a way to catch the reader.}

_{Very knowledgeable of writing introductions.}

_{Great hook Isaiah !!!}

_{I am hooked.}

_{Great job writing a hook.}

_{Aaliyah I am hook and want to read more. Great job writing a hook.}

Did you know that surveyors measure land and buildings. Surveyors help decide which new buildings can be made. Surveyors must work very precise

_{Hailey you are rocking showing your knowledge of writing a hook. keep up the great work.}

Did you know surveyors can use information to be sure they build new buildings the right way? Surveyors can also travel to areas that is concerned. The surveyor can then use survey equipment to note down distances. Using computers, a map of the whole area can be made. Survey also helps decide which building should be made.

_{You rocked creating a hook that keeps the reader engaged.}

_{Next, start your essay}

Do you know what a surveyor is a surveyor works must be very precise that helps to make sure buildings are safe and properly located. Surveyors' information also helps decide which new buildings can be made.

Did you know that surveyors measure land and buildings. surveyors' information also helps decide which new buildings can be made. Surveyors must work very precise surveyors help to make sure buildings are safely.

Have you ever wondered how Air, water, and land help us?

Topic

Land, water, and air are a big part of what keeps us alive

Big Ideas

We drink water, we breath air, we live on land. That means air water and land can keep us alive for a long time

Main Topic-Air water and land is a big part of what keeps us alive

Big idea. Air keeps us alive. We drink water and we walk on land. That means that air water and land can keep us alive for a long time.

_{Antoine you rocked planning an informational introduction.}

_{Next, start your essay.}

Have you wondered how water land and air can help humans?

Topic

Land, water, and air are a big part of what keeps us alive.

Big ideas We drink water. We breath in air. We walk on land. That means water, land, and air keep us alive

_{You rocked planning an expository introduction.}

_{Next, write your essay.}

Main topic: Air, water, and land are a big part of what keeps us alive

Big idea: we drink water, air we breathe air, we walk on land. That means air, water, and land keep us alive

_{Great job planning your introduction.}

_{Next, write your introduction.}

_{Isaiah, check your hook and make sure you summarized from the source in your own words. Should there be a conclusion in the hook?}

_{Great job Cali sharing your knowledge of how to write an eye catching hook.}

_{Tyler please reread and republish.}

Have you ever wondered how air, water, and land can help us. Air, water and land are key factors of our lives. We drink water, we breathe air, and we walk on land. And water, air, and land keep us alive

_{You rocked sharing your knowledge of writing effective conclusions.}

_{Next, write your essay.}

Have you ever wondered how air, water, and land can help us? Air water and land is a big part of what keeps us alive. Air keeps us alive. We drink water and we walk on land. so that means air, water, and land can keep us alive for a long time.

You rocked effective conclusions.

Has anyone wondered how air, land, and water help us survive? Air, land, and water are the three most important nonliving resources to survive. If we don't those three recourses then earth wouldn't be created because without land we wouldn't be alive on earth

_{Knight you are off to a great start.}

_{Next, reread to see where you can make corrections.}

Setting goals is a crucial for personal and professional success because it provides direction, focus and motivation, ultimately leading to increased achievement and a greater sense of accomplishment.

Having goals fuels your motivation and helps you stay persistent even when faced with challenges.

In conclusion setting goals are important after all.

_{Great job Antoine. I can see that you use what you learned to write your introduction.}

_{Next steps: Working on adding more to your conclusion based off our lesson.}

Goals can help you by saving money. Lets say you want to save up for a ps5. That can be your goal!

Goals can also help you with calming down. According to Google goals can help you stay calm, focused, and motivation. So some people might want to set a goal.

Setting goals are a good way you can save or calm down. So now you know why setting goals are important.

Goals can be a big factor of your life. I'm going to tell you why it is a big factor.

Reason one is setting goals. The important of setting goals is chasing goals. If you set a goal, then you won't stop chasing your goal. My last reason is it is crucial According to google.com it says " provides direction, motivation, and a sense of purpose, leading to improved academic performance, and better time management.

That is why goal setting is a big factor of your life or a young child's life.

Have you ever thought about how setting goals is important? Setting goals are something that is really important to do. It is amazing to think about the goals we set and how we can reach them.

According to google.com goal setting is very important because it provides focus, direction, motivation, and much more. Direction gives you clarity, measurement helps to track your progress, and confidence builds up to use it in any moment.

Goal setting is something we all need to do more. Measurement, direction, and focus all lead up to goal setting.

_{Cali, I am so impressed with your writing. You are improving each time you do an essay. I am excited about your next submission.}

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In conclusion surveyors help builders very much. If builders didn't have surveyor's buildings would be out of place and builders would make buildings height and land would be wrong.