https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj Post your name and your comma sentences under the coordinating comma rule en-us 2019-01-14 13:17:58 UTC 2019-05-09 12:11:05 UTC hello@padlet.com cameron_mcneil https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416507 “Embarrassed, I fumbled off my flash within the stained train seats,”]]> 2019-05-09 12:01:52 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416507 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416606 “Yet as the weeks wore on, it became harder to see fascination as a flattery.” ]]> 2019-05-09 12:02:19 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416606 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416614 “When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped” (201). ]]> 2019-05-09 12:02:21 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416614 veronica_henderson https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416615 “Thrust into a city where chaos prevails,”]]> 2019-05-09 12:02:21 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416615 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416617 “When Luke and I landed in India.”]]> 2019-05-09 12:02:22 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416617 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416630 “We read books, rolled dice, and looked out at rice fields and rivers.” This is an intro phrase for commas because she is explaining and moving into talking about the people observing them in their activities on the train
Jacob]]> 2019-05-09 12:02:25 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416630 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416648 “When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped”]]> 2019-05-09 12:02:31 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416648 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416668 “That night, when the train was dark, the woman’s eyes smiled up at me before she faded off to sleep.”]]> 2019-05-09 12:02:38 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416668 cameron_mcneil https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416672 “In the city of the dead...”]]> 2019-05-09 12:02:38 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416672 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416695 Embarrassed, I fumbled off my flash from within the stained train sheets, capturing the woman to bring home to a tiny box on my shelf.]]> 2019-05-09 12:02:43 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416695 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416737 “I knew, of course, that my white skin and light features were responsible for the attention, but some part of me still took pleasure from being stared at on trains and photographed in city gardens” (202). 

]]> 2019-05-09 12:02:50 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416737 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416757 “The women was plump and wrapped in a saffron sari, the man thin and clothed in a starched white shirt”.]]> 2019-05-09 12:02:53 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416757 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416764 “The woman was plump and wrapped in a saffron sari,” this one is an appositive comma because it describes the attire of the woman
Jacob]]> 2019-05-09 12:02:55 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416764 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416767 “Not a single Indian requested a photograph, and not one time did I snap my own lens.” ]]> 2019-05-09 12:02:56 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416767 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416790 “Luke climbed down off his berth, past the thin aged man and his saffron wife, wandering out between the cars to see the jungle fade to palms.”]]> 2019-05-09 12:03:01 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416790 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416846 “If it made them happy, after all, why not play along?”]]> 2019-05-09 12:03:10 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416846 veronica_henderson https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416880 “They agreed with the emotion, they saw what I meant.”]]> 2019-05-09 12:03:16 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416880 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416895 “I offered that maybe, sometimes, it really wasn’t so bad. Yes, they responded, nodding and thinking” (203). 

]]> 2019-05-09 12:03:20 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416895 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416899 That night, when the train was dark, the woman’s eyes smiled up at me before she faded off to sleep.]]> 2019-05-09 12:03:20 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416899 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416958 Embarrassed, I fumbled off my flashfr om  within the the stained train sheets]]> 2019-05-09 12:03:33 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416958 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416983 “The woman was plump and wrapped in saffron sari, the man thin and clothed in a starched white shirt.”

]]> 2019-05-09 12:03:38 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358416983 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417000 “The dying come to die in the holy Ganges River, burning in its banks and escaping reincarnation in its waters.”]]> 2019-05-09 12:03:42 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417000 veronica_henderson https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417078 “I offered that, sometimes, it really wasn’t so bad.”]]> 2019-05-09 12:04:03 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417078 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417101 When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped.]]> 2019-05-09 12:04:07 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417101 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417287 “When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped”.]]> 2019-05-09 12:04:39 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417287 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417323 “‘One photo, one photo,’” they’d coo from the streets and stands: ‘one photo, please, miss, one photo”
Jacob]]> 2019-05-09 12:04:47 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417323 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417422 “I knew, of course, that my white skin and light features were responsible for the attention...”]]> 2019-05-09 12:05:05 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417422 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417431 That night, when the train was dark ,the women’s eyes smiled up at  me before she faded off to sleep]]> 2019-05-09 12:05:06 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417431 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417439 When Luke and I landed in India, we discovered our celebrity before our passports were stamped. 

]]> 2019-05-09 12:05:07 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417439 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417487 The dying come to die in the holy Ganges River, burning on its banks and escaping reincarnation in its waters.]]> 2019-05-09 12:05:17 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417487 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417505 “In the Buddhist town of Dharamsala,...”]]> 2019-05-09 12:05:18 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417505 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417599 If it made them happy, after all, why not play along?]]> 2019-05-09 12:05:37 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417599 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417700 “The woman was plump and wrapped in a saffron sari, and the man thin and clothed in a starched white shirt.”]]> 2019-05-09 12:05:58 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417700 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417701 “If it made them happy, after all, why not play along?”]]> 2019-05-09 12:05:58 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358417701 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358418182 The woman was plump and wrapped in saffron sari, the man thin and clothed in a starched white shirt. ]]> 2019-05-09 12:07:23 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358418182 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358418220 “The woman was plump and wrapped in a saffron sari, the man thin and clothed in a starched white shirt.”]]> 2019-05-09 12:07:28 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/7sql9i42yshj/wish/358418220