https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2 Upload your JPEG in a single file row. en-us 2018-02-05 16:00:28 UTC 2023-07-14 03:59:26 UTC hello@padlet.com elizabeth_palmer1 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228184713 Upload the JPEG of your work in progress by clicking the Pink Plus Sign in the lower right hand corner. 

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When critique is over- try to make at least three improvements to your work! ]]> 2018-02-05 16:02:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228184713 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228753408 I need to finish boarding up the windows]]> 2018-02-06 17:57:10 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228753408 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228754183

]]> 2018-02-06 17:58:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228754183 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228754368 2018-02-06 17:58:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228754368 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228754405 2018-02-06 17:58:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228754405 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228754713 2018-02-06 17:59:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228754713 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228754835 2018-02-06 17:59:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228754835 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755116 2018-02-06 18:00:04 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755116 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755153 2018-02-06 18:00:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755153 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755166 2018-02-06 18:00:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755166 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755279 2018-02-06 18:00:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755279 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755354 2018-02-06 18:00:29 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755354 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755445 2018-02-06 18:00:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755445 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755943 2018-02-06 18:01:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228755943 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228756022 2018-02-06 18:01:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228756022 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228756079 2018-02-06 18:01:41 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228756079 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228756502 2018-02-06 18:02:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228756502 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228756572 2018-02-06 18:02:28 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228756572 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228757775 2018-02-06 18:04:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228757775 alg211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228758396 2018-02-06 18:05:13 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228758396 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228760728 I like the colors and clouds but i don't know what is on that guys back-jm]]> 2018-02-06 18:08:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228760728 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228761620 I like the airplane and the trees around the school, you should fit the grass better to the edge of the school-jm]]> 2018-02-06 18:09:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228761620 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762345 The sign is a good start but I would make it a little more hollywood. Maybe make add bright red and add lights and such -JH]]> 2018-02-06 18:10:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762345 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762391 I like how the black and white theme really helps clear what the image is on. One way to improve the picture is to make the runner also black and white so your eyes immediately draw towards the clown. ZK]]> 2018-02-06 18:10:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762391 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762446 I think the way the image is fading is nice touch, but you might want to consider adding a couple different elements
JS]]> 2018-02-06 18:10:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762446 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762522 I like the sky its a cool mixture, you could add more to areas where there isn't much- RM]]> 2018-02-06 18:11:05 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762522 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762607 I like the idea and the depiction of "unwelcoming." 
You can improve on two things really, the boarded up windows near the columns because the boards overlap the columns. And the person in the middle. Maybe make their backpack less intense. But maybe you were in the middle of editing it.  Or maybe it's done to stand out?  Either way, really good job

EC]]> 2018-02-06 18:11:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762607 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762612 I like the trees in the back and how the color theme is purple, but i also think you need to make the robot smaller and make brighten it-jm]]> 2018-02-06 18:11:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762612 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762634 The fish is really cool, you should see how it looks in the water too make it more realistic, you could also try to find something to make the school look rundown like its been underwater for a long time- jm]]> 2018-02-06 18:11:15 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762634 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762771 2018-02-06 18:11:29 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762771 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762790 The background was very seamlessly implemented into the picture. ]]> 2018-02-06 18:11:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762790 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762797 I like there is someone reacting to the isopods. I would try to get rid of the logo on the image of the man to make the image clearer- EA]]> 2018-02-06 18:11:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762797 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762816 I really like how you made the background darker colors, and I think you should continue that theme throughout the images that you added. Also, to improve your visual hierarchy, maybe make the runner a little smaller. -AG]]> 2018-02-06 18:11:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762816 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762826 you should resize the images and make them all black and white- EA

]]> 2018-02-06 18:11:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762826 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762887 I like how the brightness was turned down to give the illusion of the scene being darker. The tornado, however, could be altered a little to make it look more like a tornado and not a grey sock. The sharks are nice as well as the lightening. EZ]]> 2018-02-06 18:11:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762887 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762909 I really like how creative and unique your design is. It is very interesting to look at. However, one thing that I think you could change is to have things not all be in the corners to hep the visual hierarchy. JM]]> 2018-02-06 18:11:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762909 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762930 The background in this  is really cool. I think that the tornado colors could be altered a little so that way it matches the sky more. NC]]> 2018-02-06 18:11:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762930 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762950 I like the background. it is really interesting. you could add some discoloration to the school to make it look like its actually in space. 
JM]]> 2018-02-06 18:11:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228762950 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228763618 I really like the theme of this and the way you changed the color of the tree to fit the season. I think that around the tree could be more clear and a different tool could be used to blend the tree against the school. Also, I think that you should add snow to the ground to help the theme. EHW]]> 2018-02-06 18:12:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228763618 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228763721 i like the idea but i think the amount of effects you have is excessive-EA

]]> 2018-02-06 18:12:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228763721 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228763762 2018-02-06 18:12:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228763762 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228763911 I like the background, and what you did with the ground in front of the school. You could consider adding a greenish blue tint to the school to make it look underwater
JS]]> 2018-02-06 18:13:13 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228763911 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764017 2018-02-06 18:13:24 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764017 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764078 I like the originality of this idea, you should add more people and more of the blue things-jm ]]> 2018-02-06 18:13:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764078 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764096 The background blends in really well and looks cool. I think that you could add more things in the foreground to make it more interesting. JM]]> 2018-02-06 18:13:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764096 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764119 2018-02-06 18:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764119 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764120 I like what you did with the background and how the color choices really bring out that feeling. I think you should add more things in front of the school to make the picture even better. ZK ]]> 2018-02-06 18:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764120 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764133 I like the background; it is implemented very well into the picture. I think it would look good to include more aspects of 'Hollywood' to tie the image all together -EA]]> 2018-02-06 18:13:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764133 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764170 The idea for this is really cool. I like the background. Maybe change the colors balance of either the background or the foreground so that way they match. NC]]> 2018-02-06 18:13:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764170 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764178 The background was seamlessly put into the picture. The tree is difficult to work with but try to take away the old sky more. AH]]> 2018-02-06 18:13:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764178 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764206 2018-02-06 18:13:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764206 alg211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764365 I like the idea of the school being unwelcoming, but maybe it would be good to add some variance to the boarded up windows and more people in the foreground. ML]]> 2018-02-06 18:13:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764365 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764452 I like How your buildings are very well trimmed and edited. However play around with the two building because they make not be perfectly parallel to each other. I would also play around with the brightness of your buildings because they look brighter than the school. Other than that great job! -PM]]> 2018-02-06 18:14:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764452 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764516 Try to make the sea grass blend in better with the regular grass. Also, your hook is very messy so clean that up. I like the reflection you put on the ocean floor. Make the hook brighter after you clean it up. MOC.]]> 2018-02-06 18:14:08 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764516 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764753 The idea of attacking ispods is cool so maybe you should add more of them but smaller, to show that there's a lot of them and they're taking over the school. Also I think it would be good to make the frightened person a bit smaller as it acts as the main focus since he's really large. ML
                       ]]> 2018-02-06 18:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764753 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764760 I know this is a work-in-progress so a suggestion is to add some of the buildings from moscow that make it moscow. The background sky and clouds are very well done. EZ]]> 2018-02-06 18:14:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764760 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764827 2018-02-06 18:14:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764827 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764856 i like the idea. Maybe take away some of the purple tint and make it more light blue-ish cause thats more what i think about when i think of the cold. not purple. 
JM]]> 2018-02-06 18:14:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764856 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764911 I really like how the galaxy is green because I feel like its very hip to have galaxy themed things... so the green was a nice change.
To improve maybe make NHS and the grass greener
EC]]> 2018-02-06 18:14:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764911 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764932 I really like how the colors are very green. Maybe darken the water at the front to a brownish color to make it look like a swamp. -AG]]> 2018-02-06 18:14:47 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764932 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764985 I like the idea and the name unwelcoming and how its based around the one person but I think you should make the guy stand out more than the thing on his back-jm ]]> 2018-02-06 18:14:52 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228764985 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765061 I like the idea, but i think there is much more potential with this idea, possibly add effects to the characters or make the characters more realistic-EA ]]> 2018-02-06 18:15:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765061 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765079 I really like the lake and background for this. I think you should definitely do something to the road and sidewalk to make it look more like the jungle. NC]]> 2018-02-06 18:15:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765079 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765244 I like the idea of the project, and the way you have the spinning schools, but you could add more of the schools, and there is a little bit of white space on the right that drew my eye
JS]]> 2018-02-06 18:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765244 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765262 I like the bright color scheme. It looks very nice and has a happy mood to it.  I would recommend adding some animals or other features to make it look interesting in areas that aren't just the background. JM]]> 2018-02-06 18:15:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765262 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765361 2018-02-06 18:15:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765361 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765369 I really like the background because the sky, tree and grass all fit into the same color scheme. Maybe add different planets in the sky so it feels like a real galaxy -EA]]> 2018-02-06 18:15:27 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765369 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765471 The alien guy is funny. Choose a different spaceship picture. AH]]> 2018-02-06 18:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765471 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765675 2018-02-06 18:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765675 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765760 The background is awesome and I really like how the whole image is darkened. The tornado does not look like it flows with the image so maybe try to fix the edges to make it look more 3-D. -AG]]> 2018-02-06 18:16:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765760 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765897 2018-02-06 18:16:14 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765897 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765933 i think this is a really a funny idea. Maybe make the runner smaller. Or maybe find a different runner because i'm not sure how well she fits into the scene
EC]]> 2018-02-06 18:16:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228765933 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766185 The background was very well done. My eyes go directly to the orange which I'm not sure is a bad thing but it could be, depending on what you are planning on doing after. EZ]]> 2018-02-06 18:16:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766185 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766207 I like how you changed the colors of the original picture. I think if you changed the color balance of the alien it would pop out more. NC]]> 2018-02-06 18:16:41 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766207 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766233 I like the airplane and the trees in the back but you could make the grass look more realistic-RM]]> 2018-02-06 18:16:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766233 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766300 Creative, I like the bushes but place the fish hook into a spot where it will more seamlessly goes with the school. AH]]> 2018-02-06 18:16:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766300 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766353 I like the hollywood background. You could add some cameras or other equipment like that to make it look like its on the set. 

JM]]> 2018-02-06 18:16:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766353 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766366 I like how theres a green color scheme and how you cut the galaxy into the back so well. Also you should ad some more things to stand out-jm]]> 2018-02-06 18:16:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766366 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766465 2018-02-06 18:17:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766465 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766519 i like the color scheme but i think that you should maybe make things contrast more because i could not see the alien until somebody pointed it out, also maybe crop the spaceship image more. -EA]]> 2018-02-06 18:17:05 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766519 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766650 I really like your idea and think the color scheme looks good. However I think that there is only emphasis on the beam coming down from the alien ship, you should add something or make something brighter so that something else can stand out as important in the visual hierarchy. JM]]> 2018-02-06 18:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766650 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766669 The hollywood sign is really cool, you should try to put in some movie set kind of things to make it look like a movie is being shot there- jm ]]> 2018-02-06 18:17:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766669 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766679 I really like the theme of the picture and I like how you made the color of the background a darker color for the darker tone. You should try and make that one shark that is kind of bright, darker because I don't think that is where you want the eye going to first. ZK]]> 2018-02-06 18:17:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766679 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766774 I like the way you blended the school into the ocean, but there needs to be more coral or fish or something to spice up the image
JS]]> 2018-02-06 18:17:27 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766774 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766788 I like the image that is casted over the school. I would suggest adding more images to tie the picture into your theme. EHW]]> 2018-02-06 18:17:28 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228766788 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767050 I like the background a lot. The buildings blend in seamlessly. I think you could make the grass and trees brighter so they match the brightness in the background. NC]]> 2018-02-06 18:17:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767050 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767106 I really like the photo filter on top of the picture. I think you could make the fish hook more prominent so it is clear what it is -EA]]> 2018-02-06 18:17:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767106 alg211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767163 I like the sand in the foreground but maybe you should add more detail to the background with water in the school's window and maybe have some fish inside aswell!
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]]> 2018-02-06 18:17:53 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767163 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767424 2018-02-06 18:18:14 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767424 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767440 I like the tree and the sky but maybe you could find ground with more snow- RM]]> 2018-02-06 18:18:15 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767440 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767456 I think its really cool how to made the whole school green. You can definitely see that NHS is in fact being invaded by aliens. I like how the space ship is the first thing you see the piece. Keep adding more images, but great job. - PM]]> 2018-02-06 18:18:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767456 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767508 Clean up the back soldier, also make the sky darker to give it a scary sense. Definitely add more to it. This topic can have things like a water place with a war boat, or a helicopter on top shooting, or a caution sign. MOC]]> 2018-02-06 18:18:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767508 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767706 I think that needham high actually does look like a stereo typical movie scene high school. SO i think the idea is believable. 
TO improve.. maybe make the sky less blue. It seems to bright. Or make needham high more vibrant
EC]]> 2018-02-06 18:18:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767706 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767730 I like the idea of a jungle and all the trees in the back but I think you should make the plane a little smaller so it wont take away from the jungle theme-jm ]]> 2018-02-06 18:18:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767730 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767736 I think this is a good start, but I think there should be signs of a battle, and the tank should be bigger to improve visual hierarchy
JS]]> 2018-02-06 18:18:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767736 alg211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767779 I love the idea of it being cold with snow on the ground but maybe you can express that further with snow on the rooftop or some other signs of cold weather, like a light blue icy filter or frozen windows!

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]]> 2018-02-06 18:18:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767779 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767905 I really like the theme and I believe that there is a lot you can do to make this a really good photo. I think you need to start adding more things into the photo to make it more realistic. ZK]]> 2018-02-06 18:19:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767905 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767956 I like the sand on the ground. I suggest you fade the color of the school because right now it looks to bright to be underwater. 
JM

]]> 2018-02-06 18:19:07 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228767956 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768030 I like the idea and the tank that you put in,. However I think that the tank doesn't blend in very well with the rest of the picture. JM]]> 2018-02-06 18:19:15 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768030 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768039 2018-02-06 18:19:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768039 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768075 Cool background, the school's color really helps the theme. More seamlessly implement the tree into the picture. AH]]> 2018-02-06 18:19:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768075 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768152 I like the image you chose to represent your theme but I would suggest adding a background image to help the school look like it is really in a war zone. You could also add people fighting to make it more realistic. EHW]]> 2018-02-06 18:19:27 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768152 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768275 I like the colors of the image a lot! Maybe try to figure out a way to make it look like the water is surrounding the school rather than it being in front of the school. AG ]]> 2018-02-06 18:19:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768275 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768488 I really like this jungle scene. I like that NHS looks kind of unrealistic. The plane is kinda of large, so I would make it smaller. Maybe add another object on the grass too- EA]]> 2018-02-06 18:20:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768488 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768661 2018-02-06 18:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768661 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768675 The trees in the background were very well done. The water in front of the school was also another good touch. What you did the blend the tropical trees in the back with the tree in the front was good. EZ]]> 2018-02-06 18:20:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768675 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768691 I like the idea of zombies and the general idea of the images, but you could make the images more realistic and possibly add some gravestones
JS]]> 2018-02-06 18:20:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768691 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768749 2018-02-06 18:20:24 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768749 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768882 I really like the idea for this and the background. I think you could change the color balance of the high school to be a little brighter like the background. NC]]> 2018-02-06 18:20:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228768882 alg211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769030 I love the idea of a winter wonderland and it is a visible theme in this picture but you can further express the theme with snow on the  grass and maybe icycles hanging from the building. ML

]]> 2018-02-06 18:20:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769030 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769098 great idea, but maybe don't blur the wheels into the ground- EA]]> 2018-02-06 18:20:58 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769098 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769115 I really like the color choices and I enjoy the fading so it puts a heavenly touch on it. I think that the color is going to take away from something you put in front of the school. ZK]]> 2018-02-06 18:20:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769115 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769161 I like how you included your trees into the sand. also like how the fish is subtly in the picture without seeming edited. One thing that you may need to work some more on is the editing of your tree because with your blue background the white in between the leaves shows a lot. Other than that great job! -PM ]]> 2018-02-06 18:21:04 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769161 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769430 I really like the idea and think that the color looks really cool. The one thing I would recommend s to clean up that white streak at the top of the hook. JM]]> 2018-02-06 18:21:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769430 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769494 I love your theme! The water looks great! Maybe try to make the hook look like it is stuck on the school and is not bigger than the school to improve your visual hierarchy. AG]]> 2018-02-06 18:21:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769494 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769525 I like the spaceship that is right in the front of the picture and I think you could take some of the words in the image to make the image more realistic. EHW]]> 2018-02-06 18:21:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769525 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769686 I like the theme of the picture but the guy looks too fake. you should move him so we can see his legs. that might help it look more realistic. 
JM]]> 2018-02-06 18:21:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769686 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769726 The green tint was a good touch and the alien and its spaceship was blended into the scene every well. The only suggestion I have to the erase more of the green part around the tractor beam of the spaceship. EZ]]> 2018-02-06 18:22:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769726 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769791 I like the title and it really is an eye catcher. 
To improve, I think you could make it more explicit whether you are under water or in the sky. I think you mean that it's supposed to be underwater because of the title, but it looks like the sky.
EC]]> 2018-02-06 18:22:07 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228769791 alg211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228770339 I love the idea of NHS being underwater and being caught by a fisherman and you can further express that by adding boats that are in the sky (on the water) and maybe having the hook go through the school and out a different side to show it being "caught"

]]> 2018-02-06 18:22:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228770339 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228770739 I really like the purple hue on the school and the trees. I would ry to erase more of the robot so it can be implemented more easily into the picture- EA]]> 2018-02-06 18:23:25 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228770739 cks211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228770831 2018-02-06 18:23:33 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228770831 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228770940 I like your theme a lot! However, it is a bit confusing to look at. I would recommend losing some of the effects so the onlooker can know exactly what your theme is. -AG]]> 2018-02-06 18:23:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228770940 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228771393 I like how you changed the color of the school to fit your theme. I would suggest adding more images about the topic and making images that you do not want people to focus on smaller. Since you changed the color of the school, try to make other images fit in with the color scheme. EHW]]> 2018-02-06 18:24:21 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228771393 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228771591 I think that you did a really good job making NHS look like its legit in the snow. 
One thing you could improve though is the integration of the snow on the lawn
EC]]> 2018-02-06 18:24:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228771591 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228771681 JM]]> 2018-02-06 18:24:53 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228771681 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228771927 The tank was brought into this design nicely. there just needs to be more detail in this whole picture. EZ]]> 2018-02-06 18:25:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228771927 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228771957 Definitely very different and abstract which I really like. I like how you used a lot of the tools in photo shop to create something new. The only thing I woulds say is keep adding little things like the cats and stuff. -PM]]> 2018-02-06 18:25:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228771957 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228772558 I think that this is really creative... I don't even know how to flip something upside down. Maybe take a little bit out of it because there's a lot going on
EC]]> 2018-02-06 18:26:04 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228772558 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228773331 I like the background that you chose. I think you could add many more images to represent what the city of Moscow looks like. Maybe change the ground in front of NHS to something more like a city. EHW]]> 2018-02-06 18:27:06 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228773331 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228773631 I really like how you know exactly what your theme is right away after looking at the picture. You are doing a great job incorporating a snowy theme. However, I would add more props to the lawn of NHS to make your pic even better!- PM ]]> 2018-02-06 18:27:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228773631 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228775011 I love the pictures you picked for your background. All the green and shrubbery shows that this is a jungle scene. I also really like the water that you incorporated on the lawn. One thing you could add is maybe some creatures in the water that could be found in a jungle. -PM]]> 2018-02-06 18:29:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/7sqad3figaj2/wish/228775011