Ielts writing paragraph by Kate Davies https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s Read the introduction from a response to the IELTS task in activity 9. "There is a great deal of difference between the amount that the wealthiest and the poorest workers earn in many countries nowadays. The question of whether this pay gap should be made smaller is therefore a frequent topic of discussion when people talk about the issue of equality in society." Then plan the next paragraph of the response. Use the features (1–5) listed below. A main idea An opposing view introduced with appropriate words, e.g. although, however An explanation of the main idea An example that illustrates the main idea A concluding sentence en-us 2022-02-09 15:42:45 UTC 2026-02-24 13:05:33 UTC hello@padlet.com katedavieseo https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040103521 The three of us agree that the gap should be narrow in order to have a more balanced society.

]]> 2022-02-10 12:29:27 UTC https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040103521 https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040113253 One one hand we see the developing countries with less oportunities and less facilities than the developed ones. On the other hand we see the purchase power of the rich that owns things extremely expensive which are considered a luxury.
And we consider that every one should have the minimum rights to live. For instance, drinkable water should be available to everyone.

]]> 2022-02-10 12:36:09 UTC https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040113253 and improve their quality of life https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040116310 2022-02-10 12:38:05 UTC https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040116310 furthermore, if we do not narrow the gap, the rich will have more absolute power to control the poor https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040118275 2022-02-10 12:39:21 UTC https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040118275 for example, social media owners could exploit the online platform users for their own interest https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040121936 2022-02-10 12:41:36 UTC https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040121936 https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040125508 This can be seen as the difference between high and low income jobs have become more evident with each day.]]> 2022-02-10 12:43:46 UTC https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040125508 In my opinion, most of job are necessary thus the difference between salaries should be smaller than they actually are. https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040129172 2022-02-10 12:45:51 UTC https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040129172 however for a few positions like ceo or presidents, they deserve high salary https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040130141 2022-02-10 12:46:29 UTC https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040130141 https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040130712 To some extent, the disparity between salaries should be reduced, but we insist that this must be done moderately rather than maintaining total equality of incomes. ]]> 2022-02-10 12:46:49 UTC https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040130712 However, some positions need people to do though studies and some involve high responsabilites. This might also have a value. https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040131090 2022-02-10 12:47:03 UTC https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040131090 https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040131836 Some people believe that it is reasonable to think that the more difficult the job is, the more money people should earn. For instance, workers with many responsibilities like attorneys and doctors should have high incomes compared to others. ]]> 2022-02-10 12:47:30 UTC https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040131836 For instance, doctors have more responsabilites than nurses, neverthless the former need the latter to work. https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040133487 2022-02-10 12:48:26 UTC https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040133487 For this reason, I believe the difference between their salaries shouldn't be important. https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040138732 2022-02-10 12:51:17 UTC https://padlet.com/katedavieseo/7qwvvj80i81a8z0s/wish/2040138732