Niella S. by Niella Sessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC 2025-10-23 11:59:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888442 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888442 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888443 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888443 30 Basic Human Rights nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888444 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888444 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888445 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888445 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888446 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888446 Rough Draft nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888448 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888448 Final Draft nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888449 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888449 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888450 The 3rd person is telling the story.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888450 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888451 It takes place in a village and a room full of prisoners. In my story what makes it unjust is that she wanted to be a archeologist, but they chose her to be a slave fighter, so the government can make money.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888451 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888453 my character name is Lana( which means peaceful). She has brown curly hair, brown eyes, and she wants to explore the world. She is kind, smart, pretty, and helpful to others and animals.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888453 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888454 She gets picked to fight her friend, Bella.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888454 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888455 She changes the world by making a plan to destroy the fights forever, so no one with ever fight again and she gets to change her and the world's lifes]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888455 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888456 First she was a shy little girl that had nothing, but then when she got older and experienced more things, she become stronger and more brave.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888456 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888457 Her escaping the prison room.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888457 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888458 Don't give up on your dreams]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888458 Due Dates nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888459 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888459 Prompt nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888460 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888460 Theo's Song nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888464 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888464 Rubric nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888465 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888465 Point of View nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888466 The point of view is the third person.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888466 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888467 In " Theo's Song ", the government chooses people's jobs even though they were unhappy.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888467 Characters nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888468 Theo, community, Authorities, Neema, and the Decider.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888468 Conflict nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888470 The Decider assigned Theo to be a blacksmith when he wants to be a song writer. The government gives people the job that don't want because people are easier to control when they are unhappy.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888470 Plot: Sequential nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888471 Event 1#: Theo was a newly apprenticed blacksmith in the smithy. The authorities removed him from the nursery pod where he spend his first 12 years by the nanny.
Event 2#:Theo went to go to a interview to meet the Decider and discus about his goal of being a song writer. Instead of song writing he had to be a blacksmith.
Event 3 #: He wanted to sing because he wanted to make people happy. 
Event 4 #: The Authorities hair him and told him not to sing ever again or he will be punished.
Event 5 # (Climax): He sang and wrote music, he was caught and punished, so Theo couldn't speak because he couldn't sing.
Event 6 #: Theo sang with his hammer by click instead  of singing.
Event 7 #: Neema helped Theo and the community by fight and arguing against the government.
Event 8 #(Resolution): The government gave up and let do what they wanted for their jobs]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888471 Theme nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888472 Do what you want to do, but don't let no one stop you.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888472 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888473 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. 
I can image my self in a unjust society by being in a village where a king is the government and the king want to choose jobs for other so he could make more power and money.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/215888473 At the last question and the second question, what is it asking us to do for the Narrative Techniques in Student Model "Theo's Song"? nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/216648029 2017-12-16 00:35:22 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/216648029 Plot Diagram Example nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/217023572 Use my plot diagram as an example of what I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:05:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/217023572 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map nasessoms https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/217023748 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:05:47 UTC https://padlet.com/nasessoms/7q6w8whiydqg/wish/217023748