Remake of Period 12, 2019: Your favorite annotation for "Is the Drive for Success Making Our Children Sick?" by Rebecca Willner https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka 1. Click to create a box on the page. 2. Click the top of your box and copy the textual evidence. 3. Click the body of the box and copy your analysis/interpretation. en-us 2019-10-08 12:52:52 UTC 2025-10-02 17:08:13 UTC hello@padlet.com “ ‘We never used to see that,” says Lawrence Rosen, a New Jersey pediatrician...” https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395223342 This is an expert testimony that indicates depression rates increase in students with added pressure.  This is a reliable source that all audience members can trust. This is also a personal observation that the author made. -Bailey, Jake, Cumer]]> 2019-10-08 18:06:03 UTC https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395223342 “...the pressure cooker is hurting, not helping, our kids’ prospects for success.” https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395231203 This metaphor makes it seem as if the kids are going to burst or explode from stress and that something needs to be done. (Emily and Marina)]]> 2019-10-08 18:18:16 UTC https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395231203 Cam and Connor:“seven-hour school day...kids march through hours of nightly homework...sports practices...band rehearsals...weekend-consuming assignments and tournaments.” https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395233588 This evidence from the passage provides illustrations about the daily lives of students and why they are stressing while also creating emotions of stress or anxiety for the reader ]]> 2019-10-08 18:21:39 UTC https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395233588 “I’m talking about 5-, 6-, 7-year-olds who are coming in with these conditions” https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395234371 This sentence emphasizes how young the children that are being effected are. Makes the audience feel sympathy and fear that young children who can’t help themselves are suffering from stress. This also comes from a pediatrician who would be a credible source. (Gracie) ]]> 2019-10-08 18:22:52 UTC https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395234371 "doctors increasingly see children in early elementary school suffering from migraine headaches and ulcers." https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395236938 Pathos towards the emotion of pity. Associates an adult problem to children so the audience will feel bad and want to do something(Jeremiah and Abilene)]]> 2019-10-08 18:26:44 UTC https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395236938 Josh and summer, “spun out of control” https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395237472 The statement is symbolic making it sound like the problem has no stop, this could also bring and emotional appeal to the reader hoping that the problem will end and will help end the problem ]]> 2019-10-08 18:27:26 UTC https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395237472 Nate, Ethan, Rocco: “I’m hearing this from my colleagues everywhere.” https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395250743 The hyperbole, “everywhere,” exaggerates the quantity of young children that are coming into hospitals with migraines and ulcers. The magnification of the phenomenon adds to the serious and concerned tone of the article.]]> 2019-10-08 18:48:49 UTC https://padlet.com/willnerr/7q2w3n4d8tka/wish/395250743