https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23 metaphor, similes, dialogue, imagery, repetition, etc. en-us 2020-09-10 15:02:35 UTC 2021-08-04 16:46:58 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735837903 Repetition- After weeks of late evenings, my father gave me the
biggest smile when the Firebird’s engine finally roared to life, and we looked at each other as if
we had just won the Indy 500. (Introduction) The old Firebird my father brought home predictably didn't last long. (Conclusion)

She started and ended the essay with the story of her dads firebird.  It helps bring the reader back into the story and helps them understand the deeper meaning of the story. ]]> 2020-09-10 16:27:32 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735837903 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735838467 She used a simile in the introduction. "we looked at each other as if we had just won the Indy 500."]]> 2020-09-10 16:27:37 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735838467 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735838642 She uses imagery to show what the car looked like, "with its scratched dents and faded paint"]]> 2020-09-10 16:27:38 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735838642 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735838644 She uses a lot of imagery which really enhances her story telling. An example of this is in the conclusion, "But some of my
favorite memories with my dad are roaring down streets with open windows and my long dark
brown hair wisping around me."]]> 2020-09-10 16:27:38 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735838644 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735838870 She uses a similie, "the Firebird’s engine finally roared to life, and we looked at each other as if
we had just won the Indy 500."]]> 2020-09-10 16:27:40 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735838870 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735838873 She uses imagery, "This car had clearly been passed over by many people with its scratched dents and
faded paint."]]> 2020-09-10 16:27:40 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735838873 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735839007 she used imagery in a way that puts you in her place, "...some of my favorite memories with my dad are roaring down streets with open windows..."]]> 2020-09-10 16:27:42 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735839007 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735839109 She uses a lot of repetition with saying how her father's smile after the car started.]]> 2020-09-10 16:27:43 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735839109 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735839389 she uses imagery "the 90 degree heat lifted the smell of
construction inside our car. While the cool AC was blasting in my face,"]]> 2020-09-10 16:27:46 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735839389 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735839808 She used very descriptive words and personification when she was explaining the sounds the car made. This is shown when she says "After weeks of late evenings, my father gave me the
biggest smile when the Firebird’s engine finally roared to life, and we looked at each other as if
we had just won the Indy 500."]]> 2020-09-10 16:27:50 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735839808 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735840447 She used imagery "long. But some of my
favorite memories with my dad are roaring down streets with open windows and my long dark
brown hair wisping around me."]]> 2020-09-10 16:27:57 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735840447 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735840892 She used personification, “Firebird’s engine finally roared to life“]]> 2020-09-10 16:28:02 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735840892 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735841905 She uses lots of imagery "This car had clearly been passed over by many other people with its scratched paint and dents"]]> 2020-09-10 16:28:14 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735841905 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735841978  She uses personification when she says, "But some of my
favorite memories with my dad are roaring down streets with open windows" she is using "roaring" when she is talking about her car to show personification.]]> 2020-09-10 16:28:15 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735841978 https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735855265 2020-09-10 16:30:48 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/7olwhlxo79xrcq23/wish/735855265