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      <pubDate>2021-03-17 13:16:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ford</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the dark, blue abyss, bioluminescent jellyfish roamed freely through the water as the rundown raft glowed a bright  blue. Little splashes echoed throughout the ocean as the cold feel of the water was quickly replaced by the feeling of amazement. The salty smell of the water filled the air as the angles of the ocean created ripples in the water, just enough to make the raft rock from side to side.<br><br>The glow of the fire like jellyfish lit up the water, mimicking the patterns of the stars. They circled the raft as if they where dancing for the boy, as many others scattered across the underwater world. The jellyfish shone like a bight blue sky in mid day.<br><br>In the freezing cold water, a colossal wail erupted from the water,  as the starry night sky reflected off of the wails back like a mirror. The splash that the wale made, violently shook the boat, but it was soft enough so that the boat wouldn’t capsize.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Micah</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The creatures in the endless ocean made for a beautiful scene, that the boy would never forget. The salty scent of the water arose through the atmosphere, being one bad anomaly to an otherwise astonishing night. Slowly, the water moved through the boy's fingers as calm as the moon itself. Beautifully, the water combined with the colors of fish painting a picture like an artist would on their canvas. Even with such an amazing scene as this, the sky sat in place, with the big dipper looking down, impressed. <br><br>In awe, the boy sat on his makeshift raft, not daring to take his eyes off the majestic picture that he never thought could've ever been possible. The raft shook unsteadily, but he didn't notice. You would think that a young boy like him would get bored of staring at water for so long, but in reality nobody would. Nobody ever would. It was completely silent, not even the water dared to make a noise. <br><br>Suddenly, with no warning, a massive bioluminescent creature jumped out of it's home, and it seemed as if everything started to go slower. Like a ballet dancer jumping through the air, the whale floated up, and back down again. It's colors were stamped onto it, like a tattoo. After it came down, the calm water came up in reaction.<br><br>Meanwhile, the boy watched shocked at what he just witnessed. </div>]]></description>
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         <title>Emily Descriptive writing</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Softly, waves gilded around the water and a gentle breeze just barely touched the glassy water. Light. Like stars in the sky, jellyfish lit up the water around  - glow dancing around the unstable collection of wood. The jellyfish painted the entire sea for miles, as if the boy was the only person in the world. Speedily,  his eyes glanced around the sea, drinking in everything around him as if he was ferociously thirsty. <br><br>Permeating the air, the thick scent of salt pulled itself out from the abyss and blended into the blissful tranquility. Small waves inched up and down the edges of the raft, as if they were too scared to break the stillness. The eerie silence of the night might unease some; others would find a sense of home within it. However, it was not entirely silent, harmonies of splashes sung to the parade of iridescent stars that blanketed the sky above, the moon glowing proudly as it peered past the stars. <br><br>Then, each iridescent creature began to hide, reaching once more into the depths of the sea. Fleeing, the glow of the water began to decimate, the light  was now trading its place with a deep darkness. A rush. Alone, a single wave sliced open the calm, leaving it bleeding out into a state of panic.<br><br>Trembling, the raft tried to collect itself once more and stabilize itself against the rough waters. The once vibrant symphony of jellyfish was now just the same normal water that it had rode before. The light disappearing into the distance.<br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>Kasturi Descriptive Writing </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The stars sprinkled around the sky glittering like diamonds above. The star filled sky covered the sea like a blanket. The salty scent rose from the glowing sea filling the air around the boy. <br><br>The water glowed with bioluminescent jellyfish. Small waves crept up the sides of the little raft causing it to rock softly. The boy sat on the raft staring out across the wide ocean. A soft dripping sound sliced through the silence like a knife. The boy looked into the depths of the glowing water, watching the jellyfish dance around. The jellyfish filled sea seemed to stretched on for ever. </div>]]></description>
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         <title>Seth</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Majestically, stars glistened above the vibrant blues that lit up the ocean. Pi drifted along the clam water. Bioluminescent jellyfish bobbed up and down in the peaceful water. It was a quiet night. A soothing calm tranquil night.<br><br>The luminescent jellyfish swam in circles around the little raft. They were the light in the dark. The stars of the sea. Dipping his hand in the frosty water, it was cold, so cold his hand turned to ice.<br><br>Looming over a masterpiece of an ocean the sprinkles in the sky where their own art. Starstruck he looked up in awe. He had now words to describe what he was seeing. It was magical. <br><br>Swimming as fast as there little transparent tentacles could take them, the jellyfish were gone. Out of nowhere a magnificent whale leaped out out of the water. It glowed green and blue as it left the water. Moments later the wonderful beast landed back down in the water. Sending Pi's raft off into the dark, gloomy night.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Sanya&#39;s Descriptive Writing</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Quickly, silently and suddenly, jolts of light illuminated the dark abyss below. Magical creatures came into view. Jellyfish. The iridescent entities flashed signals of light; others responded to the call. Everything went silent. It was so silent that even the faintest splash would be a tsunami. Too silent. Overly perfect. Timid waves licked the raft, eager to taste the rough wood. However, shyness overcame them.<br><br>Glistening like freshly cut diamonds, stars woke up and danced in the clear, indifferent, sky. Serenity overtook the scene to the point where it seemed unreal. Sheer blissfulness. The sky was a ring while the stars were its stones. <br><br>The tranquility was disrupted almost as soon as it was born. Salty effluviums erupted through the water like a volcano, puncturing the boy's nose. It was malodorous. Simply foul. Slithering, the stench crept onto the raft, ready to prey. <br><br>Nevertheless, the scene was surreal. As amazing and breathtaking as it was, the boy couldn't help but wonder if it was all a hallucination. <br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>Krishna Descriptive Writing</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Cool and calm, the gentle ocean breeze dancing across the glass like water. Its whistling broke the silence. Further out into the serenity, a painted sky grasped below to touch the shimmering water, which glimmered like a thousand diamonds refracting the starlight. Salty mist raised from the sapphire depths, tingling Pi's nose. Splash. Minuscule ripples off water climbed against the wooden raft.<br><br>Above, the galactic glitter twinkled, lighting up the jet black sky. Spectacular flecks of light glowed above, creating a festival of stellar fire. Wise and knowledgeable, the sky was like a book, each time it read new stories creating a sense of home and serenity in the bare blue seas. Bright and eluminating the sprinkled night fell upon the mirror, copying the intricate patterns of the blissful and majestic stars. <br><br>Suddenly, one by one, bioluminescent creatures floated to the surface, vibrant and glowing the butterflies of the sea performed synchronized ballet. Shocked, elated, surprised, Pi looked at the abyss of the tones of blues. Across the monotone pool, a symphony of life bursted into action. The silence was overjoyed, a band of splashes elated the eerily tranquil mid night.<br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>Clark 3/17/21</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>A rush of cool water drifted his hands, awaking him from his sleep.  Everything was pitch black except for the water.  Groups of translucent glittering jellyfish meandered around the timid raft, eyeing the one and each other. <br><br>Calmly, the fish tip-toed around the raft.  All the fish proudly reflected a neon blue, lighting up the previously viscous sea, to not seem so scary.  The fish were like puppies; small but fast, but more importantly, smart. They cleverly navigated the dark sea, avoiding their deathly predators. <br><br>All of a sudden, the water started to rumble... the fish dashed out the way like a cheetah, the clumsy raft trembled in fear.  Quickly, a ginormous whale blasted out of the water into the spotlight.  In awe, Pi watched the rigid creature plummet into his water. <br><br>Waves smacked the water like drum set. Carefully, Pi looked at his raft, the wood was cracked. He sighed. Smooth waves brushed his hands, he felt as if it was a sign; everything will be OK. <br><br>As the fish started their dance again and the stars tinkled at the blue glow, Pi laid down to try and get some more sleep on his broken raft.  <br>   </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-03-17 15:21:55 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zoe M Descriptive Writing</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>All around the cluster of wood angelic creatures emerged from the water one by one. The boy tried to shift to the edge of the raft to get closer to the glowing water, which was now completely covered with the light illuminating from the jellyfish, almost like a blanket. <br>A slight breeze danced across the water, creating ripples that spiraled around the starstruck boy. <br><br>The collection of pellucid jellyfish grouped together, creating a vivid blue light that reflected around the raft. Just above the glowing abyss a collection of stars dotted across the eternal black sheet.<br>It was like salt spilled across black marble. The slight whistle of the calming wind prevented complete silence.<br><br>The water was stunning. It was calming, majestic and soothing. A salty sent lifted form the abyss, mixing with the crisp air creating a heavenly serenity. The shades of blues merged together. It was a work of art.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-03-17 15:22:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Honoria</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Salty spray splashed onto the figures drifting. Glassy water reflected the sky. Stars peppered they sky and  jelly fish danced below. They stretched as far down as they did wide.infinite. Some jelly fish stood as still as the clouds; others dances and jumped performing for no one and everyone to see. Brighter than stars, brighter than fire that burns into the greedy men, brighter than the flame of two lovers.<br><br>Out on the horizon blue and black blended together, like some one had took a paintbrush and blended them into each other. Stars fell into the water. one. Then another. One by one stars fell into the water.  Chasing each other they all leaped from the sky and dove into the never unending blue below. </div>]]></description>
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         <title>Caroline Descriptive Writing</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Slowly, the fish emerged to the surface of the magnificent, glowing water. The small twinkling stars made the sky a beutiful indigo blue color. The raft made of a collection of wood slowly tured to a luminecent bight bule that gave the ocean a spectacular color. <br><br>Beond the raft, a breeze of wind came flying above Pi's head creating ripples aound the boat that sounded like a tornado soaring accros the water that broke the silence. <br><br>Salty. The stench from the water infused the air with Pi gasping to get another smell. Some would love the salty smell in the air; Others would find it very discoforting.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-03-17 15:22:11 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zoe L</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In a sea of light, the raft floated by gently, carrying an important payload, a boy. He looked up and became awestruck. For miles, the sea glowed brilliantly with beautiful bioluminescent jellyfish. They danced around carelessly, letting everything their light touched have a small part of their glow. Overlooking everything, the stars' faint glow, guarding everyone. Like a protective parent. Vibrant blues of the sea blended into the darkness and emptiness of the sky, as skilfully as an artist would blend colours. The sea's salty aroma overwhelmed any other scent, it overwhelmed any other scent drifting peacefully, begging for attention. Some would find the salt bothering; others would find the whole scene beautiful.<br><br>Water everywhere glistened like diamonds, as clear as glass. Soft splashing could faintly be heard as the water playfully lapped against the small raft. Slowly, jellyfish bobbed in time with the rhythm of the sea's waves, illuminating everything, being the North Star of the sea, guiding those who have become lost in the tranquility. <br><br>A cool wind rushed through the previously still air. Everything stopped. In unison, all beings great and small turned to face the direction of the disruption of the silence. When eyes met the new wonder, nothing could describe it. A whale. A humpbacked whale had erupted from the abyss. With it, it brought shimmering droplets that rained down and the salt water permeated the surrounding area. The world seemed to be frozen in the moment, not letting go and moving on. However, before long, the instant was shattered by the deafening splash. Then the whale was gone as quickly as it had came.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Derin’s Descriptive Writing</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Steadily, the rusted raft drifted through the glistening water as the boy gazed at stars. The sparkling jellyfish wandered through the sea creating a magical atmosphere. Glowing, the raft reflected the bright sky while the overwhelming bright lights felt like a dream<br><br><br>This night was a quiet and peaceful night, the boy was undisturbed. The tranquil winds blew across the gleaming water creating tiny ripples around the raft. The boy was speechless.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Joey</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The boy was mesmerized by the calm flow of the water, the shine of the magnificent jellyfish as they reflect from the moonlight. <br><br>Shocked, amazed, fascinated Pi stares at the majestic blue glow of the creatures emerging from the water. The raft lightly wobbles as the calming water so silent one wave would cause a calamity as it tugs the boat through the immense ocean. <br><br>Mythical jellyfish colored the raft using their seemingly fictitious gleam of light. They polished the oceans surface as if they were painting a canvas. </div>]]></description>
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         <title>Ryan Descriptive writing</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div> The ocean started to show a ray of light that glistened everywhere from the sparkling jellyfish swam under and around it as it made a shining and glamorous atmosphere.<br><br>The night was there when the blue clear water did not stop shining like a sparkling jewels or diamonds<br>that anyone can dream of the water looks feels like your at ease <br>and looks like the most beautiful water you've ever seen.<br><br>The water everywhere made the stars come out and sparkle from how gorgeous it is. as the water was so beautiful if anybody saw they can't call it trivial because it is more important than anything that anyone has ever saw the water magical blue light beauty in the ocean. <br><br>The felling of the surrounding is in a joyful and surprised mood joy for seeing the ray of light shine surprised  to see it from the ocean that made the water light blue.<br><br>As the water shined it makes people think can you make wish from glowing fish.<br><br><br><br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-03-17 15:23:41 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>ted writing </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>As the glowing jelly fish swarmed together around the flimsy boat while it floated in dark blue abyss. the warm night air radiated from the warm ocean. the night sky's stars smiled on a boy sitting on the raft. Some may enjoy the atmosphere hear; other may  be scared by the thought of an ocean in the middle of the night.<br><br> the jelly fish swam around like a tornado. spreading thear light and magic throgh out the ocean. it would seem to be they whear prefroming a musical of sorts; the ocean was alice becose of them, it had a soul becose of them. <br><br>a raft driffted across the water calmly ad it bobed up and down it was like a rocking cradel sothing and calm. the air was mildly warm and breezy the ocen was cold and created an nioce constras bettween them <br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>Simone </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ol><li>The sky was a dark coal. There were millions of tiny sparkling stars dancing around each other. It felt as if nothing mattered except this miniature world. Elegantly, the stars peered down on the water reflecting down their luminescent  light onto the glowing lagoon. The water had a mysterious blue glow filling the room. Gently, the waves toppled over each other, disappearing into the water. </li><li>Majestically, the enchanted glistening jellyfish floated, jumped, and swarmed in glee. They were as beautiful as the rarest diamond in the world. They gathered together causing their glow to be brighter then the sun. Softly, a scent of salt streamed through the air landing on the water. Magically, the abyss lit up with hope. Joyfully, they pranced trickling their magic across the water. They were unbothered. Nothing could disturb their land. </li><li>A small wooden raft sat on the lagoon. One man. Mesmerized, he turned his head, starstruck. Small splashes rippled onto the raft spreading the magic through out the wood. The jellyfish talked amongst themselves about why this creature was sitting in their world. Amazed, he reached his fingertip into the water, checking if it was real. Everything came to a stop, it was just the jellyfish, stars and him. </li></ol><div><br></div>]]></description>
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