https://padlet.com/23rdamania/7nvpclq4hym9 Thank you for reading my writing and commenting please provide positive and constructive feedback. en-us 2018-02-01 15:46:41 UTC 2018-03-28 14:54:13 UTC hello@padlet.com 23emauer https://padlet.com/23rdamania/7nvpclq4hym9/wish/236983729 Hey Rushil! Amazingly descpritve well written essay! I enjoyed your thouroughly written your warrants they were well thought out and well explained. With your good explanations, I could easily know exactly how both sources were different. Also, I liked the pieces of data and evidence you pulled from the sources. Both pieces were really strong and proved how both were similar/different. I could really tell how both had compassion for climate change! Maybe next time you can try adding more/better transition phrases. Sometimes I found myself confused about when you were transitioning from warrants to the end of the paragraph. Doing this could just make the formatting a bit better and more understandable. Overall, amazing writing piece well done!!:)
-Ella]]> 2018-03-01 15:54:44 UTC https://padlet.com/23rdamania/7nvpclq4hym9/wish/236983729 23sberkman https://padlet.com/23rdamania/7nvpclq4hym9/wish/237378285 One thing I really liked about your piece is how descriptive it was in the beginning and throughout. In specific I  think this sentence, "Alex breathed in the cool, crisp autumn air as he hurried out of Mr. Watson’s office. He marveled at the beautiful crystal clear lake, dotted with silver and ochre koi." Another thing I liked about your piece is that it had the right amount of dialogue. It was spread out across your piece and there wasn't too much dialogue that it would be boring for the reader. One wish I have for the future is to make sure the punctuation and spelling is all correct. Even though there was only a couple punctuation and spelling mistakes it's important that it's correct in the future. Overall, I think your narrative was really well written! 
-Sofia Berkman  ]]> 2018-03-02 13:32:28 UTC https://padlet.com/23rdamania/7nvpclq4hym9/wish/237378285 23jabate https://padlet.com/23rdamania/7nvpclq4hym9/wish/237403566 Hi! One thing I really liked about your story was how you described Alex in such great detail it really made me feel how good of an agent he is. I also loved the setting description like how Alex was looking over NY, it was very good. One thing I would change is watch out for the run-on sentences. Overall, I loved your story!

-Jason Abate]]> 2018-03-02 14:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/23rdamania/7nvpclq4hym9/wish/237403566 23abartley https://padlet.com/23rdamania/7nvpclq4hym9/wish/246929620 Hey Rushil! One thing that I really liked about your article was that you made a huge deal over a stupid event which made it really funny to read especially that the 0.00000000001% part of the chip will be poison and that people had to investigate the factory where it is made. I don't have a wish because this story is stupidly funny but overall AMAZING job!]]> 2018-03-28 14:48:49 UTC https://padlet.com/23rdamania/7nvpclq4hym9/wish/246929620