5M's Narrative Wall TRAPPED! by Lyn Marshall

5M Narratives: TRAPPED!

marshall_lyn — 2018-05-19 03:05:34 UTC

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Write each description in a separate block. You can add as many as you choose.

eg. The sky was a sad man sobbing loudly and the clouds were painting it grey.
Helen

The clouds were already growing into massive, furious stomping elephants , threatening to blow water out of their trunks any minute.

avathecoffeecup — 2018-05-21 11:38:49 UTC

Trapped

2018-05-21 13:14:28 UTC

The fire swirled around like an angel of darkness bringing fear and death at every window.

Alan Y

Trapped

2018-05-21 13:17:26 UTC

Monumental puffs of smoke covered the atmosphere trapping and killing the villagers inside the dome of menacing darkness.

Alan Y

Trapped

2018-05-21 13:21:23 UTC

They went inside the forbidden darkness, fear leading them towards horror and the underworld.

Alan Y

Trapped

2018-05-22 07:36:11 UTC

The gigantic, killer wave rose up like a T-rex then used its powerful jaws to destroy the sandy bay...

Use there handy upper-body strength to forcefully pull there way up the towering...

The menacing wave was rapidly increasing size...

The wave of destruction was rising, destroying everything in its path...

They luckily survived the wave of Posident...

It cover the city like a blanket...

It crashed into the spotless courtyard, washing away the happiness of children...

Gavin B. 5M

Every direction Lila turned to was blocked by a gargantuan, mighty monster of monumental flames. Her breathing was becoming more and more vulnerable with every passing second as the orange flames licked the bark of ancient trees. Panic. Panic, and panic possessed her brain, draining all of the happiness that had remained in her heart. Her body wore a heavy coat of sweat that became thicker each time a fresh, new flame sprouted to life. The unpredictable footsteps of fire left an endless trail that was visible from miles above the ground in the ordinary, innocent forest. The little hope that was left inside of her eventually faded away completely. As the long hours haunted her, she started to lose not only consciousness, but life as well.

2018-05-22 07:53:59 UTC

Sofia Valadao

Trapped

TomomasaAoki — 2018-05-22 09:14:38 UTC

A huge wave of noise and humidity hit them.

Back at Chicago the golden sun was sinking when the peaceful evening was disturbed by the crackling of fire.

Fear covered him like a blanket.

Even though he tried to control his sense of impending doom.

Suddenly an ear-splitting cry echoed in the hall and he could see his demise...

his tense muscles relaxed.

It left nothing but a trail of destruction.

as the merciless killer wrecked their house.

Before her watery eyes, incandescent curtains of flame burst forth from desiccant twigs, and bundles of parched leaves that were strewn carelessly across the dusty forest floor. Golden sparks of warmth ignited the bark of ancient trees. A sea of fire crept towards the maiden, a blazing inferno trembled with power radiating waves of unwelcome fumes. Despite the heat crawling over her, Lili shivered amongst the evil fog of negativity. Dread seized Lili in it's jaws. She just stood there, staring, aghast, like a rabbit caught in the headlights.

2018-05-23 09:02:55 UTC

Abila Bian

The footsteps of conflagrant flames last an unavoidable track in the ordinary forest: the barren roots have been scorched with scars; the innocent, rickety branches were singed at the edges;crumpled leaves and delicate bushes have been given permanent marks.

2018-05-23 09:21:36 UTC

Abila Bian

'Trapped'

boisdequinhenry — 2018-05-23 09:41:51 UTC

 Every step he took was a disaster. My pounding heart was exploding endlessly out of my chest. In a blink of an eye, a deep crack formed which separated me from my cherished family. I was TRAPPED! I slowly searched my surroundings but all I could see was jet-black sheets of darkness. Not even a pinprick of light was found. 
Sheets of blazing, hot fire leaked out of the blood-red volcano; vast puffs of smoke floated into the crystal-clear sky, blinding my view.
Crrrr... Crrrr... CRACK! I felt nature's deafening scream beneath me raging out of the destroyed ground.

Henry Boisdequin

TRAPPED

2018-05-23 10:40:10 UTC

The soft breeze blew in her face as her long brown hair flowed in the wind.
Cici

Trapped

2018-05-23 10:45:31 UTC

Suddenly, the house began to shake and rumble.The terrifying sound startled the whole family.
Cici

Trapped

2018-05-23 10:59:20 UTC

Her confused mind flooded with questions. "What's going on?" " Where is everybody?" "Should I run?" Fear surrounded her. And then right at that moment, she new. She was in trouble.....

Cici

'Move or die' whispered the flames as they crackled and sputtered. Terror squeezed her heart as she stared at the roaring flames in front of her.

2018-05-23 11:53:41 UTC

Helen

Trapped

ERLow — 2018-05-23 11:56:19 UTC

"Silence took over the house, flooring all sounds."

Fear slithered slowly around her like a snake.

2018-05-23 11:57:42 UTC

Helen

Trapped

ERLow — 2018-05-23 12:02:30 UTC

"minutes of fruitless search."

The wind was a thief, stealing the leaves of the old, wet trees.

2018-05-23 12:07:26 UTC

Helen

Trapped

ERLow — 2018-05-23 12:15:12 UTC

" The volcano hurled boulders at James's house, destroying everything in it's path."

Trapped

Aidan_Liu — 2018-05-23 12:18:31 UTC

The scream of the ground...
Deafened the pedestrians around...

Aidan Liu

Trapped

Aidan_Liu — 2018-05-23 12:21:52 UTC

Endless cracks were visible from Mars.

The earthquake roared loudly into Jack's ears

Trapped

Aidan_Liu — 2018-05-23 12:23:42 UTC

Jack and Connor ran crazily to the elevator ; like wild elephants creating a stampede.

Aidan Liu

Trapped

Aidan_Liu — 2018-05-23 12:31:47 UTC

Quickly, Jack hopped in the eternal, elevated elevator.His heart pounded so hard it wanted to escape. The adrenaline took over his body like a boxer beating him up. In a frantic moment he froze, then his heart melted leaving only darkness in his pockets...

Aidan Liu

Trapped

Aidan_Liu — 2018-05-23 12:36:26 UTC

With in 5 seconds, the beautiful, blue berry blue, building collapsed and threw the elevator (Jack was in) far away.

Aidan Liu

Trapped

ERLow — 2018-05-23 12:37:39 UTC

Glimpse of hope

2018-05-26 08:13:13 UTC

Her legs were jelly.
Sofia B

2018-05-26 08:14:40 UTC

Pitchblack
Sofia B

The horrifying tornado cornered her to the inky black wall.

2018-05-26 08:28:44 UTC

Sofia B

fiery red flames came running through the city and everything in it's path was sucked up and left in ashes

2018-05-28 12:32:10 UTC

Guy

Trapped

siddhantpandey — 2018-06-02 02:55:07 UTC

The Sun had erupted out of the volcano. Gushing fiery red flames engulfed the green valley.
A cold shiver slithered down my spine like a snake, as I watched the fury of the
volcano. I was frozen....