DESN1001 Interactive Presentation Peer Feedback by Michelle Huang

2024-08-20 23:44:50 UTC

10/10. no notes.

2024-08-20 23:45:03 UTC

funny and sexy

2024-08-20 23:45:30 UTC

Very good job

2024-08-20 23:45:33 UTC

I really enjoyed how the third presenter was able to relate the modern artefact case-study to her own personal experience with her sister.

2024-08-20 23:46:07 UTC

nice and succinct presentation with well designed slides

Informative and visually appealing 😎

2024-08-20 23:46:15 UTC

feedback

2024-08-20 23:46:49 UTC

Clear communication on the influence of how material culture has transformed over the century and it's prevalence in today's society. Good job

2024-08-20 23:46:50 UTC

couldnt be better

Case Study

allenschool — 2024-08-20 23:47:27 UTC

Great example on the Covid mask. Very specific. Maybe add the reference on the page. I really like the layout of that page.good job.

2024-08-20 23:47:48 UTC

Really informative presentation - loved the examples and case studies, I liked how at times you related them to your personal experiences which in turn made them more relatable for us as the audience

p.s very cute slides :))

2024-08-20 23:47:56 UTC

Critique slide bullet points can be further condensed for easier reading.

2024-08-20 23:48:46 UTC

Great verbal and visual quality

2024-08-20 23:53:06 UTC

Was a informative presentation and had good references to the lecture and readings 👍

2024-08-27 23:42:49 UTC

Overall good! It could have been more engaging with the audience however, the core information and message coming across all made sense and the case studies were quite effective. Good job guys!!

Feedback

2024-08-27 23:43:29 UTC

It was a great presentation that communicated the themes really well!! I really enjoyed the critique slides and thought that they very well provided their own opinions on the readings that was greatly situated into the presentation. I also really enjoyed the case studies as well, I thought it was really well done and communicate :)

My only thing which didn’t add to the experience was there were times that I was unable to hear what was being communicated, so perhaps just projecting you voices a little further would be a great advantage.

Great job guys!

2024-08-27 23:43:42 UTC

Good critical reading that showed good understanding of the prescribed readings about Apple and Marie Kondo.

Regarding presentation skills, for the next time, aim to look up at the audience sometimes. Try to face your body towards the audience as well.

2024-08-27 23:44:27 UTC

I really enjoyed the case studies, especially the comparison between Apple and Muji, it was quite insightful finding out the meaning behind muji and how it translates into their ethical design philosophy. SUPER AMAZING JOB YAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAY :))))))

2024-08-27 23:45:20 UTC

overall you guys did a really good job and it was really interesting - i think a critique could be that making the case study a little more varied from the reading and thus a little more interesting to provide a wider perspective would have added nuance - also i think a little more audience engagement + projecting your voices a little would be really helpful - you guys did so so well though, good job!!!!

2024-08-27 23:45:28 UTC

super thoughtful + well communicated critique slides, and a lot of critical thought given to the negatives of consumerism. Could articulate a little better the tension we discussed around govt. regulation/capitalist financial imperatives/the role of ethical designers. E.g.: can ethical actors even create meaningful change in a system like capitalism?

2024-08-27 23:46:18 UTC

Good critique of the readings and overall review of Consumerism Topic.

Try to face audience next time for projecting an articulate and clear voice.

Other than that, great job!

2024-09-10 23:54:46 UTC

communication and visuals were great, case studies were good and linked back to the content and readings. maybe could go more in depth for the content/readings critique, e.g give personal experience, whether you agree or disagree

Great Job :)

2024-09-10 23:55:09 UTC

you guys really know your stuff very well and it is a very interesting topic to present on especially when its done well like you guys did! aesthetics were popping off as usual however maybe it could have aligned with the theme a little more? Case studies were relevant and I really like how you did one case study for an online service and one for a tangible in person service. This is nice to see a step back from the digital realm. I think the only thing to maybe work on was tone of voice and trying not to read straight from notes and communicating flow of thought. Awesome job :)

2024-09-11 00:00:24 UTC

Overall was a good presentation, discussion of readings and other info was engaging & good :)

2024-09-11 00:00:24 UTC

Great presentation!

Maybe some images that you can use as examples would supplement your explanations even more.

Feedback

2024-09-11 00:00:26 UTC

Overall the presentation had really nice visuals that accompanied and supported the verbal presentation which was given. They were pleasing as well as providing further information and clarity into the context of service design.

I really enjoyed the critiques of the readings as they were very clear to understand and comprehend through providing further examples of what the readings mean to us as designers and resonating it us was really effective and well doing.

The apple case study and the visuals that provided a inside pov and a external pov were really effective to further understand the context of service design, I really enjoyed this study and the key points which I took away.

Maybe in the future a bit less text to accompany the verbal presentation as at times as a audience member to maintain a focus on the visual presentation dialogue and the verbal dialogue was a bit of a multitask.

Great job overall lads :)

2024-09-24 23:51:17 UTC

great informative presentation with nice visuals too. I liked the positive and negatives you raised with circular design and also involving the audience with questions.

allenschool — 2024-09-24 23:51:20 UTC

Great presentation! Do like case study. Pretty good discussion

2024-09-24 23:52:14 UTC

I really like your case study on the jeans and scoop whole foods. You guys also answered the questions really well and gave a great response to the conflict of economic growth and sustainability.

2024-09-24 23:52:15 UTC

You guys really did a great job making circular design relatable and understandable to the audience, and gave a lot of practical advice on how people can implement practices that help facilitate circular design in society (though it really should be the responsibility of corporations to make it easier for the consumer). Very compelling presentation!

2024-09-24 23:53:24 UTC

Amazing presentation and really informative.

2024-09-24 23:56:36 UTC

Understanding of the topic was really good -> discussion at end was really informative :)

Group2

allenschool — 2024-10-08 22:46:49 UTC

Feedback (Week 10)

2024-10-08 22:50:06 UTC

Excellent, clear-cut critiques of posthuman design laid out. Love the Back to the Future example to highlight the difficulty of bringing speculative design to reality.

Both case studies were fascinating and engaging. I wonder regarding the 2nd case study which mentioned the person had the same disease as Stephen Hawking: Are there any differences? And why not use Stephen Hawking as the case study?

Reading critique was also easy to understand, and the graphics/presentation was also really nice. Well done!

2024-10-15 22:34:42 UTC

Great presentation, interesting case studies that we've had experience with.

Excellent Work!

allenschool — 2024-10-15 22:35:46 UTC

Pretty smooth presentation. Especially enjoy the case study part! Pretty good!

2024-10-15 22:36:12 UTC

Presentation was really good + had good research. Case studies were good too!

Feedback (Week 11)

2024-10-15 22:36:26 UTC

Really enjoyed the presentation! I thought it was very informative and my highlights within the presentation were the critiques of the reading this week as well as the two case studies.

Regarding the case studies, I thought that they were done very well specifically the one regarding HECS as it is applicable and relatable to everyone in the room I thought that the information regarding these studies was very clever.

It was also a very pretty presentation!

gg guys :))

policy design presentation

2024-10-15 22:36:56 UTC

you guys killed it. clean slides, interesting case studies, and you knew your stuff. The importance of this area is hugely under-recognised so loved to see how much research went into your presentation.