Challenge for week 4：用Quillbot把國小生作文變成高中生作文 by 張峻嘉

bc0408 — 2025-09-19 03:37:24 UTC

W4 Challenge: Quillbot

You wrote a journal last week and will continue writing for the rest of the semester. One thing to do after writing up is to seek for ways to do even better. One interesting tool is Quillbot, which can help you paraphrase your own words and polish them. See the screenshot for example.

For your challenge this week:

Please select 3 sentences that you wrote for your journal last week and use Quillbot to paraphrase them. Upload your result and contrast the "before" and "after." Then write in 3 sentences about whether you like this tool or not and how you can keep using it in the future.

s411438 — 2025-09-27 05:44:41 UTC

I like this tool. I think it is very useful. I will keep using it in the future, and I can learn not only basic words but also advanced vocabulary that I didn’t know before.

s411391_1 — 2025-09-27 10:41:58 UTC

I like this website. It helps me understand how to use other words to express the same meaning.

s411405 — 2025-09-27 14:37:30 UTC

This tool is very useful.It can help me turn low-level vocabulary into more advanced vocabulary. I will keep using it in the future.

s411457_1 — 2025-09-27 16:34:45 UTC

s411441_1 — 2025-09-28 03:49:31 UTC

I'm glad I discovered this website; it allows us to check our sentences or compositions more quickly and helps me learn more advanced words.

2025-09-28 05:11:18 UTC

I think this website is very useful, as it helps me express myself in a more concise way.

2025-09-28 05:17:26 UTC

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s411431 — 2025-09-28 05:23:45 UTC

It’s a very useful APP that Can help us correct the wrong word or wrong grammar but the APP may be wrong sometimes so we must check the article after we use this APP.

2025-09-28 05:25:07 UTC

I think it's a useful tool but it ignored some of the words in my sentences... Whatever, it's still great that I can learn more vocabularies :D

2025-09-28 05:31:24 UTC

I think this app can help me to improve my sentence. In fact, I am not familiar with writing a good sentence. So it is really helpful for me.

s411436 — 2025-09-28 05:56:18 UTC

I think it’s a nice tool. However, I just paste three sentences from my last week journal. And the “before” sentences only have pronoun, so I need to change into “my cat” or it couldn’t understand what the whole sentences meant. But I still think it useful. :)

s411452 — 2025-09-28 08:38:24 UTC

I think this tool can help me learn how to write better sentences. I think it can helps me a lot in the future.

s411354 — 2025-09-28 11:54:58 UTC

I think this tool is very useful because it can express articles with better words. I think it is very practical. Maybe I will use this tool frequently in the future.

s411430_1 — 2025-09-28 12:29:13 UTC

I think it is a very useful tool. It helps me to correct my sentences and write more words and phrases. I can learn more with it.

s411396 — 2025-09-28 12:42:13 UTC

This web can let my passage more upscale,and it can let me know what is the good article looks like.

s411425_1 — 2025-09-28 14:18:04 UTC

I think it’s a useful tool for me to make a passage better. Because it corrects the wrong words and grammar. It also helps me understand how to write a excellent passage.

2025-09-28 15:33:13 UTC

This method is really helpful to me. It's able to give me better mode of expressions. I extremely like the suggestion it gave.

2025-09-28 15:41:13 UTC

This web page makes me know that my grammatical errors,and I can learn where wrong word usage,I will keep use it in the future.

s411380 — 2025-09-28 15:43:31 UTC

This tool can make sentences more perfect and complete. It is a good tool to practice writing essays!

2025-09-28 15:58:43 UTC

The App is so cool It can help me deep not true word And use more laugh word

2025-09-28 15:59:34 UTC

s411377 — 2025-09-28 16:30:01 UTC

I think this program is great because I can input my own sentences and it will output better or more advanced words,so I can learn more at once.

s411383 — 2025-09-28 23:32:46 UTC

This tool can make sentences more advanced and also allows me to learn some more advanced words. It is a very useful tool.

s411375 — 2025-09-29 01:05:11 UTC

I think this tool is very useful.My sentences always like elementary school students wrote.I will often use this in the future.

s411381_1 — 2025-09-29 03:03:30 UTC

2025-09-29 03:18:33 UTC

This tool is useful. It makes me learn whats wrong in my sentence and makes it correct.

s411437_1 — 2025-09-29 05:00:33 UTC

This is a very useful tool. After seeing the revised article, I instantly felt that it had been changed to a higher level. It was cool.

2025-09-29 08:58:25 UTC

This tool can help me better understand how to use the grammar words I have learned to enrich my articles.

433mollyhuang — 2025-09-29 14:19:47 UTC

English writing is a difficult subject for me. This tool helps me understand how I can improve my vocabulary and grammar, also allows me to correct errors.I can learn writing through this tool.

2025-09-29 14:41:35 UTC

I’m not good at English writing,so l often make mistakes.This can help me correct it and help me make it better. I think I will use it when I write the weekly journal.

s411451_1 — 2025-09-29 15:06:06 UTC

I don't know many sentence structures.By using this app, I can learn more sentence structures. Trying it constantly,I think I will be good at writing.