Writing Workshop Week (3) by Rebecca Harris https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3 (1st) Plan (2nd) Accomplishments (3rd) Comment on 5 classmate posts en-us 2022-03-23 17:21:20 UTC 2022-04-04 22:12:34 UTC hello@padlet.com Dr. Harris --- EXAMPLE dr_rebeccalharris https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2110205864 Plan:
  1. More details about the current practice that my reform  is responding to.
  2. Add more support for the purpose of schooling I think is most important.
  3. Strengthen the details of my philosophy of education by adding 2 more attributes.
Accomplishments:
  1. I strengthened my research by adding 3 more sources about my reform.
  2. I developed details on the current practice my reform responds to and my reform itself.
  3. Made sure the theme of equity is clearly explained, and is threaded across each section of my essay
]]> 2022-03-23 17:21:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2110205864 Taylor Hockett https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2113733242 Plan:

1. Fix in-text citations for paper #1, and fix the reference sheet to be in alphabetical order.
2. Redo paragraph 1 in my  Philosophy of US Education paper.
3. Strengthen the sources for my Purpose of US education paper.

Accomplishments :

1. I fixed in-text citations along with adding four sources and multiple quotes in all papers.
2. I rewrote almost all of my philosophy paper because I scored the lowest on that one.
3. Rearranged some paragraphs and added better transition words to smooth the paper out.
4. Made a new reference sheet including all sources from all papers in alphabetical order. 

]]> 2022-03-25 12:50:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2113733242 Allyson Harkey https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2115972707 Plan: 
1. Fix my sources and in-text citations for my proposal. 
2. Go back and provide source for information in purpose of education paper. 
3. Make introduction and conclusion flow better in philosophy of education paper. ]]> 2022-03-27 22:46:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2115972707 Grace Ruesch graceruesch https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2116200804 Plan: 
1. Fix all my in-text citations from all the paper, with the quotes too 
2. Make sure that the paragraphs follow each other, and that they have smooth transitions into each other 
3. Make sure that I have someone reread what I have written in my paper 


Accomplishments: 
1) I had one of my friends check over my work to make sure it has a nice flow to it. 
2) I added new citations and  made sure that sounded better in the essay 
3) made sure that I fixed my references ]]> 2022-03-28 02:22:15 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2116200804 Myesha Mosley https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2117465735 Plan:
1. Fix my order of paragraphs so my topic is not jumping around confusing the reader.
2. Fix my in-text citations and sources for all my papers
3. Strengthen my paragraphs making sure I do not leave out key details advocating for my reform

Accomplishments: 
1. I strengthen my paper by providing more details on the philosophy of education section.
2. Explaining my reform more clearly 
3. Adding in all my references ]]> 2022-03-28 15:45:41 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2117465735 Lexi Alexander https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2117653644 Plan 
1. Fix my in text citations for paper 1 
2.  develop and elaborate more in depth in first paper
3. strengthen my sources from paper 1 and 2]]> 2022-03-28 17:18:42 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2117653644 Kayla White https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2117686727 Plan:
1. Fix my in-text citations from Section 2
2. Explain my reform in more depth
3. Add more examples of how my reform will help schools
Accomplishments:
1. I added more examples of disabilities in all of my sections
2. Connected past papers to make them flow
3. Change a few paragraphs from Section 2]]> 2022-03-28 17:35:09 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2117686727 Morgan Caruso https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2117699675 Plan: 
1. Fix formatting and citations on my first paper. 
2. strength my proposal paper by adding more information 
3. find more sources and background information for my philosophy paper. 

Accomplishments: 
1. I did fix all of my citations and also found that I had some source errors as well and fixed those too. 
2. I added more sources on to my Philosophy paper to add more depth to it. 
3. I also, fixed the tone of my proposal/introduction to make it sound formal and rewrote my conclusion to make more sense. 
4. connected all off the papers together to make them flow



]]> 2022-03-28 17:41:38 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2117699675 Katie Weadon https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2117748108 Plan: 
1. Fix all grammar errors in all sections of the paper, to make the essay clearer.

2. Fixing all quotes that are over 40 words, making them separate from the paragraph. 

3. Section 2 I need to add more sources to back up my claims. 

4. Edit all in-text citations.

5. Section 3 I need to add more research to back up my reform. 

Accomplishments

1. I fixed all grammar errors for all sections of my paper.
2. I have now finished writing my equity section of the essay and I added a conclusion and abstract.

3. I fixed all of my in-text citations and my direct quotes over 40 words. 

4. I added more support to my purpose of schools section and my philosophy paper.

5. I also went in and added headings and subheadings because I found that easier to keep track of things when adding all the sections together. 

]]> 2022-03-28 18:07:13 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2117748108 Crystal Barbour https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2118198535 1. Clarify my reform by fleshing out my arguments and support with textbook evidence in the proposal/introduction section. 
2. Develop the points brought up by quotes in my Purposes of US Education Paper like “selecting” vs. “developing” talent.
3. Further develop what is meant by using the Latin Recognition System over traditional ranking in the Philosophy of US Education paper. ]]> 2022-03-29 00:21:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2118198535 Zachariah Strader https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2118279221 Plan: 
1.  Add more appropriate background information that strengthens my proposal's argument. 
2. Add more stats and research into my "Purpose of US education" paper. 
3. Connect more points on my reform and essentialism in "Philosphy of US education" paper. 
4. Fix any Formatting mistakes, as well as citations

Accomplishments: 
1. Added a lot more background information to strenghthen proposal. 
2. Added more stats and quotes to the "Purpose of education" section. 
3. elaborated more on essentialism and connected more points to the reform. 
4. had a peer read over my paper and fixed any formatting mistakes/ grammatical mistakes. ]]> 2022-03-29 01:13:00 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2118279221 Lexie Hughes https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2118340490 Plan:
1. Add correct in text citations throughout my essay
2. Revise my references page and align all items to the left of the page
3. Strengthen details in my paper by identifying important points 

Accomplishments:
1. I strengthened my essay by correcting my in text citations and using the correct APA format.
2. I corrected my reference page by aligning my text to the left side of the page
3. I strengthened my research by adding additional important information identifying key points of my topic specifically in my Purpose of US Education essay.
]]> 2022-03-29 01:51:33 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2118340490 Lexi Dunn dunnl201 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2118409421 Plan:
1. fix all of my grammar errors and citations for paper 1
2. Rewrite my second part to my paper and elaborate more depth in this paper
3.  I need to add more sources to back up my paper and connect the points more. 

Accomplishments: 
1. I redid one of my papers because it was just all screwed up
2. I put more depth into the entire paper and fixed all of my grammar issues 
3. added a lot more in text citations
3. 

]]> 2022-03-29 02:27:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2118409421 Madison Bruns https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2118487986 plan:
1. make sure all in text citations are done correctly and none are missing
2. strengthen the evidence in my writing for my reform
3. make my writing flow more smoothly so it is easier to read and follow along 
accomplishments:
1. looked over in text citations to make sure they were complete
2. looked into more sources to strengthen evidence
3. tried to flow all my paragraphs together ]]> 2022-03-29 03:19:00 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2118487986 Megan Connaughton connaughtonm20 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2118517609 Plan:
1. fix/add more in text citations from all of past projects. I struggle with those often. 
2. Fix how I organize my thoughts and where I put certain information so it doesn't seem random/in the wrong spots
3. research for better sources/sources that support my points better than the ones I have found so far 

accomplishments:
1. I have added a lot more in text citations/fixed some I already included 
2. I made sure that everything flows better and all of my information makes sense
3. I found a lot better sources to support my points]]> 2022-03-29 03:40:28 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2118517609 Nicholas Russell https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2119847035 Plan:
1: Correcting and properly emplementing in-text citations
2: Relating all assertions to evidense discovered through research.
3: Making sure my sources are as credable as possible

 Accomplishment:
I have gone back through my previously written subissions and corrected my in-text citations with special care to make sure that everything is properly cited to a  reliable source. ]]> 2022-03-29 17:22:50 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2119847035 Abigail Buffinton https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2120028203 Plan:
1. Fix and properly set up all the text citations and fix the reference page.
2. Fix the mistakes that you highlighted, I have a bad habit of just writing and submitting without a second thought.
3. Go through and reread, then fix whatever that needs to be fixed to sounds better than before.

Accomplishments:
1. Fixed all the in text citations. And made sure that the website or text is in the reference page. 
2. I fixed different sections of the paper, reworded and properly went into detail where it was missed.

]]> 2022-03-29 18:59:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2120028203 Caleb Benson https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2123914568 Plan:
1. Emplace transition sentences for fluid transitions between each topic covered in the final essay
2. Reallocate any writing that may be better placed in the equity section of the essay rather than its original placement
3. Increase the level of specificity on how my reform to physical education will cause an increase in equity in the education system as a whole]]> 2022-03-31 16:06:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2123914568 Caleb Benson https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2127464331 Accomplishments:
I have completed all of my transition sentences/paragraphs to make my essay one continuous work. I have also taken what was originally my last paragraph of my philosophy essay and made it the beginning of my equity portion.]]> 2022-04-03 19:52:39 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2127464331 Allyson Harkey allysonharkey077 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2127689614 Accomplishments: 
1. I went back in and fixed my in-text citations. 
2. I went back through and made sure everything flowed together. 
3. Went back and made sure everything had the appropriate sources and citations. 
4. I also went and made sure that everything was in the correct format. ]]> 2022-04-04 00:59:12 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2127689614 Lexi Alexander https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2127786360 Accomplishments: 
1. I Went into more depth and details in the body of the essay. 
2. I cited all in text citations 
3. I Incorporated facts and statistics to bad up my my argument]]> 2022-04-04 02:16:30 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2127786360 Crystal Barbour https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2127819600 Accomplishments:
1. I added more research to back up my arguments/viewpoints
2. I corrected any mistakes in citation formatting
3. I used headings to help the paper flow from section to section]]> 2022-04-04 02:42:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWSpring2022_3/wish/2127819600