- A GREAT NUMBER OF/ NUMEROUS students find it hard to secure employment after graduation.

3. CHÚ Ý KHI SỬ DỤNG UNDOUBTEDLY/ CERTAINLY CHO NHỮNG CÂU CHỈ QUAN ĐIỂM

- In my view, starting school at the age of five is (undoubtedly) better for students.

4. IDIOMS NÊN SỬ DỤNG TRONG SPEAKING HƠN LÀ WRITING

- It would be better for children to learn how to BE INDEPENDENT stand on their own feet from a young age.

5. TRONG WRITING HẠN CHẾ DÙNG WILL → ARE MORE LIKELY 

MAY/ MIGHT/ COULD/ CAN

- Certainly, diligent students ARE MORE LIKELY TO will succeed in their future careers.

6. HẠN CHẾ DÙNG NGÔI “YOU”

- It is important FOR EACH INDIVIDUAL to be diligent in THEIR work in order to achieve success in THEIR career.

7. PHÂN BIỆT TROUBLE (UNCOUNT) - DIFFICULTY - PROBLEM (COUNT) - ISSUE

-> Many students often FACE trouble / difficultIES in finding job opportunities after graduation.

8. CẤU TRÚC BE ASSOCIATED WITH 

ASSOCIATE WITH (V)

-> Cultivating multiple artistic proficiency in school IS associateD with a host of rewarding advantages.

9. USE APPROPRIATE QUANTIFIERS 

vast amount of students

10. FIND STH + ADJ 

11. PHÂN BIỆT CAREER/ JOB

A LARGE NUMBER of students find it troubleSOME/ CHALLENGING to seek JOBS/ SECURE CAREER after graduation

12. CẤU TRÚC IT IS + ADJ + (FOR SB) TO DO STH 

13. KHÔNG VIẾT TẮT TRONG WRITING 

- Studying arts in schools offers some beneficial creativity. → BENEFITS 

- It's various advantages to pursuing an artistic major. (RW)

--> IT IS BENEFICIAL/ ADVANTAGEOUS FOR STUDENTS TO PURSUE ART IN SCHOOL

14. DÙNG SAI SYNONYMS

CHĂM CHỈ : HARD-WORKING = ??? DILLIGENCE \

INDUSTRIOUSNESS

(N)HARD WORK

as·si·du·i·ty Assiduousness

PUPILS VÀ STUDENTS

15. USE NOUN PHRASE

- The role of harD work is vital for career success in one’s

KHÓ KHĂN : STRUGGLES, ADVERSITY (ADVERSE IMPACTS), HURDLES

LỢI ÍCH : POSITIVES, REWARDS, GAINS, UPSIDES

THÀNH PHỐ LỚN URBAN HUB

THÀNH CÔNG TRONG SỰ NGHIỆP: CAREER/ VOCATIONAL/ OCCUPATIONAL/ PROFESSIONAL TRIUMPH

TỰ LẬP

Khó khăn: difficulty (n), obstacle (a), trouble (n), HURDLE (N)

Lợi ích : benefit (n). upside (n), advantage (n)

Thành phố lớn: big city, large city, urban AREA center.

Thành công trong sự nghiệp : succeed in career, succesSful career.

Tự lập: independence, do sth on your own

• hard-working

• diligent

Khó khăn:

• difficult

• problematic

• trouble some

• denmanding

Lợi ích:

• benefit

• advantage

• gain

Thành phố lớn:

• big city

• large cuty

Thành công trong sự nghiệp:

• succes in career

• happiness in career

Tự lập:

• independence

• ability

• self-government

khó khăn: Difficulty, Challenge, Obstacle

Lợi ích: Benefit, Advantages, value

Thành phố lớn: urban city, metropolis, major city, large city.

Thành công trong sự nghiệp: Achievement, Accomplishment, success

Tự lập: independent, autonomous, self-sufficient.

khó khăn: Tough(adj), stiff (adj)

lợi ích : beneficial (adj) helpful(adj), profitable(adj), valuable(adj)

thành phố lớn: metropolis(n), urban(n)

thành công trong sự nghiệp:

tự lập: independent (adj), self-reliance(n),

It is not easy for young people to find a job in metropolitan. Because the lack of demand in the labour market and insufficient experience in the adolescent. In addition, the proliferation major in big cities has become the main reason which make job market become more competitive.

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(2 SUPPORTING SENTENCES)

LIMITED VACANCY/ POSITION

--> JOBLESS/

However, the lack of experiences and knowledge of young people can limit their job opportunities in urban bussiness.

Consequently, unemployed rates in metropolis would be more than before/ that creatE burden to the the society significantly

AFFOR

In big cities, EMPLOYERS TEND TO require people to have a lot of experience TO.... , so most young people are fresh out of school and don't have much experience, so finding a job is difficult.

CONSENQUENTLY

In big cities, EMPLOYERS TEND require NUMEROUS PRACTICAL experience AND KNOWLEDGE FROM PARCICIPANTS, so most young people WITHOUT FIRST-HAND SKILLS CAN NOT MEET ...... do not have much experience.

However, they can find another job but it may not be commensurate with their qualifications.

Furthermore, life in big cities is marked by a high standard of living , which often results in young people giving up easily when searching for jobs.

In addition, the competitive job requires young individuals to display unique skills and qualifications to acquire a job.

Moreover, the high cost of living adds layer of challenge. Consequently, they may struggle to afford expenses while job hunting.

Consequently, it is struggling to afford the cost of apartments and services in huge urban.

It is not easy for the young to secure jobs in urban hub because of the competitive market. Annually, a significant number of people from all ages incline to gather in the big cities, wishing to find a stable and fulfilling employment. As a result, this create an excess of staffs WHILE THE JOB MARKET ONLY HAS A limited NUMBER OF vacancy. Therefore, young adults are likely to be at risk of jobless if they travel to urban area to find jobs.

However, the lack of experiences and knowledge of young people can limit their job opportunities in THE JOB MARKET.

Consequently, unemployed rates in metropolis would INCREASE SIGNIFICANTLY, WHICH ULTIMATELY CREATE burden ON the the society

Furthermore, as the job market is BECOMING INCREASINGLY competitive, people WILL HAVE TO to show special skills and qualifications to get a job. THEREFORE, THIS CAN BE CHALLENGING FOR young people to stand out amidst the SKILLFUL/ EXPERIENCED CANDIDATES crowd.

Additionally, high living costs make job hunting even harder, as many young people struggle with expenses while looking for work.

1 Are you a happy person?

maintain positive outlook

moments of sadness and dissatisfaction

content with ...

2 What usually makes you happy?

3 What makes you feel unhappy?

4 Do you think people in your country are generally happy people?

Economic stability, access to health care and education

remote area/ underprivileged are

5 Can money make people happy?