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topic sentence Vinh

2023-12-23 10:29:42 UTC

The rise of online shopping has undeniably transformed the retail landscape, prompting discussions about the potential future impact on traditional brick-and-mortar stores. While some argue that this trend could eventually result in the closure of all shops in towns and cities, others maintain a contrasting viewpoint.

topic sentence - nhân đức

2023-12-23 10:30:57 UTC

In recent years, online shopping has become increasingly popular, leading to the concern that traditional brick-and-mortar shops will eventually disappear from towns and cities. While it is true that online shopping has many advantages and will be more prevalent in the future, I do not believe that it will lead to the extinction of physical stores.

topic sentence - Hân vũ

2023-12-23 10:31:17 UTC

Nowadays, there is no denying that the increase in online shopping can one day replace (word-choice) all shops in urban areas. From my view, I partly agree with this opinion because of the reasons below.

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topic sentence - Tri Hien

2023-12-23 10:31:40 UTC

i agree with this,because the world is going to develop of technology

To put this into perspective, the advancement of purchasing online will one day cause all shops in the certain towns and in urban areas. From my point of view, I partly agree with this perspective, and I will delve into both views in this essay.

2023-12-23 10:31:41 UTC

As a matter of fact, firstly I think the development of customer online will undoubtedly threaten the existence of local shops. As a result, residents can easily purchase other things on the Internet without stepping outside their homes, which results as the discount in sales of the stores in cities. For the another thing, I reckon that it is not that accessible to close the existence of local shops because there will still be residents who prefer shopping at these stores. Lhuy

topic sentence - hung

hunggaming279_ — 2023-12-23 10:32:46 UTC

As a person with some knowledge in business and product marketing, I do not agree with the idea that online shopping will lead...

According to my knowledge,
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Topic sentence - Dinh Linh

2023-12-23 10:33:06 UTC

In my opinion, I agree that all towns and cities will be closed and replaced by buying things online as this is getting popular among people

topic sentence - phlinh

2023-12-23 10:34:44 UTC

Individually, I partly agree that the widely spreading of purchasing something online trending will make result in total shops towns and streets closing. To explain this statement, I will give some reasons. On one hand, why I concur this? It due to the convinience of online stores. Actually, people do not have to go outside, they just stay home, surfing their phone to looking for many kind of things they need even with chipper cost. Otherwise, I do not entirely think that the popularity of website shops lead to the disapperence of local stores. As the old and some low-tech people still not adopt this online buying habit, they do not believe in quaility of online things.

Topic sentence - Bảo

2023-12-23 10:34:49 UTC

(5 mins) Recently, the number of people who purchase products and services online is increasing more than ever before. This has certainly affected the business of shopping centres to a great extent.

=> Recently, the number of people who purchase products and services online is increasing more than ever before, affecting the business of shopping centres to a great extent. However, I consider this development as positive, due to a number of reasons.

(10') (M1) To begin with, online shopping is considered to be more convenient for customers than in-store purchasing. Perhaps, this is because many people nowadays are unable to go shopping traditionally as they are too busy with their personal responsibilities. For example, virtual shopping websites such as eBay and Amazon provide a wide range of products online, which cater to the needs of individuals from the comfort of their home. (3 câu)

(10') (M2) Moreover, such shopping sites have considerably reduced major inconveniences associated with shopping. => For example, travelling to distant shops, parking vehicles in crowded cities may cause customers to spend a lot of time, resulting in them feeling exhausted. (3 câu)

(5') In conclusion, online shopping offers greater benefits to customers when compared to in-store purchasing. Therefore, I think this is definitely a positive trend and the popularity of online shopping is likely to continue.

Topic sentence - Hanh

2023-12-23 10:35:17 UTC

I disagree with the idea of online shopping causing the closure of physical stores in urban areas.

Topic sentence-Nguyen Thi Ha Linh

2023-12-23 10:36:17 UTC

considering the fact that, the boost in online shopping will bring about the closing of shops in urban areas. I definitely agree that this opinion because of the following reasons

supporting idea 1 and 2 (nhân đức)

2023-12-23 11:08:09 UTC

(1)One reason why I disagree with this idea is that many people still prefer to shop in person, and this trend will continue in the future. For instance, some individuals may want to try on clothes or see products in person before purchasing them. Moreover, shopping can also be a social activity, allowing people to spend time with friends or family while browsing the aisles of a store. While online shopping may be convenient, it cannot provide the same kind of experience as shopping in person.

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(2)Furthermore, there are some goods and services that simply cannot be provided online. For example, certain types of food, like fresh produce, are best bought in person to ensure quality and freshness. Additionally, some services, like haircuts or medical treatments, require physical presence and cannot be completed online. As such, there will always be a need for physical stores to provide these goods and services.

Han vu

2023-12-23 11:09:46 UTC

Many people follow the trend of online shopping. They like to buy products from the Internet rather than visiting a departmental store. The main reasons might be it is very convenient to buy from the comfort of their home and they can choose from a range of product Moreover , they can select between multiple alternative products on the basis of their liking and affordability.

However , traditional shops will not shut down completely. Shops are reliable and

people can choose products by their hand. For instance, people can purchase clothes by doing a trial and choosing fabric by their own hands so that they can buy the one which is comfortable, suits their body or is the best one

Vinh support idea 1 and 2

2023-12-23 11:11:54 UTC

(Agree): The rapid growth of online shopping has undeniably revolutionized the way consumers make purchases. With the convenience of ordering from the comfort of one's home and the vast array of products available at the click of a button, traditional brick-and-mortar shops in towns and cities face an unprecedented challenge. As online platforms continue to enhance their user experience, offering quick deliveries and competitive prices, there is a realistic concern that the physical presence of shops might diminish. The convenience, efficiency, and accessibility of online shopping may eventually lead to a significant decline in foot traffic to traditional stores, possibly resulting in the closure of many of them. This shift in consumer behavior is a testament to the transformative power of technology in shaping the future of retail.

(Disagree):

While online shopping has undoubtedly gained immense popularity, it would be premature to predict the complete closure of all shops in towns and cities. Traditional retail establishments offer a unique and irreplaceable shopping experience that online platforms cannot replicate. Many consumers still value the tactile aspect of shopping, the ability to physically inspect products before making a purchase, and the immediacy of taking items home. Furthermore, local shops often play a vital role in fostering a sense of community and providing personalized customer service. While online shopping may continue to thrive, the coexistence of both online and offline retail is likely to persist, with each catering to different consumer preferences and needs. The future may involve a harmonious blend of these two modes of shopping rather than the complete extinction of traditional stores.

supporting sentence Dinh Linh

2023-12-23 11:14:16 UTC

Firstly, the cost of most items is decreased in online stores. For example, when you want to buy a cheap hat, you can go online and buy that hat immediately. This is because people can buy things easily and don't have to go outside to buy them. Secondly, this helps some shops to sell their product. To demonstrate, shops can advertise their product by posting posts online and people can see it. I think the reason is that they don't want to spend money on advertising their product, which also takes a lot of time to do. In conclusion, I completely agree that shops will go away in the future and be replaced by cybershopping as this is becoming well-known by everyone.

Hanh

2023-12-23 11:15:55 UTC

(m1) Firstly, it is undeniable that the rise of online shopping will pose a threat to the survival of local businesses because of its convenience. In the digital age, people can effortlessly purchase anything they need through online. apps without the need to leave their homes. The level of convenience is particularly beneficial during unfavorable weather conditions like heavy snow or rain. As a result, we have observed a decline in the sales of brick and mortar stores in towns and cities.

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supporting sentences-Nguyen Thi Ha Linh

2023-12-23 11:18:29 UTC

Firstly, the increase of customers online will surely intimidate the existence of local shops. The reason is that people don't need to leave home and can still buy what they want easily, which leads to the discount in sales of the stores in towns. On the other hand, there are still citizen who prefer to go to stores to buy items in person rather than shop online. For example, people go to the store to choose the freshest vegetables

lehoangphuonguyen2001 — 2023-12-23 11:29:51 UTC

Agree: Shopping online => Closures of in-store shops

Convenient => at home
Discount => E.g: tiktok shop => coupon for customers, codes for discounting the price tag
save the cost of parking, gasoline, and transportation
Multiple choices => diverse items to pick from
Disagree:
shipping system is not popular or accessible to remote areas
responsibility: don't pay what they bought
wait for a long time to receive your package
chances you will lose your package on the way of delivery
inaccessible to the elderly.

Hanvu

2023-12-23 11:45:51 UTC

For the above reasons, I believe that online shopping can replace in-person shopping

ending part (nhân đức)

2023-12-23 11:46:46 UTC

In conclusion, while online shopping has become increasingly popular in recent years, I do not believe that it will lead to the closure of all traditional stores all over the country. There will always be a demand for physical shopping experiences, as well as for goods and services that cannot be provided online.

Vinh conclusion

2023-12-23 11:47:54 UTC

Conclusion for "Agree" Idea: In conclusion, the escalating dominance of online shopping has indeed posed a formidable challenge to the survival of traditional shops in towns and cities. The convenience, efficiency, and vast array of choices offered by online platforms have reshaped consumer habits, potentially paving the way for a future where many brick-and-mortar stores face closure. As technology continues to advance, the retail landscape is likely to undergo significant transformations. Businesses that adapt to the evolving dynamics of the industry, finding innovative ways to blend the advantages of both online and offline shopping, may secure their relevance in this ever-changing market.

Conclusion for "Disagree" Idea:

In summary, while online shopping has experienced remarkable growth, it is premature to anticipate the complete closure of traditional shops in towns and cities. The enduring appeal of in-person shopping experiences, the tactile engagement with products, and the sense of community fostered by local establishments contribute to the resilience of brick-and-mortar stores. The future of retail may involve a delicate balance, with both online and offline channels coexisting to cater to diverse consumer preferences. As the landscape evolves, businesses that can successfully integrate the strengths of each approach are likely to thrive in a retail environment that embraces the best of both worlds.

L.Huy

2023-12-23 11:47:56 UTC

In summary, I firmly believe that this phenomenon of shopping on the Internet is easy for the discount markers, and maybe in the future, online shopping will significantly become more and more popular and easily accessible to older people (the elderly).

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Hiẻn

2023-12-23 11:50:30 UTC

For the above reasons, I think (reckon, assume...) online shopping can't replace trực tiếp (in-store) shoping

Huang Phuc

phuctran2968 — 2023-12-23 11:53:51 UTC

Overall, online and online shopping both have their own conveniences. But online shopping can completely replace online shopping due to factors such as store rental, product variety and coupons.